This Simple Trick will Improve your Comedy Writing | The Joke Doctor on Hot Breath! Comedy Network
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Jerry "Joke Doctor" Corley has written for everyone from Chris Rock to Jay Leno and Bill Hicks. What started as a normal interview grew into a two hour comedy writing masterclass. This episode captures the creative process behind writing in detail we've never heard before. Don't keep these tips a secret. Go forth and share this episode with your fellow comedians!
Jerry Corley shares The Secret to Writing Better Jokes FASTER
The Joke Doctor says that the fundamentals of all Stories are based on one or two liner jokes and funny one liners can help you build a great story. He shares how Bill Burr uses Analogy to build his entire act.
In this video, learn to Master the Art of Writing Funny Stories for Stand Up with The Joke Doctor.
Watch the video till the end to learn more about writing funny comedy scripts for stand up.
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I study comedy, casually on youtube, and have never ever heard such a detailed analytical process for creating comedy. As an engineer, it's appealing.
I watch this guy's videos all the time. I use the tips in my stand ups. Thanks for the great interview.
I’ve read some books on comedy writing and heard some people talk about it, but I don’t think I’ve ever heard such intelligent theoretical analysis
This video is a gold mine. Even though it is very brief it is so very jam packed with good material; even more so than some of the other vids with Jerry that are much longer. Thanks a million.
This is the best episode ever on Hot Breathe!!!!
Oh wow thanks Kannon! It's a winner for sure.
COMEDY IS LIFE!!! 🎤🥳🎤
This is my fave advice from Jerry. Really changed how I approach comedic storytelling.
We agree Onicia. This entire interview has helped our comedy!
SO GOLD
CZcams won’t let me continue to post that: COMEDY IS LIFE!!! 🎤🥳🎤
Much needed
Killing it Joel! Keep doing your thing brother. Hope all is well.
Thanks Carlos! We just did a new Q&A with Jerry in our Facebook group. He's a guru!
Great
Thx for the advises
You're welcome! Are you a comedian?
Punwords wordplay punchline oneliner doublemeaning
I feel like the most useful here (besides a punch line cause that’s an essential) is doublemeaning cause you can bring the unexpected
Watch the full interview here: bit.ly/JokeDoctorPodcast
I write poetry and this actually helped me a lot
Oh that is amazing to hear! How are you applying this knowledge?
@@HotBreathPod now when I editing, I can see all of the unnecessary verbage. Since I've taken the extra words out I've noticed that my audience reaction increase. Now I only keep words and phrases that directly display the concept of the poem. My performance is now more potent
@@nickjonesthenova5928 Perfect! Yeah word economy is so important. Is your poetry on CZcams. I'd love to check It out.
@@HotBreathPod For sure, and even more on my page instagram page. Nick Jones The Nova. I would appreciate that
@@nickjonesthenova5928 Sweet!
I had a stupid story telling bit about I knew an opener for me that took a thc weed edible before getting on stage. And he was having a panic attack and was scared that the audience were his friends staring at him coming to collect money he owed and the spotlight was police up in the rafters wanting to arrest him. But the premise was the audience would think he was pretending and it was all part of his act the way he was freaking out and would keep applauding him through his terrible high expeirence.
When is he going to say his smart phone is smarter than his wife 🤔wacka wacka Kermit
Hi. What are tags and toppers?
So, how does one get started in comedy when you've never done it? I've literally been writing jokes for about a month.
A great place to start is our free facebook group Desmond. We do a daily joke writing contest. facebook.com/groups/HotBreathComedyNetwork/
Find an open mic near you, rewrite your jokes to be funny as possible, and get up there brother
Just gotta get up and GO! Take a sip of your favorite drink. Give yourself some slaps and let that shit fly.
Forget that open mic shit...take hostages at a movie theatre, and facebook live your best five minutes, before
you go live tell the hostages to clap and cheer like their lives depend on it. "Either I kill....or I KILL" big laughs! :D
Saludos desde Arequipa - Peru!
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Thanks for the information!
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@@josesalomon2694 Awesome great to connect with you!
"One time my wife met me at the door with a negligee on, OH BOY! The only problem was, she was comin home."
Classic misdirection by the king of set ups.
Sounds like a joke the guy with no respect would make
Men were in trouble when Jeffrey Dahmer uttered those three words......"Here taste this"
No stand up comedian is funny but its the audience who makes the stand up comedian as a comedian.
That's an interesting take.
$5/gallon
So I could make a joke about my pregnant wife like - she tells me she wants an abortion but I tell her there’s a hanger shortage ? Maybe not as clever as the gas joke but I’m new at this 🤷🏼♂️
Pick your target word in your setup. In this case you have chosen "abortion". Now write out all the different meanings, interpretation of abortion as a word and as a situation.
In this case you chose abortion "the home remedy way"
I think this works technically but the audience won't buy it because a "hanger shortage" is not a thing.
Write out 10 more interpretations and see if you can find something that is a little but more true.
Remember for exaggeration "Bend, don't break""
That's actually quite funny, but the comedy word is 'hanger'. I would put 'hanger' at the end. Eg, "...but I tell her she can't - there's a shortage of coat hangers". But you could add a bit about getting some more socks and waiting until one of them turns into a coat hanger.
@@herseem great point
Very Kermit-the-frog hack, but I like it.
@@HotBreathPod Yeah, like hanger as in "coat hanger" or hanger as in "airplane hanger". Never heard of a shortage of either one.
Why is he doing the “White Power” sign in the thumbnail?
Because it's more commonly known as "Ok", or a positive symbol.
This is the least funny video on CZcams