How To Write Good Scripts // Gacha Life Tutorial
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- čas přidán 16. 05. 2020
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↠ If you're looking for some good tips (or are bored out of your mind and have nothing better to do) this is the video for you! I have written some scripts and will show you how I write them in this video!
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Want to read an entire GLMM script? Here's the script to "My Own Story"
docs.google.com/document/d/1r...
And here's the video to "My Own Story"
• My Own Story | GLM | [...
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❄️Time taken❄️
⏰ ↠ four days
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❄️Apps used❄️
↠ Gacha Life
↠ Kinemaster
↠ IbisPaintX
↠ Google Docs (I even scripted the video lol)
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If you have any questions or things you want to tell me, please tell me in the comments! As for now I hope you enjoyed the video. If you did, don't forget to like and subscribe. I wish you all a beautiful day and I will see you all in the next video!
☁️❄️Byeee❄️☁️ - Krátké a kreslené filmy
❄️ Welcome to the comments section ❄️
☁️Timestamps☁️
0:00 Intro
0:43 Programs
1:06 Set A and B
2:00 Locations
2:33 Dialogue
2:48 Watch me write
5:44 Style
6:17 Writing is Art
6:36 Outro
And oof, can we please just ignore how long I was talking about punctuation?? I know you all don't care about it at all, I'm just a HUGE grammar nerd - especially in English since learning a second language requires a lot of grammar studying. And yes, I will not shut up about it and I will never forget to mention it! English is my second language. Nobody cares, I know!
Haha, I enjoyed writing that way too much. Who knew commenting on your own videos was so relaxing?✨
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Yeah, people learn their first language differently. I'm horrible at german grammar😂💞
I can relate
_😔_
My first language was vietnamese, but now I don't know much vietnamese. I know alot of english tho 😅 (ik no-ones cares ;-;)
Hehe it’s alright English was my second language as well 😅
*_Wow, I’m featured an a famous Gacha Tuber’s tutorial!_*
Are you enjoying your time in the spotlight, Miss Fruitbowl?❤️🥝✨
@Ruiqi He same
Ur famous yourself u have over 1K
Wow so lucky:0
:O
Everyone: following the tutorial
Me: jamming in the background music
SAME, I NEED TO KNOW WHAT IT'S CALLED
@Who ?? Who knows, I'll try that 😂
I tried I can't find it, but thanks for the idea!
@DerpKawaii omg ty!
DerpKawaii THANK YOU SO MUCH SHGEHEJJSVEJSHSBE I HAVE BEEN LOKKING FOR THIS SINCE FOREVER SJEJAJDBDHR
*i, an intellectual, uses Microsoft word*
iiDinq me tooo!
・iBearrTzu・ Huh? What do you mean?
😌👌✨
@・Milkyy boo・ What do you mean?
・Milkyy boo・ I use my school membership lol
Although I’m in the middle of writing my script, I’ll still watch the video and use these tips 😏
It's a pleasure to maybe waste your time😏❤️🚽✨
Megsstuff
Ik you may not car,e but you are the first comment!! :3
s i l v i s h /slushie if it was me I would be so proud 😂 because I’m never early
Daydream :3 same lmao 😂
Ruiqi He oop-🤭
this was so relaxing to watch and i don’t know why
same
I write the scripts in my head-
(that's why my stories sucks-)
omg sAme
YES
same!
Lol I used to do that and now I write scripts
@@natalie6754 same
This is how l write a "script":Have a day dream about an original ldea and then go to gacha life and say...
Wait a sec what was it about again.
But thank you for the tips....to be honest l didn't know you had to write it first bc lm still a beginner 💞😅😑
All my best ideas come at night and in the shower
@@lovve_buzz Omg same!!!😂😂😂
omg mood
My ideas will pop out if I'm bored lol
You don’t have to write it it’s a good idea though
Friend: Do you know ElizaLotion
Me: *Is she selling lotion products.*
Umm.. Is that supposed to be a joke or a insult of her name?
