The Listeners / A Science Fiction Short Story

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  • čas přidán 26. 08. 2024
  • A soft-spoken ASMR sci-fi story.
    This is a story of a mysterious signal which arrived on Earth. The signal was decoded, analyzed, and acted upon by a species with an insatiable curiosity. A curiosity that takes us deep into the darkness of space and to what even deeper darkness waits for us there.
    This is an original story, written and spoken by Muzz, the author. This story is subject to copyright and may or may not be related to this one • NSCB - Video Science C...
    SciFi pitch idea for your production pleasure. Please Charlie Brooker, watch this and make it into a Black Mirror Episode.
    ⛔WARNING⛔ This short story does contain some slightly dark/adult themes and language.
    #CharlieBrooker please help me develop this!

Komentáře • 73

  • @OLDStrayMementos
    @OLDStrayMementos Před 5 lety +8

    I thought I was going to fall asleep, but I ended up completely hooked to your story!
    If you ever feel like it, please do more of those - really loved it.

    • @ASMRMuzz
      @ASMRMuzz  Před 5 lety +2

      Totally, I love writing stuff like this!

    • @JuanitaChronowski
      @JuanitaChronowski Před 5 lety +2

      Saturn I was into the story for 5 minutes... but Muzz his voice ❤️❤️❤️ calms me to sleep. Love it! The story started really interesting... liked the few minutes I was able to stay up for 😉

  • @aibh7903
    @aibh7903 Před 5 lety +7

    I would buy an entire audiobook version of this story, read like it is in this video

  • @ViscariaASMR
    @ViscariaASMR Před 5 lety +16

    I super enjoyed that, but it was so dark! But honestly, if aliens did show up to wipe us out... I mean that's fair

    • @ASMRMuzz
      @ASMRMuzz  Před 5 lety

      Totally fair at this stage I think. :-)

  • @albinorhino83
    @albinorhino83 Před 5 lety +4

    Great videos! Hoping to hear more storytelling from you! Scottish folklore would be awesome!

  • @Mitchell4892
    @Mitchell4892 Před 5 lety +8

    Muzz, you're a great storyteller. Could see you doing voice work for audio books. Great vid as always!

  • @GaryTheGray
    @GaryTheGray Před 5 lety +3

    This reminded me so much of the science fiction writer Harlan Ellison. Subscribed.

  • @TinglyVoice
    @TinglyVoice Před 5 lety +8

    It's Sunday morning, I'm looking out into the twiligth dust, the temperatures are below zero, sipping on my tea, listening to your voice over my headphones. your slight growls, sighs, breathing, the ever so slight lip smacking.. you make me feel all... well let's just say thank you for the experience ❤️

  • @GracesGrove
    @GracesGrove Před 5 lety +5

    So good! Thanks for sharing your story with us 😀🚀🌎✨

    • @ASMRMuzz
      @ASMRMuzz  Před 5 lety +2

      Thanks pal and congrats for hitting 8k!

  • @margaretfromcanada5727
    @margaretfromcanada5727 Před 5 lety +4

    This was great. You’re very creative & a great story teller.❤️❤️❤️

    • @ASMRMuzz
      @ASMRMuzz  Před 5 lety +1

      You are very kind Margaret!

  • @alekhine9369
    @alekhine9369 Před 5 lety +5

    Wow, I’m thoroughly impressed with how amazing this story was , thank you for the opportunity to hear your story. You’ve got a good mind for it! I love it

  • @wuhoho4687
    @wuhoho4687 Před 5 lety +9

    Can't wait to hear this 😁 Reminds me of when I was younger and used to listen to David Tennant reading an audio book! 😂🤣

    • @joieaumonde
      @joieaumonde Před 5 lety +2

      Wot?? David Tennant read for audiobooks?? Had no idea! I must go find them. Allons-y~

    • @wuhoho4687
      @wuhoho4687 Před 5 lety +1

      @@joieaumonde Sorry but this is such an odd coincidence. I literally came back and watched this video today for the second time, and got a reply the same day not 20 minutes from when I last looked at it xD.
      Yeah he did the how to train your dragon ones from ages ago!

