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  • čas přidán 17. 03. 2024
  • The Eternal Kingdom learns an important lesson about Humans, or, why the method of creating Cataphracts has dire strategic implications...
    ➛ This story was granted permission to narrate and add to CZcams by the Author u/SFFWritingAlt
    Story Link: / the_eternal_kingdom_le...
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Komentáře • 77

  • @TheLunacyofOurTimes
    @TheLunacyofOurTimes Před 2 měsíci +22

    Finally. A reasonably coherent and good story. So much trash these days.

    • @ymmijx6061
      @ymmijx6061 Před 2 měsíci +3

      eh? it's pretty sci-fantasy

    • @CryptidsRoost
      @CryptidsRoost Před 20 dny

      That's because unless an author is listed, then the majority (not all) of them have been written by AI, usually ChatGPT. Giveaways are usually way too many plot holes, sections being repeated and many of the AI/TTS voiceover channels do this and they tend to be bone idol and not edit to the audio to remove the repeated sections. Some sections get repeated because they have asked ChatGPT to expand/give more detail in certain sections.
      I have found by reading many video comments that a lot of folks are not only getting pissed off with the voiceovers as many necessary inflections etc and not done by AI/TTS but the stories being written by AI too. They are either threatening to unsubscribe or have already done so. So unless these channels take note, they will not only lose subs but they could lose monetization as they will drop below the threshold for subscribers and total yearly watched hours.
      This is why I have started my own sci-fi narration channel and it will not be AI voices but the stories are written by actual authors too. This account is a horror/creepypasta narration channel. My new one is @InterstellarSciFiTales and the first few videos will be going live in the next few days.

  • @blogusvox
    @blogusvox Před 3 měsíci +24

    "How desperate do you think we are now?"
    It only meant one thing, a new project was started, different but better than the previous one; Cataphract 2.0

  • @luckyrobinshomestead
    @luckyrobinshomestead Před 3 měsíci +13

    I love one liner endings like this. What an excellent story.

    • @puffyclouds1485
      @puffyclouds1485 Před 11 dny

      “The ones who run” is a really good one liner ending. Literally gave me chills

  • @npierce14
    @npierce14 Před 3 měsíci +15

    Shocked she was barefoot? Must have been the first time they met a white person from the south

  • @azurepulse1870
    @azurepulse1870 Před 3 měsíci +10

    Halo spartan program meets Gundam/ultraman

    • @jonnypena7651
      @jonnypena7651 Před 2 měsíci +3

      Evangelion program, the mech were biological

  • @Terran.Marine.2
    @Terran.Marine.2 Před 3 měsíci +10

    Somewhat reminds me of "Interview with a Vampire".

  • @jasonhunter3429
    @jasonhunter3429 Před 3 měsíci +10

    ooooh, it was a slow burn, but got there in the end!

  • @geofthompson3844
    @geofthompson3844 Před 24 dny

    For the first half of this story I was so confused. I was close to skipping out. But then, it just grabbed hold of me and by the end I was totally invested. This is definitely one of the best stories so far. Well done 👏 😊

  • @Anh-qs5xz
    @Anh-qs5xz Před 3 měsíci +6

    Great story ❤️ for the story and ❤️ for the narration

  • @brookhouse3041
    @brookhouse3041 Před 2 měsíci +4

    Jeez the author really put this out there 😂

  • @user-zy9vm4tc6m
    @user-zy9vm4tc6m Před 3 měsíci +4

    I love this story ❤ very good story

  • @TheMishMosh
    @TheMishMosh Před 3 měsíci +13

    Only thing I know, they are fucked.

  • @MacCoy
    @MacCoy Před 3 měsíci +6

    they got cataphrucked.

  • @Kappa760
    @Kappa760 Před 3 měsíci +8

    This is good one ❤ i like it

  • @mechanicalbow
    @mechanicalbow Před 3 měsíci +2

    Good story

  • @Oanh250
    @Oanh250 Před 3 měsíci +2

    Very good

  • @Noah-zf6nf
    @Noah-zf6nf Před 3 měsíci +8

    First 👌🏾
    A very good story .
    I like it .

  • @mothmagic1
    @mothmagic1 Před 3 měsíci +7

    This is a good one

    • @IceFiction404
      @IceFiction404  Před 3 měsíci

      Thank you !

    • @17mindgate
      @17mindgate Před 2 měsíci

      ​@IceFiction404 Quick question, are cataphracts the equivalent of... Spartans (Halo series)... Superman... or the Battleship supersoldiers (Uber series).

  • @jrobertw1970
    @jrobertw1970 Před měsícem

    Ok I really enjoyed this one !!!!
    Please say that is something else by this author ?!?!?!

  • @mehere8-32
    @mehere8-32 Před 3 měsíci +6

    I enjoyed that. A curiosity Question, was it written by a person or an AI(zero intelligence)? cheers.

    • @IceFiction404
      @IceFiction404  Před 3 měsíci +5

      This is the writer from reddit

    • @mehere8-32
      @mehere8-32 Před 3 měsíci +3

      Thank you. Cheers@@IceFiction404

  • @THEFRISKIESTDINGO
    @THEFRISKIESTDINGO Před 2 měsíci +1

    Pre-Historic Man: Spear! Poke poke!
    Medieval Man: Smol spear, nock it in the bow, throw spear far.
    Modern Man: Even more smol spear, put them in the magazine, throw hundreds of tiny spears a minute.
    Future Man: Spear! IN SPACE! Poke poke!

