Finding Home - Cinematic Short Film

This is my first time making a short film. Im really excited to share this with you guys. It took me a little longer than expected to make, because I had to write and rewrite the script about a 100 times. I'm not that great with writing and words so scripting this was the most challenging part. I had a little help in the end and I'm glad it turned out well and i'm really excited to make more of these in the future.
Let me know how you guys like it and what I can improve on in the future!
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[@MotionBoatFilms]

Done a great job for your first film man, breathtaking visuals and the VO really hits the spot 🤟

[@bryanwanphotography]

Thank you so much! That means alot to me!

[@MotionBoatFilms]

@@bryanwanphotography Welcome man!

[@11parham]

This was soo nice Bryan! Good job :))

[@bryanwanphotography]

Thanks so much Fam