  • @AriElise11
    @AriElise11 Před 5 lety +2

    A wonderfully written, very imaginative and unique story. You are such a great story teller. You have the most wonderful voice and your channel and style is so unique. Thanks again for another great video!

    • @ASMRMuzz
      @ASMRMuzz  Před 5 lety +1

      Thank you so much Arianne!

  • @Evan-kr8hs
    @Evan-kr8hs Před 5 lety +7

    Wow this sounded so amazing! Very interesting story, would love to hear more original stories like this in the future! Also I actually really liked the dark lighting. Did you draw the thumbnail too?
    Keep up the good work Muzz!! :)

    • @ASMRMuzz
      @ASMRMuzz  Před 5 lety +1

      Thanks pal. Yes I sketched the thumbnail too.

  • @gaminginanutshell7890
    @gaminginanutshell7890 Před 5 lety +2

    Amazing work and would love to see more stuff like this. You're writing is stellar and you're voice makes for the perfect narration!

    • @ASMRMuzz
      @ASMRMuzz  Před 5 lety +1

      Thanks mate, I've been working on a sequel to this story.

    • @cpf6125
      @cpf6125 Před 4 lety +2

      I would love to hear it mate. First vid of yours I have watched. Subbed, loved the story. Your natural, storytelling style worked really really well as if you were personally retelling the story. Reading it in written form might not have worked as well for me (ungrammatical in places, odd tenses at times, minor issues) but listening to it was fantastic - really impressed!

  • @dreaminginthegarden
    @dreaminginthegarden Před 3 lety +2

    Loved this! You ARE a writer...clearly! Loved listening to you reading it in the dark too 🙏

  • @Andrescat98
    @Andrescat98 Před 5 lety +2

    I love dark scifi and this is a prrfect example of it... cant wait for a follow up story

  • @JuanitaChronowski
    @JuanitaChronowski Před 5 lety +4

    SUPER!!!! You could read the dictionary to me anytime.. 🤔 yeah that might work. Anyway I don’t know how good the story was but your reading it knocked me out cold ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

  • @christineg3798
    @christineg3798 Před 5 lety +1

    I love story time! I’m super impressed by your writing! I wanted to listen to fall asleep but the story was so compelling I had to listen to the whole thing! Please write more for us if you like, I know I’d love to hear more of your work 🥰

    • @ASMRMuzz
      @ASMRMuzz  Před 5 lety +1

      I'm glad you liked the story! I have a sequel of sorts in the works right now. 😎

  • @Mitchell4892
    @Mitchell4892 Před 5 lety +1

    I know I've commented before but I've watched this video a fair few times now and have only heard the ending of it today because I always fall asleep. That's not to say I've ever been bored by the story, just doing a great job helping me with my sleep! Thanks mate!

    • @ASMRMuzz
      @ASMRMuzz  Před 5 lety

      That's the point pal! Glad you finally Made it to the end though!

  • @stefan3886
    @stefan3886 Před 5 lety +2

    i dig it, could polish some redundant parts and work on drawing things out more during the high tension parts, however a really cool story, and you really nailed the spooky mysterious sci-fi vibe. Well done, keep it up

    • @ASMRMuzz
      @ASMRMuzz  Před 5 lety

      Thanks! I wrote it and filmed it pretty quickly, I could definitely expand and edit a lot more!

  • @saulcervantes2287
    @saulcervantes2287 Před 5 měsíci +1

    Damn this is good you should make a part 2 or make it a whole series

    • @ASMRMuzz
      @ASMRMuzz  Před 5 měsíci

      Thank you! I'm keen to expand on this story, I have already written a few things for it. 👍

    • @saulcervantes2287
      @saulcervantes2287 Před 5 měsíci

      @@ASMRMuzz you should, the story was amazing very interesting

  • @echoez_
    @echoez_ Před 5 lety

    What a Great story! 😍 Really loved it! Thank you for sharing it with us! 💘

  • @SexyxSeds
    @SexyxSeds Před 5 lety +2

    102 likes and 0 dislikes that just shows your a great CZcamsr

  • @jaredplayer1740
    @jaredplayer1740 Před 5 lety +1

    Please do another one of these Sci-Fi stories! I love this one!

