HOW TO COMPARE TWO POEMS OR TWO TEXTS IN A GCSE ESSAY: GRADE 9 MODEL ANSWER FRAMEWORK & EXPLANATION
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Struggling with comparing two texts in your GCSE exams? Maybe you have to compare two different poems or two different types of texts - but you don't know where to begin or how to even plan this type of essay? Not to worry - we've got you covered! Barbara, a qualified English teacher, walks you through a framework which will help you secure Level 9 marks in your essay if you practice and apply this framework in your essay writing!
Really helpful have my assessment in like 10mintues
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Failed bro what u doing in 10mins
Got my mock exam for English literature in 2 hours. Wish me luck! This really helped by the way:)
This was super useful!!!!! This will definitely stick in my mind whenever im doing comparison essays in class or exams, and ill definitely remember this when im doing my english lit GCSE!
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ive wanted a framework for so so long, my teacher couldnt give one in time and this is so useful, gbu
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Thank u so much that really helped I’ve got my English mocks 1st thing in the morning today and u really helped thxs
thank you so much! i always had problems with this topic
I heard of a tuition class, found out that everyone who did go to the class got straight A for English and lit. I found out that they only show your vids. Thanks for your help too wish you more subs
Thank You So Much!!!
Using this structure you can this use the follow layout for each point paragraph: PEPEEEL - Point, Explain, Point, Explain, Evidence, Evidence, Link
This was really helpful as I have mocks soon and we are practicing this next week so this is gonna help loads, thank you again!!
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good luck lad
@@joehill9720 thank you mate! appreciate it
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This was very usefull for my gcse in june. Thank you so much. :))))
Thanks!! This is really helpful
got my mock tommorow morning very helpful for how to start
Thank you so much this helped me a lot
Hunni !!! You are fantastic!!! Thx so much for teaching. Very detailed and informative .
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this is just great i cant belive i didnt come sooner to watch this!
This video is so underrated, it helped me a lot. Thank you.
This is so helpful omg its 11:05 PM and I have my english semester o level exam tomorrow this helped a lot!! ❤
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this was super easy to understand now thankyou
Good luck!! 😃
I absolutely loved this, thank you so much I didnt know how to structure a poem very well and now you have taught me. Thank you.
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Struggling with comparing two texts in your GCSE exams? Maybe you have to compare two different poems or two different types of texts - but you don't know where to begin or how to even plan this type of essay? Not to worry - we've got you covered! Barbara, a qualified English teacher, walks you through a framework which will help you secure Level 9 marks in your essay if you practice and apply this framework in your essay writing!
thank youuu!
You're welcome!!
This was so helpful. Thank you so much!
Glad it was helpful!
omg this actually helps fr I wish teachers explained it more briefly how like u
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super helpful. thanks :)
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Great video and very helpful. I like how applicable it is to any comparison question, very well done and well explained
Glad you enjoyed it!
thank you, would you add in points about rhyme scheme and type of poem/context when introducing idea in points or after embedding quotes?
tysm i think itll be helpful tmr
thank you so muchh :))) i was going to go in that exam and structure it so wrong now i can do it xx
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cheers barbara got my exam tmr
thank you so much i honestly had know idea how to do comparative essays
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Ah yes my first paper is tomorrow and i find this today
omg how did it go
@@indigo-nk2iu it was quite ok we got beyond the sky and earth.
@@mehh_01 ohh i think that's a different anthology, mine is power and conflict :) ughhh got my paper tomz
@@indigo-nk2iu oh ok good luck then :D
@@indigo-nk2iu same power and conflict only in yr 9 now but have eoy exams next Monday
Tnx for helping
Thank you..
Thanks ❤
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Thank you. This was very helpful :)
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This was very concise and easy to follow. Good job!
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The problem is I can’t find similarities or differences between the texts, are there any tips?
so useful and help me understand the structure
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super thankful for this I have a literature mock in two days 🙏🏽
You're welcome and good luck!!
Most useful 10 minutes and 17 seconds of my life
got my mock tmrw this helped fs
Good luck!
