Aliens Jaws DROP When Earth's Colossal Mothership Warps In | Best HFY Stories

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  • čas přidán 24. 04. 2024
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    Exhausted from relentless attacks on distant outposts, humanity changes tactics. Intelligence reveals the Kavari, a vicious reptilian race, believe Earth is vulnerable, its fleets stretched thin. In a bold move, Admiral Hayes gambles. A lone human Mothership emerges from hyperspace near the Kavari homeworld, a defiant message echoing through the cosmos: if the Kavari want total war, humanity will bring it to their doorstep.
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Komentáře • 74

  • @davidowens1132
    @davidowens1132 Před 2 měsíci +22

    Written by someone who has obviously never served aboard a combat vessel.
    We don't shout, we don't scream, and we certainly don't panic in the face of certain death.
    We do our jobs, we support our shipmates, we die with dignity, and we make sure that we take every one of the enemy with us that is possible.

    • @iamdragonkrys
      @iamdragonkrys Před 2 měsíci +3

      Exactly 💯💯💯💯😊

    • @PhilandSofia
      @PhilandSofia Před měsícem

      Are you a WW2 veteran? Because otherwise pretty sure you don’t know what real danger is. And unless you’ve died how would u know 🤷🏽‍♂️

  • @einyv
    @einyv Před 2 měsíci +31

    I wouldn't think twice using a planet killer if it meant survival

    • @nargalda773
      @nargalda773 Před 2 měsíci

      without planet killers, fck xenos will never find out when they fck around, always better have few hundreds in stock, then need one and dont have

    • @WardenWolf
      @WardenWolf Před 2 měsíci +1

      Sometimes, you just gotta crack a planet.

    • @jimmymillerdragonheart5282
      @jimmymillerdragonheart5282 Před 2 měsíci +2

      Id use it for fun

    • @Draktand01
      @Draktand01 Před 2 měsíci +1

      @@jimmymillerdragonheart5282On an uninhabited planet, right? Right???

    • @Draktand01
      @Draktand01 Před 2 měsíci

      Yeah. On these kinds of scales, even a crime on the scald of genocide could be considered reasonable self defence if the other side threatens your whole species/nation’s existence.
      Heck, that is basically the unspoken basis for the MAD doctrine. A full on nuclear attack would be genocide, yet it is considered self defence to wave around said genocidal arsenals.

  • @evanwirth5246
    @evanwirth5246 Před 2 měsíci +21

    Why on earth would anyone go into combat with their main weapon on a countdown timer of minutes lmao. That killed it. Talk about manufacturing tension

  • @czinn327
    @czinn327 Před 2 měsíci +5

    Five minutes stretched into eternity. I had given my attention until there was nothing left to give, but the purple prose stretched on and on in an endless morass, as though I were walking the slow steps up to a courthouse where my internet history was to be exposed to the world. The narrator was amazing and even he couldn't put life into the squelching mess of a story. I looked at the timeline: fifteen minutes of runtime. It was enough. Other brave viewers would have to make the sacrifice. As my brain grew numb and dim I hit the final button which would halt the relentless torrent of words.

  • @lgiordanoest
    @lgiordanoest Před 2 měsíci +23

    You're doing a great job but, please, put the "subscribe message" either at the beginning or the end. It's frankly annoying to be interrupted when engaged in such a great story.

    • @creinicke1000
      @creinicke1000 Před 2 měsíci +1

      I dont care or mind

    • @lgiordanoest
      @lgiordanoest Před 2 měsíci

      @@creinicke1000 Good for you!

    • @lukeytron
      @lukeytron Před 2 měsíci +3

      ​@@creinicke1000you are both sharing equally valid opinions. It bugs me a tiny bit. The channel can make the decision to change or not.

    • @dragex6582
      @dragex6582 Před 2 měsíci

      It's done like that because people are inately more likely to register it in the middle of the story rather than the beginning or end.

  • @davidturner4824
    @davidturner4824 Před 2 měsíci +3

    For sure if Humankind even thinks about starting colonies on other planets outside of our solar system, we better have a huge navel fleet to protect them. There are alien species out there, that are hundreds of thousands of years old. We better ask them if it would be OK to put colonies on certain planets.

