Common Mistakes Writers Make With Characters - Robert Rippberger

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    Directing and producing documentaries, Robert released in 2019 'Public Enemy Number One' from Executive Producer Ice-T about the U.S. war on drugs. Prior, Robert directed/produced the documentary "7 Days in Syria," a look at the human side of the war in Aleppo, Syria. The film was championed by Angelina Jolie, screened at Britain's House of Lords, to senior members of the U.N., and was released on Hulu and Amazon.
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    Robert received a Bachelor of Arts in Philosophy from UC, Berkeley in 2012 where he was awarded the Eisner Prize for his film "In the Middle." It is considered the highest achievement in the creative arts given on the UC, Berkeley campus.
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Komentáře • 64

  • @Tightrope_Comedy
    @Tightrope_Comedy Před 2 lety +34

    I found it surprising how hard it was to find a character’s voice when writing. It showed me the importance of getting a deeper understanding of the characters in my stories

    • @thereseember2800
      @thereseember2800 Před 2 lety

      Typing direct dictation of different people talking is very helpful...where they pause...cry..laugh... the words they choose vs. their age/station in life...
      Reverse engineer what you uncover.

  • @YohXoX
    @YohXoX Před 2 lety +36

    I somewhat have mixed feelings regarding point on realism of character. It's true that a lot great characters are modeled based on some certain aspects of realistic/real person. At the same time I think what makes characters inherently engaging is consistency of persona and methods of representation of said persona.
    Somewhat not random atm but Jack Sparrow is example that came to mind. There is nothing realistic about the character(sure reality is sometimes weirder than fiction but such ppl are more of an exception than norm) but damn it's engaging as hell. There is nothing normal about what character says, does or manners how he behaves but he's consistent and IMO that's the key to great character.

    • @trinelangohr6661
      @trinelangohr6661 Před rokem

      That's because he's not a character. He's an archetype: the trickster. Across all cultures and across all of human history, people have always loved tricksters - but they're always fundamentally the same guy. Why is he not a character, then? Because tricksters are static. They can not develop. They always come full circle and never change. They never get serious about anything, and they never die. A character is someone who can change, develop, be traumatized or grow. This is why you think of Jack Sparrow as consistent - or, as some people call it, predictable.
      Don't get me wrong, I love Jack Sparrow as much as the next POTC fan. And he gets a lot of screentime, but he's never the focal character of the movies he's in. The "hero's journey" or "character development" always happens to someone else, like Will and Elizabeth in the first movie. He's just around to catalyze it. Think about it, next time you watch POTC, and check if I'm right :)

  • @G360LIVE
    @G360LIVE Před 2 lety +39

    "Is this someone I want to spend time with?"
    Yes.
    "Is this reality?"
    No.
    I don't write characters that keep me in reality; I write characters to help me escape reality, because ultimately, that's what entertainment is; it's an escape from reality. If I'm not accomplishing that task, then I'm not entertaining anyone, including myself. Do I want to reflect pieces of reality? Yes. However, I don't want to just copy reality, unless the reality is so laughably nonsensical that it's funny.

    • @Arrogan28
      @Arrogan28 Před 2 lety +14

      I don't think that is what he meant. i think does it feel genuine, so that it is rooted in something that allows us to relate to the character, or like he said recognize our neighbor, or the guy at work, etc. He of course writes non-real events himself...

    • @G360LIVE
      @G360LIVE Před 2 lety

      @@Arrogan28
      Yeah, I addressed that. Do I want to recognize my neighbor? Heck no. My neighbor is boring. They don't belong in a movie. If I had to watch them all day, I'd be the very opposite of entertained.
      But the question of whether they feel genuine is a different idea, and like I said, I do want my characters to reflect pieces of reality. I don't want them to be the guy at work, in a full sense. Can they take some aspects of the guy at work and spin them to be entertaining? Of course. But I don't want to see the guy at work in a movie. I don't want to see reality.

    • @Arrogan28
      @Arrogan28 Před 2 lety +12

      @@G360LIVE No you are still missing the point. It isn't your neighbor, it is a piece of your neighbor, enough so that they are somehow grounded. If you don't ground your characters at least in some small way, they have zero substance. But hey, what do I know, write however you want. I am only explaining what he meant, and trying to unput the words you put in his mouth incorrectly. If you want to say what you do fine, but don't reword his words into a strawman, and then take it down with a tin sword claiming victory. If you want to quote his entire words, fine, but when your 'paraphrase' them you change their meaning, and when you critic them you had better get the nuance right. There is a big difference between the two ideas.
      He didn't say the character was your neighbor, but that you had to recognize a piece of someone you know well, like your neighbor, that everyone recognizes so that your characters feel real, grounds, and there is warm blood flowing through their veins.

    • @tolvfen
      @tolvfen Před 2 lety +2

      Some writers have that in them, to make character organic,,, so they don't need to try, some need to make that test so the characters become organic, or

    • @immaculatef2198
      @immaculatef2198 Před 2 lety

      @@tolvfen I’m thinking the wire how bubbles brought out the addict or Omar brought out the gangster, basically the whole actors brought out the xters well

  • @BionicDance
    @BionicDance Před 2 lety +12

    "Are they someone I want to spend an hour and a half with...?"
    _THANK YOU!_ That has been my chief argument for why I can't stand most TV these days, and a lot of movies: the characters are all grim and humorless, depressed when they're not angry...and I want nothing to do with them at all. If I can't picture characters laughing, I can't relate to them enough to keep watching.