@@ashley-zz8gb a *joke*
@@kushiiiarts..6614 oh OK 👍
Diba pilipino ka
lol
wait like i actually needed this
I’m about a week late but I have a tip-
When a character moves/does a specific action you should write the movement in _italics_ or *bold* (I use italics)
Example:
Person A: You’re so needy and pathetic. I’m way better than you.
Person B: And what do you have that I don’t?
Person A: Looks, Popularity, Parents who aren’t dead.
_Person B slaps Person A_
Person B: Don’t you DARE talk about my parents like that ever again.
(Sorry if it’s bad, it’s all I could think of -w-)
Oh.. I just write what they're doing
:
Person A ran towards person B, feeling exited. So much that they didn't realize that they were about to fall. Person A bump into person B, making person B Fall forward- head planted into the floor.
"Oops, sorry m8-" person A says, but interrupted by person B
"WHAT THE FREEECC" person B shouted.
Wait I sound cRiNgY-
ii_Ririya ._.G ur storyline is good but it might get confusing to understand the movements in ur plot
@@rairinirin I do like:
Person A started to run towards to Person B. When Person B realized,
Person B: Oh God what are you doing!
I know this looks messy but it is how I understand the plot better 🤷🏼♀️
@@dicrlcve1714 yea your right I should write like I'm not making a fanfic or something lmfao
*she moves to the left avoiding the hit*
I don’t have italic I used to
Me after just watching Hamilton and looking at the script she made in the desc:
WhY dO yoU tyPe LiKe yoUr rUnnIng oUttA tIme?!?
tYpE dAy aNd NiGht LikE i'M rUnNinG oUt oF TimE
Best Lotion brands ever.
Just saying, you should’ve said don’t write at night.
Personally, whenever I write a script at 3AM it turns out cringey and with bad grammar.
If I wrote it at 3PM it would make sense and have good grammar.
Then again, I commented this at 3AM.
Well I am opposite to you
I am good story writer at night
Silent Cookie
Okay
@@silentcookie3339 Same same
Well i have no motivation in morning and at night i magically have motivation
"Then again, I'm commenting this at 3AM" 🤣
Hamilton has done this to me. Whenever I hear the name Eliza, my brain just starts singing:
I know my sister like I know my own mind
You will never find anyone as trusting or as kind
And a million years ago she said to me 'this one's mine'
So I stood by
Do you know why?
I love my sister more than anything in this life
I will choose her happiness over mine every time
*ELIZAAAAA*
She's the best thing in our lives - So never lose sight of the fact that you have been blessed with the best wife!
@ElizaLotion
Congratulations
For the rest of your life
Every sacrifice you make is for my sister
Give her the best life
Congratulations
@ElizaLotion
Also, thank you so much for the heart! ♥️
I thought i was the only one xD
This is so helpful! You’re great at explaining, and this helped me with some ideas for my own mini movie! Thank you for all the tips, Eliza! Have a lovely day/night, and see you on the next post! 🌸🐝✨
I'm glad I could help! Thanks, Olive💞✨
Me, trying to sleep at three am: *gets a good idea*
_grabs phone to write idea_
*writes*
Me: right it looks good, perfect grammar!
Me at 10am the next day: huh? Tf did I write?
I've deleted atleast 5 whole GLMM's & still can't think of one. So I'm glad I found this 😌👑
"Try to avoid info dumps."
Me : *nervously sweating*
I love how your character’s facial expressions aren’t extra, you have great tips (these also apply to acting too, when making a script! I guess I know this because I’m a theatre kid.) I love your character design, you have great grammar, no bright colors, and overall, you’re a great Gachatuber. It’s very nice to see the community become way more mature! I might come back to the community. c:
Eliza: where does one write docs?
Me: oh- I just write them as I go...... is that not allowed.....?
same :(
You can! But it is definitely harder to come up with things on the spot and it can tend to get a little messy (in my experience)
@@Chrryc0la i can come up with a whole story line and plot on the spot qwq
Same
"Try to avoid infodumping"
Logan and Remus: *unfuse in background * Awww, dangit.
