When I was practising on this test, I didn't know to organize the essay as a perspective of a passenger. Your ideas are incredible which blows my mind.
Thank your very much for your videos and guidance,lilie.With a month preparation which includes me watching almost all of your videos,i was able to have an overall band of 7.L-7,S-7.5,W-6.5,R-6.I was so shocked about my reading score,i thought i would have a higer band score.
Hi Lilie, when you talked about the bag-drop area, isn't it enough to mention it once, after you said that the check-in counters will be relocated to make room for the bag-drop area? also, how would i know that the walkway is moving walkway?
Thanks a million, Lilie! 🙌 Your video on map-related writing tasks was a game-changer. 🗺💡 Your tips were pure gold, and your examples were spot on. 🌟 I'm feeling more confident already! 🚀 Keep up the awesome work! 🎉👏
The plan displays the layout of Southwest airport at present and its renovation plans for the next year. Overall, the airport is expected to implement a tremendous redevelopment plan by including more gates as well as the addition of new facilities for more convenience for both departing and arriving passengers. At present, the airport is small with only eight gates, whereas the construction of another ten gates is proposed by creating a Y-section in order to occupy more flights within the limited area. Additionally, the walkway which was present near the first four gates is planned to be demolished; however, a sky train will be positioned at the center of the Y section for easy access to people entering to and from all gates. According to the current map, the airport has only a single entrance point at the departures and arrivals region, which are situated on the left and right side respectively, of a person facing the building. In contrast, extra ones are proposed for both regions for avoiding crowds. Another major change is the inclusion of a Bag drop point in the departure region where check-in was located before. Check-in was displaced to the right by relocating the Café to another corner near the entrance. Passport control and security offices are straight ahead of the entrance and remain the same in both plans. Likewise, shops are also planned for the departing passenger once they exit from the security region before they reach the gates. Additionally, another café, an ATM, and car hire are to be included in the arrivals regions for the arriving passengers which can be used once they clear customs.
Thank you for your video. Do we need to write paragraph 3 ? Introduction, Overview, Paragraph 1, and Paragraph 2. This is the normal IELTS Task 1 standard. right ? Please correct me if I am wrong.
Thanks, it was very informative. You referred to the upper extensions as a concourse. I can't find it among the key, how did you know what it is called and what would be your advice when a question like this appears in an exam, can't find the name on the map and you don't know what it is???
My overview : Overall, the southwest airport will experience notable developments, including expansion of the airport to increase the number of gates and installment of some new facilities for arriving and departing travellers. Does this overview look like a template copy??
Thanks Lilie, I would like to know if it is more appriopriate to organize the essay basen on the former and the latter, for example detail one i will describe the current layout and the next Detail PG will mention the future outlay
hi Lilie! can you shoot video also on the writing task 1 in 3rd test of the Cambridge 18 (there is given plan of the library) that was quite hard for me to write it, I would like to see your version , thank you beforehand!
The given plan compares the appearance of Southwest airport present's look with the final look after its renovation. Overall, the building of airport will expands having more gates and other facilities will be added for the convenience of both arriving and departing passengers On entrance to the departing gate , when one face the building he can find a check in on his left which will replaced by bag drop ,and a cafe to his right which will be shifted beside the bag drop just before the security and passport control. Once through the security gate , passengers will see some shops, which the airport currently didn't have. The concourse area, which have eight gates right now will be enlarged and more gates will be introduced. Thereby, the walk way will replaced by sky train for people convenience to approach the boarding gate. Moving on the arrival hall, there are only two services yet, which are passport control and customs office. Beginning next year , however , there will be a cafe , ATM machine and car hire arriving passengers can use after clearing customs.
just came across your channel, its really helpful and i wished you had more such examples because i have exam this week. Still you should upload them, it would be helpful to others. Keep up the good work.