Helped frrrr, I'm in year 9 this is basically finding gold to me
That's awesome!!!! Glad it helped 😃
Thank you this is extremely helpful! If possible where could a sample/ model answer be found? That would really help thanks!
Awesome explanation!! Helped me a lot
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This helped so much thanks
I write a paragraph about poem A then one about B after because that's what ive been taught, is it recommended and ideal?
thank you !!
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does this also work for poems?
paper 1 tommorow thank you
Tomorrow is my gcse thank you for this🙏🏼🙏🏼
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can this be used for edexcel
thank you so much
Welcome 😊
is this a 30 marker question? english lit the comparing
Soo helpful thank you!
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@@FirstRateTutors I used this and i got an A!!
Can you do more video on how to do essays for Animal Farm in 1 month
Im really struggling!
Im so confused on how to write about theme, and how to write about structure (and what structure even is 😅) is there anyway u could release a video about these?
Does ur teacher even teach ☠️
My assessment is tomorrow and I didn’t quite revise I was to busy revising other things but this was really helpful thank you so much 😁
I was just sleeping... But yeah this is beautiful
well, I have my English lit in 11 hours and I am doomed, but now I know how to structure this essay so I have just gained some more marks??
Watching this a day before my exam😂
I can't see the board.
can i talk about something similar about to quotes and something diffrent about those same quotes in the same paragraph
Really helpful...thankyou
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This is very very helpful thank you! I would just say that I think you sometimes overly repeat yourself, but then again I understand that this is also aimed to help a younger audience :)
Repetition is quite helpful because sometimes it goes in one ear and leaves from the other. But the Repetition helps to remember it, perhaps for some people
Just got my mock back I got a 5 outta 9 thx alot I lost marks cuz of my mistakes
Thank you this was helpful, although would it be possible to get a high grade with only a thesis and two developed points, rather than three?
I got a 7 doing that in my mocks but i really dont recommend doing that
my mock exam in 10 hours, very helpful
Best of luck!
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Are the devices ur comparing have to be the same e.g simile from one poem being compared by another simile
I guess it would be useful for them to be the same, but you could compare a simile and metaphor and compare the atmosphere/mood/ideas they both create
thanks
You're welcome!
can you please do a separate one for comparing poetry where u only get one text and compare because im in y10 and its my first time and my teacher did not teach us how to compare poetry and im really strugling
It's in the works :-)
Please do model answers
wait so each point is equal to point mark ? so if you had a 10 marker would you need to have 10 points
The question is level assessed, meaning it isn’t marked per point, the whole of the work is assessed and judged on its fluency and quality, if you look on AQA mark schemes you’ll see that it has levels rather than specific points
omg she is so beautiful!!
Thank you! :-)
i really struggle to find points to write from the essays, anyone got any tips?
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do we have to include context in our answers for grade 9
Yes when relevant but not in every paragraph.
Can this model be used for edexcel too?
Absolutely
Thank you ❤️🥺
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thanks gcse literature exam in 2 days 😢
amazing :)
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is this applicable to the wjec eduqas exam board?
Yes it is - any exam board 😊
@@FirstRateTutors Thank you so much for your help!
i want you to teach me
Have trials tomorrow.
Introduction
the writers effectively present the *keywords* through a variety of literary techniques or language techniques or structural techniques
then saying that the writers effectively present these either in very similar ways or in very different ways
Point 1
Begin with the leading text with “Firstly”
Mention how does text A states the Keywords and then in the same sentence compare it with the Text B using keywords.
Quote from text A and mention techniques and again support it with your point from text B
Close of the first example with a conclusion from text A and B
Similar points use ‘similarly’ and use “on the other hand” when comparing different points
Point 2
Repeat the same format with a different point using “secondly”
Point 3
Repeat the same format with a different point using “Additionally” or “thirdly”
State more points if you have time
Conclusion
Restate the key points from the question
Conclude and give final remarks on both of the texts
Thank you so much you have helped me a lot thanks
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Keep Up The Good Work! Thanks always for your support :-)
First paper is in 9 hour!!!!
good luck :)
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Can not see clearly the board.
With that grammar you are not clearly getting good grades
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Why is Blud yapping so much just say the points
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