  • @stephenstonge7968
    @stephenstonge7968 Před 2 měsíci +1

    27:21 They feed him tubas? 😂

  • @oshavlfarms7239
    @oshavlfarms7239 Před 2 měsíci +2

    Yay commercials ever 4 minutes

  • @Jordy120
    @Jordy120 Před 3 měsíci +13

    Barefoot? That could only mean one thing...

  • @royporio634
    @royporio634 Před 2 měsíci +1

    Is there a part 2?

  • @CarlosSantos-kv9ip
    @CarlosSantos-kv9ip Před 2 měsíci +2

    What was the point of the story to show how grateful people can be? This is like being upset with American GIs, because they left a mess at Normandy after D-Day.

  • @brucerawlinson5839
    @brucerawlinson5839 Před 3 měsíci +6

    Teach your AI to pronounce words FFS

    • @alanjohnson2613
      @alanjohnson2613 Před 2 měsíci +1

      Why do you call a simple text to speech program AI

  • @AenesidemusOZ
    @AenesidemusOZ Před 2 měsíci +2

    It's an intense story, but it is ruined by the TTS. The lack of human inflection ruins it. The TTS used is pretty good, but not that good.

    • @IceFiction404
      @IceFiction404  Před 2 měsíci +1

      I'm sorry....

    • @AenesidemusOZ
      @AenesidemusOZ Před 2 měsíci

      @@IceFiction404 Nothing to be sorry for! It's a good story. This is just one that I (me, personally) would prefer a human to read. Quite often, modern TTS voices are fine for short stories.

  • @josephhoward2971
    @josephhoward2971 Před 3 měsíci +2

    Do you feel lucky, punk?
    Do you?
    ....

  • @alonghorns
    @alonghorns Před 3 měsíci +3

    great story and no part or idea was repeated. (thank you for that, not a waste of my time) because your story was so well told i subscribed. but i will unsubscribe if you start to waste my time with repeated lines or ideas

  • @varus113
    @varus113 Před 2 měsíci +1

    God in space🙄

  • @edwardroche2480
    @edwardroche2480 Před 2 měsíci

    210 mini commercials and two damn much confusion in the story

  • @Helliconia54
    @Helliconia54 Před 2 měsíci +2

    great story, shitty AI

  • @SGC511
    @SGC511 Před 2 měsíci +1

    I liked the girl instantly lol.

  • @ozymandias5257
    @ozymandias5257 Před 3 měsíci +3

    AI voice makes some pretty bad pronunciations.

  • @RansomMemoryAccess
    @RansomMemoryAccess Před 2 měsíci +2

    Lost me from the onset. The human is described how a human would describe another human, not how an alien would.

  • @brian-my7ym
    @brian-my7ym Před 2 měsíci

    Okay, the story was good but the robo read is a mess. If you are going to use robo Reed, you have to use phonetics

  • @UnitedArmsOrganization
    @UnitedArmsOrganization Před 2 měsíci +3

    I grew up with American Men. “Bikers” I would like to see American people as one people again, not a (fill in the blank) America
    American is One people One Country. How do we bring it back?
    Sci-fi people are usually among the brightest most intelligent people and the most ignored.
    I am just an old Fu#king biker who Loves his Country. Maybe some one is smarter than our politicians and has an answer.

  • @TheDurid1
    @TheDurid1 Před měsícem

    Why are you saying things like die-ed, happen-ed and other weird pronunciation? This doesn't sound like an AI.

  • @TheRealTimeline
    @TheRealTimeline Před 3 měsíci +4

    My god, this story is a rambling mess

    • @phofire77
      @phofire77 Před 2 měsíci +1

      I don't think it's that bad but the reading has been better in other sources.

  • @thomaswakefield6889
    @thomaswakefield6889 Před 3 měsíci +2

    Geezus, my 5 year old daughter, can write a better sci-fi story than this garbage AI narrated blunder.

    • @jasonhunter3429
      @jasonhunter3429 Před 3 měsíci +8

      have her write it and post the link, this was pretty good, so look forward to it

    • @thomaswakefield6889
      @thomaswakefield6889 Před 3 měsíci

      @jasonhunter3429 lmfao, this was good? You must be illiterate? Any moron who is too lazy to narrate a story with their own voice shouldn't be posting content and getting paid. With that said, anyone who uses AI to write a story with no clear outline distinction shouldn't be posting anything on social media. The fact that this story repeats things multiple times should tell people how badly written this is. Shitty pronunciations, changing AI voices multiple times while in the middle of pronouncing or mispronouncing a single word. Yea, you're illiterate

    • @Dave_of_Mordor
      @Dave_of_Mordor Před 3 měsíci +2

      This was written by a person on Reddit. I can't even take your opinion seriously just because you thought an AI wrote this therefore it is bad. What a terrible way to judge something

    • @thomaswakefield6889
      @thomaswakefield6889 Před 3 měsíci

      @@Dave_of_Mordor if you're that stupid that you can't tell the difference between a real writer telling a story and a fucking computer written story, then you need to go back to school. A 10 year old child can write a better story than some clown wanna be writer using an AI robot

    • @thomaswakefield6889
      @thomaswakefield6889 Před 3 měsíci

      @Dave_of_Mordor oh and just to inform you, that if you actually did some research, nearly 85% of stories on reddit were done using an AI story writing platform.

  • @thermal84
    @thermal84 Před 3 měsíci +1

    boring