@@siringursultur7914 i got 8 bands listening - 9 reading - 8.5 speaking - 7 and writing - 6.5 I fucked up majorly in my speaking section and was never confident about the writing part and I was so sure after the exam that I will have to retake it but on the contrary it pan out great
Hello there, I have 2 questions that are bothering me and I hope someone can help me answer them. 1. Why did you write "departures entrance" instead of "departure entrance"? 2. Is it okay to have only 1 sentence as an introduction? Because in my knowledge, you can't call a paragraph "a paragraph" if you only have 1 sentence, you need at least two sentences to make up a paragraph.
1. books.google.com/ngrams/graph?content=departures+entrance%2Cdeparture+entrance&year_start=1800&year_end=2019&corpus=en-2019&smoothing=3 2. Yes, a paragraph can contain only one sentence. 😊
The plans illustrate the site of Southwest Airport in the present and in the future with a few redevelopments. Overall, airport redevelopment will change its image in the future. After the development, there will be new facilities like bag drop, a new cafe bar, an ATM and car hire. Meanwhile, there will be new gates and the entrance will be doubled. In the present, there are is one departure and arrival entrances. Departures has check-in and on the opposite site is located a cafe bar. Between an empty facility and departure is security passport control. Passengers can use the walkaway, and there are four gates on the left side. Meanwhile, arrival has only passport control and customs on its right side. There are four gates on the right side. In the future, the number of entrance will increase for one . In the left corner of departure, there will be a cafe bar. Above the cafe bar there will be bag drop. Check-in will be located, across the bag drops,. The security and passport control will remain on the same location. Although, there will be new shops between them. The number of gates will be increased to nine of them on the departures side. Arrivals, will have enlarged space for care hire. Above that will be ATM and new cafe bar. Passport and ontrol customs will be located in the same location. Between the gates there is sky train. On the left side of arrivals there are eight new gates.
That was amazing! thank you. I have a question, why did you use this tense with WILL? you mentioned earlier in the previous video from the same playlist not to use WILL or GOING TO! I need some explanation, please.
Hi, please read the introductory text of the maps carefully. It uses "will": The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it *will* look after redevelopment next year.
As far I know we should write 2 body/details paragraph in task 1 essay. However, you have shown 3 body/details paragraph in this video which has been too big and exceeded approximately 200 words. Shouldn't you have shown us 2 body/details paragraph for this question in order to consume less time? Is it ok to write 3 body/details paragraph in task 1? I hope you will get the point and answer my inquiries. Thanks
What if we assume that up is north, down is south, left is west, and right is east.Is not it's a university fact of a map. Anyway appreciated it and love from Nepal.
i came across a similar task one report where you advised we use "is to be" instead of "will be". is there an exception to the rule? please kindly elucidate.
Hi, I used "will" for the maps in this video because the introductory text of the maps uses "will". But the introductory text of the maps in the other video simply says "planned development".
Dear, could you please tell me what are the tenses we can use to write answers for this type of questions? I used to write sentences like - can be seen .. I think my answer is wrong.. by watching this and reading comments I got an idea just now. my god what should I do now.. 🤦♀️😑 I do not have time to practice now
Hi, for a planned development, if the question uses "will", then you can use it as well. Otherwise, you need to use the tenses I share in this video: czcams.com/video/8Bsd8quNQw8/video.html
could you please tall me what do you think about it i take the test after two days . The two plans below depict the current site of an airport and how it will look one year later after the development. To begin with, we can see that the size of the airport will become more bigger than the current one. starting from the departures and arrivals the airport after the development will have one more gate for each one. Moreover, the size of the departures will remain the same, in addition the check in will be in the right and replaced by a bag drop. Also, a café will take place below it. in the other side the size will be extended by adding a car hire to the right bottom of the arrivals. Besides that, it will have a café and an ATM as a new feature. Furthermore, above the Security and the passport control. a shops will also be added to the plan next year. The biggest changement at the airport will be the increase number of the gates. When ten gates will be added. Also, the sky train will take the place of the walkway. thank you for your efforts.
I agree that it's best not to write more than 200 words. But every writing task is different. Some charts have much more features than others so we have to be flexible.