R.I.P
Remus' and logan's fusion chance
2021
@@fizzarats XD finally, someone understands :D
@@glitzicurities9075 :D
Finally a gacha tuber who writes scripts most gacha tubers just think of a story and the start taking screenshots right away this is excatly why you make the best stories! :)
I decided to write down all the tips in this video (took a while) and now i am going to use them when ever I will make a GLMM or a GLS. So, thank you so much these will help me so much!
I’m on my phone- I don’t have a computer to use for google docs (other than my school one) so I use the notes app qwq
Pages is also free to download and is easy to use if you have an iphone :)
@•Cherry Creamz• true
same
Same lol
@yukichi6746 it really doesn't matter... U can use the app in which ure comfortable with...
*when you’re that one person that doesn’t write a script and just make your video as you go and you end up watching this*
;-;
But then you don't end up using them 😂😅
I didn’t know someone so famous would take the time to be helpful thank you! 💖💖💖💖💖💖
This is in my tutorial playlist now. Its amazing, like I love literature too, and I completely understand how you simply can't stop the grammar lecture; even I, while writing stories, write a bit too much and not- needed content. So congratulations, my Arts teacher, you get a sub.
when i first saw the title I was like:
''gASp'' I nEEd tHiS''
Because I'm working on a GLMM r and I don't have any more ideas or what my oc has to say next oop-
btw, Thank you so much!
Oh my god same- that's literally the reason why most of my series were cancelled
ATS Gaming 😂
This was so helpful, as I’m about to start a new GLS
I usually just think of the theme of the video and just write whatever is on my mind (no script just instantly write on the speech bubble) then figure out what expression is best suited for the line, so I never really need these tips, but i enjoy watching how others plan their videos, and yours is probably the best ones i've seen so far, keep up the good work! -Sincerely, a fellow gachatuber :3
Wow I didnt know you had yo put this much detail into the scripts, I have just been thinking of scripts then using them! Thanks for the tips!!
I just thought of a coffee shop story but its in the middle of the night.
ElizaLotion: And It's good for phone users if you don't have a PC
Me: *you know that it's CANCER when you write a script on your phone*
But ... but we love pain in the Gacha community
I think that write a script on the phone is too much pain...
Finally, someone made a tutorial! Thank you so much. I struggle with making a series and I can't write great scripts because I've never done much.
Let's hope my series and GLMM's look better now! 😊😄💫✨
Thank you for this. These kind if original tutorials are very rare to find
Thanks for helping me with dis ;)
Other gacha tubers: *Having scripts*
Me: NaW nO sCrIpT sAlLy I jUsT gO oFf a wIm aNd cHoOsE wHaT tHeY gOnNa sAy aS tHe sCeNe iS hApPeNiNg
And that's how Hated Child Becomes a princess was born :>
(but honestly relatable)
Found your channel yesterday night and watched "My Own Story" and loved it! I really hope you gain more subs!
I have been looking for a video like this for months!! It was super helpful and exactly what I was looking for! :D
I have a really original glmm idea ;w; im working on it rn and i hope it will go viral
I'm sure it will! Hard work pays off❤️
@@elizalotion2783 uwu ty
oo ill watch it when it comes out!! :D
•pink lilac• it came out now xd
@@rrrgsd1 TIEM TO WATCHHH
I, the biggest noob, use notes. ah yes, n o t e s.
"Sunny's Stuff" 🤣
same for me its the most easiest
I'm really glad someone made on of these
Aaaaaa I remember watching this a few months back, from where I was starting my first GCMM and I must say, I’m not sure if it could’ve been any better without watching this video. SCRIPTS ARE VERY IMPORTANT
**sending this to my friend writing a script for me on repeat**
you probably won’t see this, but how many words is a script of yours for an over 20 minute glmm/gcmm?
I did read this, but I have no idea ... depends on how many flashbacks I include
Yay! I’ve been waiting for this!
Can we just talk about how PERFECT your grammar is
Like, seriously I don't think i've ever seen a gachatuber with this perfect grammar
Is this a good story?:
Mean Hybrid Aliens
Nerdy Babysitter DINO SARA TENKO is arguing with Weird Life Guard HOTTY JASON DANTé. SARA tries to hug JASON but he shakes her off.
SARA
Please Jason, don't leave me.