  • @candellina6
    @candellina6 Před 2 lety +7

    Finally, I have time to watch these gem interviews.

    • @filmcourage
      @filmcourage  Před 2 lety +2

      Cheers!

    • @simplyme922
      @simplyme922 Před 2 lety +2

      Same. I wait until I have time to sit down with pen and paper to take notes. Love the content.

  • @Louis-wp3fq
    @Louis-wp3fq Před 2 lety +7

    I don't think anyone alive does dialogue like David Milch. It's sad he isn't creating television anymore. The man will only live so long, people!

  • @zeddfilms2388
    @zeddfilms2388 Před 2 lety +3

    Would love to see film courage come down to Ghana 🇬🇭 and interview some of our talented writers and film makers.

    • @canaisyoung3601
      @canaisyoung3601 Před 2 lety

      Yeah, these are American filmmakers. Foreign films give them hives and a headache from subtitle reading and watching something that won't give them ADD (attention deficit disorder).

  • @simplyme922
    @simplyme922 Před 2 lety

    Great question. Excellent answers. Thanks again.

  • @muzikmanner6019
    @muzikmanner6019 Před 2 lety +3

    I don't think a good film character has to be someone you would want to spend time with or even want to know. A prime example would be Hud Bannen in the movie "Hud". He is never likable and has few redeeming qualities, but he is very interesting and watchable. He does have a hint of vulnerability (guilt he feels for causing his brother's death) and the fact that he would want his father to love him even though he does everything to make his father unable to love him. He is offset by his nephew Lon who has all the virtues and good qualities that Hud does not possess. That ying-yang relationship saves both characters from being mundane. But then again, I find anti-heroes more interesting.

  • @filmcourage
    @filmcourage  Před 2 lety +2

    Who are some of your favorite characters from the last few years?

    • @thuthuka3562
      @thuthuka3562 Před 2 lety

      Captain America, Tony Stark, Redington, among others, they're well written and like people.

    • @Winduct
      @Winduct Před 2 lety +1

      @@thuthuka3562 I love your comment so much.

    • @thereseember2800
      @thereseember2800 Před 2 lety

      Dominick Dunne (Documentary)

    • @jonathanrivlin6248
      @jonathanrivlin6248 Před rokem +1

      Waymond Wang

  • @zionleach3001
    @zionleach3001 Před 2 lety +11

    Can you have morally grey characters that can still do the right thing and still be a hero? Like Dante from Devil May Cry.

    • @Sanakudou
      @Sanakudou Před 2 lety +7

      I’d say you definitely can, they might be slightly more difficult to write but they’re often some of the most enjoyable characters in a story when done right!

    • @halfxbreed23
      @halfxbreed23 Před 2 lety +8

      Yeah its called an anti-hero. They're A1

    • @zionleach3001
      @zionleach3001 Před 2 lety +2

      @@halfxbreed23 I know what an anti-hero is. But I don't want to fall into the boring "good vs evil" story. 🤷

    • @zionleach3001
      @zionleach3001 Před 2 lety

      @@halfxbreed23 What I meant was I don't want them to come off as unlikeable. Sorry if my comment didn't make that clear.

    • @halfxbreed23
      @halfxbreed23 Před 2 lety +3

      @@zionleach3001 Anyone can be unlikable, good guy, bad guy, neutral guy (Watch "The Boys" for proof). I think its how many "acts" you string together and whom they are inflicted on. Acts of kindness vs acts of cruelty.
      If your protagonist hurts a bad guy (like Punisher) its less likely to turn the audience because the bad guy deserved it. If your protagonist beats a helpless child.. well yeah.

  • @thechapelperilous
    @thechapelperilous Před 2 lety +2

    Its also the choices that an actor makes that makes a character pop or not.

  • @KeithBridges13
    @KeithBridges13 Před 2 lety

    Hell yeah

  • @filmcourage
    @filmcourage  Před 2 lety +3

    How was this video helpful?

    • @gusj2800
      @gusj2800 Před 2 lety +1

      It will be helpful for writing dialogues and creating a character that doesn't feel flat. I always hate my dialogues. Now I have some tips I can try.

  • @tolvfen
    @tolvfen Před 2 lety

    With Satir, not all them?

  • @user-vw6xp5nl6t
    @user-vw6xp5nl6t Před 2 lety

    Robert has the best character name.

  • @-MattMcCauley-
    @-MattMcCauley- Před 2 lety +4

    When I first saw the thumbnail I thought he was Bubbles from “Trailer Park Boys”.
    Then I realized he wasn’t. He is one of the vile woke people responsible for the complete dearth of anything watchable on Netflix, Prime or the other streaming services.
    That makes him a bad person. I wish it had been Bubbles. Though just a fictional character, Bubbles was at least a good person.

    • @Craig-gq4gb
      @Craig-gq4gb Před 2 lety +3

      Based

    • @KwadDamyj
      @KwadDamyj Před 2 lety +1

      Uh, what are you on about here and what are your sources?

    • @zacharywood9416
      @zacharywood9416 Před rokem

      Someone call elder services, grandpa is yelling about the woke millennials again