You have suggested in your other map video that we shouldn't use terms like "will /will be / going to be " . Rather we should use " is to /are to" because it makes more sense as these are just plans or maps which is not happened yet..but in this video you are using " will be " . I am getting confused here...Can you pls clarify this confusion ? My xm is knocking at door...so pls help as soon as you notice this ...I am big fan though ...it was just a confusion..love from Bangladesh ♥️♥️
You make writing essays look much easier and this has greatly reduce my stress and anxiety about writing. Incredible!!! ❤ thank you so much
Appreciate the kind words!😊💜
When I was practising on this test, I didn't know to organize the essay as a perspective of a passenger. Your ideas are incredible which blows my mind.
Thank your very much for your videos and guidance,lilie.With a month preparation which includes me watching almost all of your videos,i was able to have an overall band of 7.L-7,S-7.5,W-6.5,R-6.I was so shocked about my reading score,i thought i would have a higer band score.
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Thank you so much. You are my starter channel
Hi Lilie, when you talked about the bag-drop area, isn't it enough to mention it once, after you said that the check-in counters will be relocated to make room for the bag-drop area? also, how would i know that the walkway is moving walkway?
Thanks a million, Lilie! 🙌 Your video on map-related writing tasks was a game-changer. 🗺💡 Your tips were pure gold, and your examples were spot on. 🌟 I'm feeling more confident already! 🚀 Keep up the awesome work! 🎉👏
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I was so worried about my writing exam
After seeing your videos I got more ideas and now I can write essay in more easier way ❤️
Good luck on your exam.👊
@@LilieIELTS Thankq so much 🥺❤️
The plan displays the layout of Southwest airport at present and its renovation plans for the next year.
Overall, the airport is expected to implement a tremendous redevelopment plan by including more gates as well as the addition of new facilities for more convenience for both departing and arriving passengers.
At present, the airport is small with only eight gates, whereas the construction of another ten gates is proposed by creating a Y-section in order to occupy more flights within the limited area. Additionally, the walkway which was present near the first four gates is planned to be demolished; however, a sky train will be positioned at the center of the Y section for easy access to people entering to and from all gates.
According to the current map, the airport has only a single entrance point at the departures and arrivals region, which are situated on the left and right side respectively, of a person facing the building. In contrast, extra ones are proposed for both regions for avoiding crowds. Another major change is the inclusion of a Bag drop point in the departure region where check-in was located before. Check-in was displaced to the right by relocating the Café to another corner near the entrance. Passport control and security offices are straight ahead of the entrance and remain the same in both plans. Likewise, shops are also planned for the departing passenger once they exit from the security region before they reach the gates. Additionally, another café, an ATM, and car hire are to be included in the arrivals regions for the arriving passengers which can be used once they clear customs.
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That's great, can I use it as examples for my assignment?.
I have my test on September 15th. I wish I would have found your channel earlier. But your videos are incredible I wish you the very best .
Good luck!!✊
in which center you are appearing?
How was your test?
Thank you for your video. Do we need to write paragraph 3 ?
Introduction, Overview, Paragraph 1, and Paragraph 2.
This is the normal IELTS Task 1 standard. right ?
Please correct me if I am wrong.
Hi, I very occasionally write Details Paragraph 3. See this essay: www.ieltsessaybank.com/changes-in-ownership-of-electrical-appliances/
Tnx mem for this video. I think this is a natural way to write a map which i have been searching for a while.🇧🇩
Thanks, it was very informative. You referred to the upper extensions as a concourse. I can't find it among the key, how did you know what it is called and what would be your advice when a question like this appears in an exam, can't find the name on the map and you don't know what it is???
Hi, you don't need to worry about something that is not labelled on the maps. You cam say something like "ahead are eight gates".
very helpful! thank you so much, God bless you
Glad it was helpful!
My overview :
Overall, the southwest airport will experience notable developments, including expansion of the airport to increase the number of gates and installment of some new facilities for arriving and departing travellers.
Does this overview look like a template copy??
Thanks Lilie, I would like to know if it is more appriopriate to organize the essay basen on the former and the latter, for example detail one i will describe the current layout and the next Detail PG will mention the future outlay
hi Lilie! can you shoot video also on the writing task 1 in 3rd test of the Cambridge 18 (there is given plan of the library) that was quite hard for me to write it, I would like to see your version , thank you beforehand!