JASON
I'm sorry Sara, but I'm looking for somebody a bit more brave. Somebody who faces her fears head on, instead of running away.
SARA
I am such a person!
JASON frowns.
JASON
I'm sorry, Sara. I just don't feel excited by this relationship anymore.
JASON leaves.
SARA sits down, looking defeated.
Moments later, Cute Librarian CAT SKYE PANERA barges in looking flustered.
SARA
Goodness, Skye! Is everything okay?
SKYE
I'm afraid not.
SARA
What is it? Don't keep me in suspense...
SKYE
It's ... a Hybrid Alien ... I saw an evil Hybrid Alien Hypnotize a bunch of Nurses!
SARA
Defenseless Nurses?
SKYE
Yes, defenseless Nurses!
SARA
Bloomin' heck, Skye! We've got to do something.
SKYE
I agree, but I wouldn't know where to start.
SARA
You can start by telling me where this happened.
SKYE
I was...
SKYE fans herself and begins to wheeze.
SARA
Focus Skye, focus! Where did it happen?
SKYE
LA! That's right - LA!
SARA springs up and begins to run.
SARA rushes along the street, followed by SKYE. They take a short cut through some back gardens, jumping fences along the way.
SARA, closely followed by SKYE, rushes towards PETER, but suddenly stops in her tracks.
SKYE
What is it? What's the matter?
SARA
That's not just any old Hybrid Alien, that's Peter Stevenson!
SKYE
Who's Peter Stevenson?
SARA
Who's Peter Stevenson? Who's Peter Stevenson? Only the most Mean Hybrid Aliens in the universe!
SKYE
Blinkin' knickers, Sara! We're going to need some help if we're going to stop the most Mean Hybrid Aliens in the universe!
SARA
I'm going to need a Gun, lots of Guns.
Peter turns and sees Sara and Skye. He grins an evil grin.
PETER
Sara Tenko, we meet again.
SKYE
You've met?
SARA
Yes. It was a long, long time ago...
BACK IN TIME
A young SARA is sitting in a park listening to some Pop music, when suddenly a dark shadow casts over her.
She looks up and sees PETER. She takes off her headphones.
PETER
Would you like some Fruit Roll Ups?
SARA
I don't know, you look kind of Mean.
PETER
Me? No. I'm not Mean. I'm the least Mean Hybrid Alien in the world!
SARA
Wait, you're a Hybrid Alien?
SARA runs away, screaming.
PRESENT DAY
PETER
You were a coward then, and you are a coward now.
SKYE
(To SARA) You ran away?
SARA
(To SKYE) I was a young child. What was I supposed to do?
SARA turns to PETER.
SARA
I may have run away from you then, but I won't run away this time!
SARA runs away.
She turns back and shouts.
SARA
I mean, I am running away, but I'll be back - with a Gun.
PETER
I'm not scared of you.
SARA
You should be.
LATER THAT DAY
SARA
I feel sure I left my Gun somewhere around here.
SKYE
Are you sure? It does seem like an odd place to keep deadly Guns..
SARA
You know nothing Skye Panera.
SKYE
We've been searching for ages. I really don't think they're here.
Suddenly, PETER appears, holding a pair of Guns.
PETER
Looking for something?
SKYE
Crikey, Sara, he's got your Guns!
SARA
Tell me something I don't already know!
SKYE
The earth's circumference at the equator is about 40,075 km.
SARA
I know that already!
SKYE
You’re afraid of your powers.
PETER
(appalled) Dude!
While PETER is looking at SKYE with disgust, SARA lunges forward and grabs her deadly Gun. She wields them, triumphantly.
SARA
Prepare to die, you Mean Celery!
PETER
No please! All I did was Hypnotize a bunch of Nurses!
JASON enters, unseen by any of the others.
SARA
I cannot tolerate that kind of behaviour! Those Nurses were defenceless! Well now they have a defender - and that's me! Sara Tenko defender of innocent Nurses.
PETER
Don't hurt me! Please!
SARA
Give me one good reason why I shouldn't use these Gun on you right away!
PETER
Because Sara, I am your father.
