Reading the essay that got me into Duke University

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  • čas přidán 20. 07. 2024
  • Hi! This is my first video in a college application series I will be doing. This video is just me reading my common app essay and giving some tips on writing it. I hope you like it!
    Feel free to contact me with any questions at annagotskind00@gmail.com.
    My instagram is @annagotskind.

Komentáře • 50

  • @SWonYT
    @SWonYT Před 6 lety +65

    Guys, I think I've found my wife.
    Just kidding, but this was beautifully written. This has truly inspired me.
    Signed, a chorus nerd who loves science who also has duke as his first choice.

  • @will-ye
    @will-ye Před 5 lety +38

    Huh, my essay was on a Twitter bot that retweeted garlic. Whatever works, I suppose lol

  • @allisonshev.8685
    @allisonshev.8685 Před 6 lety +31

    I love this! You did a great job on this essay, not only was it well written but I loved how you combined CRISPR with Choir, so clever. Have fun at Duke!

  • @donavanalbano8478
    @donavanalbano8478 Před 5 lety +11

    Anna, that was an incredibly composed and written essay! I thoroughly enjoyed your flow and connection between your personal interests and hobbies. As a current English major, I can truly say that your personal statement draws amazing connections. In regards to the advice you provided at the beginning of your video, I couldn't agree more. Thank you for sharing this with the world!

  • @nailahhuq1238
    @nailahhuq1238 Před 6 lety +23

    loved the concept! haven't heard anything like this

  • @karenherbst4016
    @karenherbst4016 Před 6 lety +12

    And good luck at Duke! You will love it.

  • @nuelle2361
    @nuelle2361 Před 4 lety +2

    Wow. Your writing skills are incredible. And the creativity aswell. I would've never seen how CRISPR and choir could relate to one another but you managed to blend two things that show your interests so well. Just wow man. Props to you.

  • @Elliejsoh
    @Elliejsoh Před 5 lety +29

    wait this is probably one of the best college essays i've come across on youtube. really love ur writing voice!

  • @avalynn8168
    @avalynn8168 Před 5 lety +2

    Yay! Congrats! Duke is my dream school and i am in Duke's TIP (Talent Identification Program).

  • @maddymc5775
    @maddymc5775 Před 3 lety +1

    This gave me chills! I was wondering about what videos I should watch to help me develop my AP Lang/SAT essays, especially on finding historical information.

  • @karenherbst4016
    @karenherbst4016 Před 6 lety +10

    brilliant essay!!!

  • @noanir1722
    @noanir1722 Před 4 lety +6

    WOW Thank you sooo much for sharing! I'm applying ED to Duke and your essay is by far the best I've ever come across. Duke is so lucky :)

  • @wolfmangoland7972
    @wolfmangoland7972 Před rokem

    Your writing skills and creativity are incredible.

  • @maureensass2329
    @maureensass2329 Před 6 lety +4

    this is amazing

  • @SmileyEssie
    @SmileyEssie Před 6 lety +6

    first subscriber! :) loved your essay so much!! it really showed who you are and your passion and interests! can’t wait for more of your videos!

  • @vampstar3813
    @vampstar3813 Před 4 lety +13

    im a freshman and duke is my dream school 🥺 congrats girl

  • @alyssamckay7809
    @alyssamckay7809 Před 6 lety +9

    wow, the last line was powerful! great job!

  • @raahilmadhiwala252
    @raahilmadhiwala252 Před 5 lety +3

    Hey do you think you could read your why duke essay? I’m planning on going ED and am having trouble making a memorable why duke essay and want some insight on what you did. Thanks!

  • @Zeenia
    @Zeenia Před 5 lety

    Which question on the common app did you choose to answer with this essay?

  • @talonfelisa
    @talonfelisa Před 5 lety +3

    Ayyyy CRISPR proteins!! I'm building a section of amino acids of an anti-CRISPR (acrii4a) for science olympiad this year.

  • @haleyxanne7750
    @haleyxanne7750 Před 5 lety +2

    I searched this up because I’m in 7th grade and got invited to take a STA from this university. But I really enjoyed this video even if I’m not going to college soon.

  • @abbyshlesinger7679
    @abbyshlesinger7679 Před 5 lety +2

    omg anna you're my idol

  • @taylormari2033
    @taylormari2033 Před 6 lety +3

    Hey I am currently very stressed about writing my college essays lol and I have a quick question. I feel that my passion for science and learning is probably the most defining part of my character, BUT I don't want my essay to seem broad, cliche, or like I am just trying to impress the college! Do you think if I told the story about the time at a science museum when I realized how excited science made me that this topic would be specific enough? Btw I wrote a full essay this morning about how adopting a positive mindset has changed my life then trashed it bc I know that is too cliche hahha helpppp. This was a very helpful video btw!!

    • @annagotskind8842
      @annagotskind8842  Před 6 lety +2

      Hi, I'm glad you liked my video. Picking an essay topic an definitely be stressful and I wrote several that I had to toss. At the end of the day, write what you feel represents you. Any topic can make for a great essay if its written well and truly comes from you. If science is your passion and you can convey that through your essay then you're golden!

    • @taylormari2033
      @taylormari2033 Před 6 lety

      Anna G. Awesome, thanks so much!!

  • @nancysanchez600
    @nancysanchez600 Před 6 lety +3

    Hi I’m a senior in high school and I was wondering if duke has a bachelor degree in nursing ?

    • @oliverlikescheetos
      @oliverlikescheetos Před 6 lety

      Hi Nancy, Duke does not have a nursing program for those entering college for the first time. I graduated from UC Berkeley in Sociology and will be attending Duke's 16 month accelerated Bachelor of Nursing (ABSN). It only accepts student's who completed a bachelors degree in a non-nursing field.

    • @beingadaora9478
      @beingadaora9478 Před 5 lety

      @@oliverlikescheetos hi. I'm looking to apply for an accelerated nursing program. Could you please drop a social media handle where I can reach you?

    • @oliverlikescheetos
      @oliverlikescheetos Před 5 lety

      Ig: nurse.oliver

    • @beingadaora9478
      @beingadaora9478 Před 5 lety

      @@oliverlikescheetos thanks. I messaged you!

  • @priyashak2824
    @priyashak2824 Před 5 lety

    What's your skincare routine?

    • @annagotskind8842
      @annagotskind8842  Před 5 lety

      I do the 10 step by Sokoglam sokoglam.com/pages/the-korean-skin-care-routine!

  • @pattylilly3192
    @pattylilly3192 Před 5 lety +2

    What's it like going to a Catholic school?

    • @annagotskind8842
      @annagotskind8842  Před 5 lety +1

      Although Duke was founded by Methodists and Quakers it is not really a religious school. The chapel is a beautiful building on campus but all religious organizations are voluntary and there is not an emphasis placed on Catholicism on campus. I myself am a Jew so I attend services at the Freemen center on campus, there are also Muslim organizations as well and those who are Catholic have the opportunity to join that community.

  • @melscool
    @melscool Před 4 lety

    They already gave me a scholarship for duke I’m surprised

  • @lilianamartel2343
    @lilianamartel2343 Před 5 lety

    I’m going to duke university soon I wanted to know if it’s a good school

  • @yusufmahsan1056
    @yusufmahsan1056 Před 4 lety

    Can't hear anything.

  • @peppa_pig_
    @peppa_pig_ Před 6 lety +2

    sounds a bit contrived and pretentious im sure you probably had stellar grades though