The given plan compares the appearance of Southwest airport present's look with the final look after its renovation.
Overall, the building of airport will expands having more gates and other facilities will be added for the convenience of both arriving and departing passengers
On entrance to the departing gate , when one face the building he can find a check in on his left which will replaced by bag drop ,and a cafe to his right which will be shifted beside the bag drop just before the security and passport control.
Once through the security gate , passengers will see some shops, which the airport currently didn't have. The concourse area, which have eight gates right now will be enlarged and more gates will be introduced. Thereby, the walk way will replaced by sky train for people convenience to approach the boarding gate. Moving on the arrival hall, there are only two services yet, which are passport control and customs office. Beginning next year , however , there will be a cafe , ATM machine and car hire arriving passengers can use after clearing customs.
just came across your channel, its really helpful and i wished you had more such examples because i have exam this week. Still you should upload them, it would be helpful to others.
Keep up the good work.
🙏🙏🙏Good luck on your exam!
how was your exam?
@@siringursultur7914 i got 8 bands
listening - 9
reading - 8.5
speaking - 7 and
writing - 6.5
I fucked up majorly in my speaking section and was never confident about the writing part and I was so sure after the exam that I will have to retake it but on the contrary it pan out great
@@siringursultur7914 all the best for your exam
Of course i got relief from writing stress headache. Thank you for teaching with a excellent guidance.
Can you please make a video for IELTS reading
Definitely will do that in the future.
Lily coul you explain me why you use "departures entrance" in stead of "departure entrance"
Hello there, I have 2 questions that are bothering me and I hope someone can help me answer them.
1. Why did you write "departures entrance" instead of "departure entrance"?
2. Is it okay to have only 1 sentence as an introduction? Because in my knowledge, you can't call a paragraph "a paragraph" if you only have 1 sentence, you need at least two sentences to make up a paragraph.
1. books.google.com/ngrams/graph?content=departures+entrance%2Cdeparture+entrance&year_start=1800&year_end=2019&corpus=en-2019&smoothing=3
2. Yes, a paragraph can contain only one sentence. 😊
Thank u so much.. I m much impressed by your teaching style which is so lucid and to the point.. May God Bless you
Awww, thank you.
The plans illustrate the site of Southwest Airport in the present and in the future with a few redevelopments.
Overall, airport redevelopment will change its image in the future. After the development, there will be new facilities like bag drop, a new cafe bar, an ATM and car hire. Meanwhile, there will be new gates and the entrance will be doubled.
In the present, there are is one departure and arrival entrances. Departures has check-in and on the opposite site is located a cafe bar. Between an empty facility and departure is security passport control. Passengers can use the walkaway, and there are four gates on the left side. Meanwhile, arrival has only passport control and customs on its right side. There are four gates on the right side.
In the future, the number of entrance will increase for one . In the left corner of departure, there will be a cafe bar. Above the cafe bar there will be bag drop. Check-in will be located, across the bag drops,. The security and passport control will remain on the same location. Although, there will be new shops between them. The number of gates will be increased to nine of them on the departures side. Arrivals, will have enlarged space for care hire. Above that will be ATM and new cafe bar. Passport and ontrol customs will be located in the same location. Between the gates there is sky train. On the left side of arrivals there are eight new gates.
That was amazing! thank you. I have a question, why did you use this tense with WILL? you mentioned earlier in the previous video from the same playlist not to use WILL or GOING TO! I need some explanation, please.
Hi, this is because the introductory text of the maps uses "will". I guess they are pretty sure that the redevelopment will happen.
@@LilieIELTS Thank you very much. That was really helpful ❤
Hello, I would like to ask if the increased entrances of Departures and Arrivials need to be mentioned?🥺
Thanks
Thank you but I am still finding it difficult to access your website. It is always blinking
Thanks for your efforts 👍👍
So nice of you
The maps compare the current area of an airport with the planned one in the furture. Kindly check is this right. Thanks for helping.. maam
Hi, I think "current area of an airport" doesn't work. The maps show the entire airport, not just an area of it.