  • @XenoJam1107
    @XenoJam1107 Před 5 lety +1

    Congratulations on 8.5k subscribers!

  • @Nic_blue
    @Nic_blue Před 5 lety +1

    Love it! Thanks for all your work

  • @figster8240
    @figster8240 Před 5 lety +1

    Good f''ing story brother. Thanks

  • @NightWhispererASMR
    @NightWhispererASMR Před 5 lety +3

    Very good dude! 🔥🔥

  • @lucilleal-refo4168
    @lucilleal-refo4168 Před 3 lety

    This was really great! Thank you so much

  • @IAmShniff
    @IAmShniff Před 5 lety +1

    This is great :)

  • @blueblueasmr
    @blueblueasmr Před 5 lety +1

    Will see it in a bit! I am at work, but yey, UPLOAD👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

  • @aidanbraidwood3739
    @aidanbraidwood3739 Před 4 lety +1

    Watched this so many times!

    • @ASMRMuzz
      @ASMRMuzz  Před 4 lety

      I'm quite proud of this one, I need to get another one done.

    • @aidanbraidwood3739
      @aidanbraidwood3739 Před 4 lety

      ASMR Muzz one of my top 3 videos on CZcams. Definitely need another one. Your story telling is brilliant

  • @anaroskma
    @anaroskma Před 5 lety +1

    Are you sure you're not a writer? This is at the very least an amazing and cool new form of story telling. ♥️Hooked!

  • @nonotanymore
    @nonotanymore Před 5 lety +2

    absolutely c r i m i n a l l y under-viewed

    • @ASMRMuzz
      @ASMRMuzz  Před 5 lety +2

      Thank you! Hopefully YT will absolve themselves of their crime soon.

    • @nonotanymore
      @nonotanymore Před 5 lety +1

      @@ASMRMuzz They might need to be interrogated by my favorite corrupt cop

  • @blueblueasmr
    @blueblueasmr Před 5 lety +1

    Muzz: Kia Ora my friends
    My back tingling: 💥✨💥✨💫

  • @SatisfyingASMR4u
    @SatisfyingASMR4u Před 5 lety

    Super relaxing voice

  • @TrickstaMinecraft
    @TrickstaMinecraft Před 5 lety +1

    Holy fuck i need more

  • @aidanbraidwood3739
    @aidanbraidwood3739 Před 5 lety +1

    We might be terrible at football but we make great narrators! 🏴󠁧󠁢󠁳󠁣󠁴󠁿

  • @kristic6345
    @kristic6345 Před 5 lety +1

    Can anybody educate me on his opening greeting? What is the word he says, where does it originate from? It's hard to Google a word that's a phonetic spelling guess. Anybody?

    • @blueblueasmr
      @blueblueasmr Před 5 lety +2

      Kristi C Kia Ora :) “Is a Māori-language greeting which has entered New Zealand English. It translates literally as "have life", "be well", or "be healthy", and is used as an informal greeting equivalent to "hi" or "hello".

    • @ASMRMuzz
      @ASMRMuzz  Před 5 lety +1

      Absolutely correct Blue!

    • @kristic6345
      @kristic6345 Před 5 lety +1

      Blue Blue ASMR 😊 thanks!!

  • @susiotheplumber3746
    @susiotheplumber3746 Před 2 lety +1

    You’re not a writer? Then we need a new word for what you are, so we can aspire to it! My brain is now jello.

  • @echoez_
    @echoez_ Před 5 lety

    What a Great story! 😍 Really loved it! Thank you for sharing it with us! 💘