  • @kreynolds1123
    @kreynolds1123 Před 2 měsíci +1

    Who needs a super massive warship if one can strap a warp drive onto an asteroid and use FTL coms to FTL warp an asteroid into an enemy's ship before he shots at you in the future. FTL coms and warp drive makes changing the immediate past possible.

  • @larrythompson8630
    @larrythompson8630 Před 2 měsíci +1

    Why come out of FTL hours from target? I can understand stopping in orbit could not work. But if it’s a suicide mission. Strip it down

  • @IshijimaKairo
    @IshijimaKairo Před 2 měsíci +1

    Literally Space Battleship Yamato

  • @nimmnoss
    @nimmnoss Před 2 měsíci

    i must say i like the ending no losers they both win peace and non aggression is true victory

  • @toxboxdevel6026
    @toxboxdevel6026 Před 2 měsíci +23

    Day 3 protesting the interrupting subscription message. Please place at beginning or end!

    • @creinicke1000
      @creinicke1000 Před 2 měsíci

      Why are you upset? It's 2 seconds..

    • @toxboxdevel6026
      @toxboxdevel6026 Před 2 měsíci +6

      @@creinicke1000 it disrupts the flow of the story and ruins the immersion. That makes it not only disrespectful to the audience, but the author as well.

    • @matttori7163
      @matttori7163 Před 2 měsíci +1

      Just as bad as a CZcams ad

    • @918guy
      @918guy Před měsícem

      ​@@matttori7163 whats a youtube ad? I didnt know it had them

  • @rickpearson1530
    @rickpearson1530 Před 2 měsíci +2

    What happened to the mothership Red line says one thing the story says another

  • @joeshangout420
    @joeshangout420 Před 2 měsíci +2

    Thanks for actually reading this. Ai sucks rn

  • @juliemunoz2762
    @juliemunoz2762 Před 2 měsíci +6

    This seems like a AI written story. The story is a jumble and doesn’t make sense at times.

  • @dougc190
    @dougc190 Před 2 měsíci

    I love that you read these stories in person, but you ever proofread these first? The ship's not close enough to fire the planet cracking weapon but now it's in the atmosphere? Some of these stories just don't make any sense

  • @KDarkmoon1
    @KDarkmoon1 Před 2 měsíci +1

    Clearly who or what-ever wrote this has no understanding of physics in the vacuum of space. Destroying the ship's engines wouldn't stop it. Inertia would carry it on its same trajectory and at its same speed. Such a pathetic "colossal mothership" to be so quickly and easily laid low by fighters within minutes. Sounds like the Death Star except there was no weak point. It makes little sense.

  • @jamesaritchie1
    @jamesaritchie1 Před 2 měsíci +3

    Started good, broke down quickly, ended horribly.

  • @snake57
    @snake57 Před 2 měsíci

    Nah! Theodoric of York.

  • @Solar-Skies
    @Solar-Skies Před 2 měsíci +1

    Hey, not even subscribed and yet i'm early. Congrats, you're infecting my feed. Consider me subscribed now. You do a very good job, and it's a lot different than all that AI stuff.

  • @christopherbrummet4997
    @christopherbrummet4997 Před 2 měsíci +2

    As The Doctor once...and likely will have to say many times from now until the end of time: "Sit Down And TALK!"
    Shame it's such a challenge even with a universal translator

  • @wynbock
    @wynbock Před 2 měsíci

    #275 LIKE!🦋
    Shared, too!
    9:42PM 04/25/24

  • @magellan500
    @magellan500 Před 2 měsíci +2

    Good story but too many long commercials. I cacelled my subscription half way thru.

    • @czinn327
      @czinn327 Před 2 měsíci +1

      Content makers don't get to choose where and how many commercials will be shown anymore.

    • @AdamWaltersPDX
      @AdamWaltersPDX Před 2 měsíci +1

      Buy premium bud

  • @tagged123
    @tagged123 Před 2 měsíci +2

    What… what was misinterpreted?? This makes no sense, it’s like half a plot.

  • @gprivat812_my_selection6
    @gprivat812_my_selection6 Před 2 měsíci +1

    17:40 Bla bla bla...