What a wonderful video! Do you have a group of yours for IELTS learners on social media?
Sorry, I don't.
Thank you for the great insight
How did you knw it is' will '... Why wasn't' is to be ' not used? How could you ensure that this will happen and is not just a plan?...
Pls reply mam.
Hi, please read the introductory text of the maps carefully. It uses "will": The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it *will* look after redevelopment next year.
Alright so it is identified from the question. Thank you mam.
Thanks for your video :) it is really helpful for me! Could you also make another map lesson? , Cambridge 17 test1, task1, the town of Norbition.
As far I know we should write 2 body/details paragraph in task 1 essay. However, you have shown 3 body/details paragraph in this video which has been too big and exceeded approximately 200 words.
Shouldn't you have shown us 2 body/details paragraph for this question in order to consume less time?
Is it ok to write 3 body/details paragraph in task 1? I hope you will get the point and answer my inquiries. Thanks
am glad that I found your channel ❤
Me too!😊
am preparing for coming August..... your channel will be of great help to me... thanks 🙏
Hello Lilie
The plan shows or the plan show - which one is correct pls elaborate. (I think two charts are there thats y)
The plans show
Hi
Is any new video will appear in upcoming days?
Working on the line graph in ielts 17. Hopefully I can upload it next Monday or Tuesdays.
Thank you so much you make it easy for me ❤
Excellent
What if we assume that up is north, down is south, left is west, and right is east.Is not it's a university fact of a map.
Anyway appreciated it and love from Nepal.
its really helped a lot❤❤❤ thank u Lilie
Please make a video on Cambridge 12 writing task 1 (test8). I find your videos very helpful
Hi, I published an essay of this writing task on my site. You might find it helpful. www.ieltsessaybank.com/geothermal-energy/
i came across a similar task one report where you advised we use "is to be" instead of "will be". is there an exception to the rule? please kindly elucidate.
Hi, I used "will" for the maps in this video because the introductory text of the maps uses "will". But the introductory text of the maps in the other video simply says "planned development".
@@LilieIELTS Thank you Lilie for being such a great help. My test comes up in 3days and I'm a bit nervous.
wish me lucks...
All the luck in the world, all wished for you.😊
Cambridge 16 ✌️
An easy way to explain report ☺️
Thank You 😊
My pleasure 😊
Thank you so much,your all videos is very helpful
So nice of you.💜
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Dear, could you please tell me what are the tenses we can use to write answers for this type of questions? I used to write sentences like - can be seen .. I think my answer is wrong.. by watching this and reading comments I got an idea just now. my god what should I do now.. 🤦♀️😑 I do not have time to practice now
Hi, for a planned development, if the question uses "will", then you can use it as well. Otherwise, you need to use the tenses I share in this video: czcams.com/video/8Bsd8quNQw8/video.html
@@LilieIELTS I owe to you dear .. 🌷🌸 I'll watch
Is using contractions like "doesn't" allowed in formal writing?
Better not use it. I was careless, sorry.
You once said in one of your videos that we should not use 'will be' if the maps show any plan. But here you have used it. Why?
Hi, this is because the introductory text of these two maps uses "will" so we can use "will" as well.
But the introductory text of these maps (czcams.com/video/8Bsd8quNQw8/video.html) simply says "planned development".
Ohh, i understand. Thanks a lot. I have learnt so many things from your videos.🥰🥰
can you plz make video of direction map like north east....
Yes, I'll make one in the future.
very informative Thank you
Glad it was helpful!😊
why you have written 3 main paragraphs, isn't the rules says only 2 main paragraphs are valid in task-1 academics ?
Really informative and detailed video
Your channel is fantastic 💯❤️
But videos are very little
Sorry about that. New videos are on the way. Being a non-native English speaker, I have to learn before I can make a video.😊
Thank you💕 please upload more videos 🙏
Thanks for watching. I'll try my best.
Thank you..kindly tell me ur website?
