This Essay Technique Got me Firsts at Cambridge (How I make Sentences SOUND GREAT)

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Something we all struggle with is making our sentences sound good. When we read it back, it has all the right information but just sounds a bit meh. But don’t worry, in the next 5 minutes I’m going to take you from:
"I think memory is not just one thing but is made up two different things: explicit and implicit memory."
To:
"It is the belief of the author that memory is not a unitary function and can be parsed into two distinct components: explicit and implicit memory."
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[@theuser7472]

Unlike cliche and unfeasible ideas about essays, this was succinct, concise, and to the point. Great video. Cheers.

[@DoctorShaene]

Glad it helped!

[@jonathanthorn486]

LOL I was just about to rewatch your previous essay video, perfect timing tysm!

[@ganeshmistry4458]

The legend has returned

[@trinityw3964]

It’s crazy how you just made one of the best engaging essay vids on CZcams and it’s onky 5 minutes

[@DoctorShaene]

I'm glad it was useful!

[@HeyQuinton]

Great stuff dude. Hope the course does well!

[@DoctorShaene]

Thank you!

[@devodedra1117]

Amazing....thank you

[@angelkaye1982]

Hi Doctor Shaene! Can u make a video on preparing for, and answering/taking graduate school comprehensive exams? Thanks!

[@amiram1256]

Thank you so much

[@DoctorShaene]

You're welcome! 😁

[@goodbrian9694]

Doctor Shaene, in this video you mentioned how writing scientific essays you should write with flair and creativity (to a limit), but my supervisor at Biomedical school is telling me that writing scientific essays must be “robotic” and you should write simple. Idk who to listen to and I really want to get a first (first time) as I am planning on doing a transition program to dentistry. Would you say this technique applys to and aids in scientific essay writing?

[@raveenamurali]

Hey, I’m
Planning to buy the MasterClass. All the lessons are videos right ? Please respond

[@DoctorShaene]

Awesome to hear! Hope you find them useful! There are 31 video lessons in total! :) Some of the other resources are written and graded essays which are files.

[@NinthJewel]

Can I complete one lesson from the master class? 😊

[@Hybrid-f3z]

Hmmm... I wonder where you went for uni. Also, nice vid