SARA looks stunned for a few moments, but then collects herself.
SARA
No you're not!
PETER
Ah well, it had to be worth a try.
PETER tries to grab the Gun but SARA dodges out of the way.
SARA
Who's the daddy now? Huh? Huh?
SKYE
Did he just faint?
SARA
I think so. Well that's disappointing. I was rather hoping for a more dramatic conclusion, involving my deadly Gun.
SARA crouches over PETER's body.
SKYE
Be careful, Sara. It could be a trick.
SARA
No, it's not a trick. It appears that... It would seem... Peter Stevenson is dead!
SARA
What?
SARA
Yes, it appears that I scared him to death.
SKYE claps her hands.
SKYE
So your Gun did save the day, after all.
JASON
Is it true? Did you kill the Hybrid Alien?
SARA
Jason how long have you been here...?
JASON
Long enough.
SARA
Then you saw it for yourself. I killed Peter Stevenson.
JASON
Then the Nurses are safe?
SARA
It does seem that way!
A crowd of vulnerable Nurses enter, looking relived.
JASON
You are their hero.
The Nurses bow to SARA.
SARA
There is no need to bow to me. I seek no worship. The knowledge that Peter Stevenson will never Hypnotize Nurses ever again, is enough for me.
JASON
You are humble as well as brave!
One of the Nurses passes SARA a Possessed Jewel
JASON
I think they want you to have it, as a symbol of their gratitude.
SARA
I couldn't possibly.. well, if you insist..!
SARA takes the Jewel.
SARA
Thank you.
The Nurses bow their heads once more, and leave.
SARA
Does this mean you want me back?
JASON
Oh, Sara, of course I want you back!
SARA
Well you can't have me.
JASON
WHAT?
SARA
You had no faith in me. You had to see my scare a Hybrid Aliens to death before you would believe in me. I don't want a boyfriend like that.
JASON
But...
SARA
Please leave. I want to spend time with the one person who stayed with me through thick and thin - my best friend, Skye.
JASON
But...
SKYE
You heard the lady. Now be off with you. Skidaddle! Shoo!
JASON
Sara?
SARA
I'm sorry Jason, but I think you should skidaddle.
SKYE
Did you mean that? You know ... that I'm your best friend?
SARA
Of course you are!
SKYE
By the way, When I said You’re afraid of your powers, you know I was just trying to distract the Hybrid Alien don't you?
THE END
That is *beautiful*
is notes on your phone good for this?
You can use them, but other than google docs or word, notes wasn't made for longer texts. Nothing can stop you from doing what you want though✨
thank you!
it also helps to color code them! for each character, choose a color. it helps organize everything and also adds a bit more color into your script!
The amount of detail you put into it made it easier for me to understand! Thank you!;)
OMG thank ALOT
Btw im just a beginner in gacha
Is it just me or I’m to lazy to write the script? Eeee ;-;
This really helps me a lot. I was planning to do a glmm and i somehow saw this. So i watch it it really helps me a lot ! Its so helpful for gachatuber's like me. Im so thankful you made a tutorial about it. I really appreciate it!
I could've sworn I asked you to make a tutorial on how to make scripts..
Tysm for this! I really needed this
Wow! Thank you, I’ve been looking for a video on tips for writing a script, for a while now. This really helps!
So my older gacha videos i’d write long long scripts with many pointless scenes so this helps quite a lot! Since I’m trying to improve with a series that I’m planning atm and gonna write the script for once the characters are all set!
im watching every how to write a good script so i can get better at them 🤩 plus sometimes my school just gives me homework to write a script or a story and i always need help with those
'writing is an art' woah well said it rlly changed my mind 🎨
Though I have a school computer and I'm subbed there, I still watch this video MILLIONS of times to get my movies right. I had to cancel one because of how KineMaster was lagging and deleting my screenshots on my video project. And I finally gave up and started working on more videos, BUT I am still working on the script! Thanks for making this clear with examples.
I remember a few months ago when I read the script in the desc, and it's always been on docs for me cuz I just never delete it! Watching this like 4 months later I think realizing I finally found the creator!
Just read your script, it's amazing!!!