You're welcome. Hope you'll find the site useful.
www.ieltsessaybank.com/
Easy writing task 1 upload more videos on previous year
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sorry,but you didnt mentioned entrace doors will be doubled?
Hi, I don't think that's a main feature. You can report it if you think it's really that important.😊
I could not understand the sentence "The Department entrance is on the left as [one facing the building]
"
hi, can u explain why you don't understand the words in the brackets?
I can not explain. by one you mean a person?
@@shamsiddinmatiakubov Yes, it means "a person" or "you": as you facing the building.
@@LilieIELTS Ok Understood Thank you
What should i do if i dont know the word concurse
Nice work
how i wish i could speak to you in directly
Thank You...
thanks a ton
Most welcome!😊 And thanks for watching.
Does ATM machines sound redundant?
it isn't wrong: app.ludwig.guru/s/atm+machines
@@LilieIELTS A great website!😀
could you please tall me what do you think about it i take the test after two days .
The two plans below depict the current site of an airport and how it will look one year later after the development.
To begin with, we can see that the size of the airport will become more bigger than the current one. starting from the departures and arrivals the airport after the development will have one more gate for each one.
Moreover, the size of the departures will remain the same, in addition the check in will be in the right and replaced by a bag drop. Also, a café will take place below it.
in the other side the size will be extended by adding a car hire to the right bottom of the arrivals. Besides that, it will have a café and an ATM as a new feature.
Furthermore, above the Security and the passport control. a shops will also be added to the plan next year.
The biggest changement at the airport will be the increase number of the gates. When ten gates will be added. Also, the sky train will take the place of the walkway.
thank you for your efforts.
Your speed is soo fast as always, you just started without thinking that whether the other students are getting or not.
I was reading a script, I am sorry. I think I have slowed down in newer videos.
It's to much longer than 150 words ??? It may be caused low band ? What would you say?
I agree that it's best not to write more than 200 words. But every writing task is different. Some charts have much more features than others so we have to be flexible.
@@LilieIELTS ok thanks
Good job
Awesome 😎👍 thanks miss
Glad you liked it. 😊
You have suggested in your other map video that we shouldn't use terms like "will /will be / going to be " . Rather we should use " is to /are to" because it makes more sense as these are just plans or maps which is not happened yet..but in this video you are using " will be " . I am getting confused here...Can you pls clarify this confusion ? My xm is knocking at door...so pls help as soon as you notice this ...I am big fan though ...it was just a confusion..love from Bangladesh ♥️♥️
Hi, this task itself uses "will" and that's why I used it. Please read the question again.
Can we write " doesn't" in IELTS writing?
No.
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You're welcome 😊
You are great.
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Love again from Pakistan
Very good lessons. Thank you.
Superb video
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In her other map video she told us to avoid using the word "will" but here she used them. Can somebody please correct me on that?
I was confused as well but later realized this is an older video. She might have corrected her self.
Hi, please read the introductory text of the maps in this video. It uses "will". That's why we can use it as well.
thanks for your information
So nice of you. 🙂
@@LilieIELTS can i have your instagram account ?
@@Artbyhoor Sorry, I'm not on IG.
@@LilieIELTS i need your favour to improve my skills for IELTS test . can you help me.
@@Artbyhoor Feel free to check out my writing blog. 😊
www.ieltsessaybank.com/
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Perfect
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I'm very sorry that I don't sell anything yet.
Here we cannot describe it in different paragraph
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Your speech is so fast thats why we have faced some obostacle for understanding
Sorry about that. I speak less quickly in my newer videos.
This is my exam night:(
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tomorrow is my exam please pray for me
THERE IS NO CONCLUSION ?
U don't need a conclusion. What U need is an overview.
keep making vedios
Thank you, I will. 🤛
The intro lack a variety of structures and vocabulary
It's a good rewrite of the original. It's neat. You don't need to change every word.
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U are cute
Are U a bot or human?😜
Why you speak in nose.
the voiceover in this video is way too fast; it’s prompting my anxiety 😤
Same she always make me confused
too much difficult explanation, boring.
Too much Ads makes tutorials distracting and also Disgusting