  • @privateperson5054
    @privateperson5054 Před 2 měsíci +1

    Horriable. Why would she ship stop if it lost its engines ?
    The device really dependant on the hull of the ship ?
    The subscribe comershial in the middle.

  • @JimUSCM
    @JimUSCM Před 2 měsíci +3

    Who'd stop mid battle to open comms and ask what wasThier intentions were? And the admirals transmission what was the point of that....the doomsday weapon not useful against ships, surely they'd have known that before the mission? Waste of a ship, crew and weapon due to a stupid plan that was no plan to begin with, waste of resources that couldn't be replenished and better used elsewhere, wouldn't the weapon be primed and ready at the begining? can tell its an AI story due to all the grim this and grim that, the aliens use genocide and the humans are on the brink of extinction and the humans won't reply inkind? sorry not a good story this time.

    • @Vaquero4382
      @Vaquero4382 Před 2 měsíci +2

      The story was a hot mess from the start.

  • @thomasrice2652
    @thomasrice2652 Před 2 měsíci +1

    what bull

  • @arturotaratungoro
    @arturotaratungoro Před 2 měsíci

    God damn this video was chock full of ads. It's not fun to listen to.
    I know CZcams advertising is important, but 6 advertising blocks are too many in a 40-minute video

  • @olischulu
    @olischulu Před 2 měsíci +1

    No "collosal" mothership and the story is overdramatic.

  • @gprivat812_my_selection6
    @gprivat812_my_selection6 Před 2 měsíci +2

    Who/what speaks in this ridiculous fashion?
    The story is lame - the way it is narrated does not make it more convincing at all!

  • @Birrun
    @Birrun Před 2 měsíci

    I like the stories but really hate the sudden interruptions makes me want to click away. Luckily I can skip forward for this but it's very irritating.

  • @Efoure4
    @Efoure4 Před 2 měsíci +1

    This ai shit is getting old.

  • @Draktand01
    @Draktand01 Před 2 měsíci

    Honestly, the interruption asking me to subscribe only makes me want to unsubscribe.
    Are you sure it’s having a statistically positive effect on your channel’s growth?
    Setiously, it interrupts the immersion.

  • @MichaelWinter-ss6lx
    @MichaelWinter-ss6lx Před 2 měsíci

    The silly voices are an evil distraction. Was thinking if this was for children, but then he screamed at the microfon again. My main attention is on the volume button. Could've put the time to a better use.

  • @raybowley490
    @raybowley490 Před 2 měsíci

    I will not be watching any more of your stories as the ammount of adds ruins it for me, it is a pity as they are good.

  • @larsb4572
    @larsb4572 Před 2 měsíci +1

    Poorly written AI rubbish. Got about 1/3 the way but cant stomach this garbage. For those enjoying a mothership dancing and evading fighters.. gluck.. i can recommend wheels on the bus go round for your next story.

  • @iamdragonkrys
    @iamdragonkrys Před 2 měsíci +1

    Why do you have to speak to introduce the story?
    It's annoying

    • @StarboundHFY
      @StarboundHFY  Před 2 měsíci +1

      most people enjoy seeing that a human narrator is behind this :)

  • @Vaquero4382
    @Vaquero4382 Před 2 měsíci

    Again with the something "born of" something. It has become irritatingly repetitive and predictable.

  • @davedsilva
    @davedsilva Před 2 měsíci

    Why are you popping up with your hands in my face in the middle of the action? Unliked. Unsubscribed.

  • @tobygenato8707
    @tobygenato8707 Před 2 měsíci

    Lame story with weak characters and misleading title. Looks like Ai written
    Keeps on rambling on…

  • @dilldowd8877
    @dilldowd8877 Před 2 měsíci

    Dont do that either do it at the end or the beginning dint jump in the middle of the story begging for subs and likes it makes me not want to sub and not watch any of your content plz dont do this in the future

  • @lupaswolfshead9971
    @lupaswolfshead9971 Před měsícem

    oh crying out loud yet another atrocious story badly written with plot holes the size of Jupiter unsubscibed.

  • @johnhorvath-jq4xu
    @johnhorvath-jq4xu Před 2 měsíci +1

    utter garbage