Thank you for this video! I already know how to write scripts, but this is helpful since I get to learn even more things about writing scripts and to improve them!
As a writer, I often turn my short stories into extended mini movies. It helps me finish my story, and also gives me a glmm idea! :D
Omg, this was so helpful! Me as a writer will find this tutorial really helpful. Thank you SO MUCH! Love you!
You are my new writing teacher
Thank you so much for the tips!
This was the most helpful video on tips and scripts yet!
I actually thought that gacha tubers didn't write any scripts or any scenes,then I thought that wouldn't make sense and right when I was thinking about it,I found about you!I want to be a gacha tuber,and by watching some videos with tips I want to make sure my videos ain't that cringe or embarrassing.... you're sooooo great,nice vid!❤️
I love how you described the situation on how to do this and how to do that it was flawless 😌😌😌❤️
I read the script for "My Own Story" and it was really amazing! The story is great and you can see all the thought and effort that was put into it. :)
You don’t know how long I’ve waited for someone to make a video on this topic lmao
THIS GACHATUBER DESERVES MORE SUBS! THX FOR THE ADVICE! IT REALLY HELPED ME!!!
(I watched till the end)
At first i didn't understand but when you wrote it yourself that made me understand you're so clever and creative thank you!!❤️
The way you type is really satisfying to watch I don't know why though
Finally, some is talking about the scrips behind the glm’s!
I was just thinking about doing a glmm and then I was like. Wait. I have no idea how to write a script. THIS WAS PERFECT. THANK YOU
This is a real great tutorial on how to start your own story.I've been having troubling writing a story but after watching your video,I kind about some inspiration.Thank you✨♥️
i was going to give up on the story i was writing but this gave me more motivation thank you so much^^
you're super good at writing!
This was extremely helpful and I think you should make a part two with a few more tips! Thank you for the help and info.
So glad this popped up in my recomended :D its really helpful since im planning to make a mini movie when summer break starts!
I- think I died a little when I saw your doc 🥺 you put so much work into that. you are now my idol!! 😭❤️❤️
Dude this is so helpful I didn’t use it for a glmm or Gcmm I used it for my comic this is so helpful outside of the Gacha community
This is perfect for the series that I am redoing for my channel. Thanks for the advice!!
Im making a series, and this really help me. Its easy to understand than any other tutorial and thank you so much for making these!😊
Omg TYSM this is going to help so much I’m trying to make a series right now and I need to write a script and I didn’t know where to start until now thank you again 💖✨💫 your a life saver 😊💖✨💫
Yes!!!! I'm not the only one that uses google docs for writing. I use it because of autosave and if I have more ideas for stories and plots; I can continue to write if I'm not near my computer. (I have it on my phone too.)
This helped me so much, I am currently making a gcmm and I was just confused on what to do, thank you so much for this video!!
Congrats on your channel I hope you get even bigger and I would like and comment more but I've been so busy so good luck!❤️
Tysm for making this video! :D I'm thinking of making a series and I need as many tips as I can get because I need to write a really good script 😂💕👏🏻
oh gosh... THANK YOU SO MUCH! I'm making a voice acted series and this helped so much! I've improved writing my script and it looked and sounded better than before♡
Thanks! I am working on different parts of a story, it has to do with horror, and ofc horror has a problem and solution! :D
I just created my CZcams account recently and have been planning my GLMM for 3 days. All I finished was the main characters' looks, a rough idea of what will happen, and my intro. *Then I see the time it took for you to write the script for "My Own Story"* 4 DAYS!!! WHAT?!
The tutorial was so useful. I’m writing a mini movie so I needed this. Thank you so much!
Wow that was really helpful! Thanks a bunch. This whole time I've been thinking of stories but I don't even know how to script them. Now I can finally get serious into my story and script it! Once again, thank you. ^w^
I am very inspired by your wonderful tips, and I feel like writing a script out right now! 😊
Thanks for this video!I was searching videos like this last week but gave cuz I couldn't find one... I'm glad to see this pop up in my recommendations 😊
Oml, you are my SAVIOR! I'm only good at writing scripts when it comes to school so thank you sO much!