How to Write About Structure in a Poetry Comparison Essay

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  • čas přidán 2. 12. 2017
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Komentáře • 16

  • @theravenclawstudent5105
    @theravenclawstudent5105 Před 5 lety +5

    This term, one of our classes were about writing about structure of a short story, this really helped me in that class. And I scored 88% because of this.... thank you sir!

  • @shakibam8356
    @shakibam8356 Před 6 lety +4

    You are honestly the best! Thank you soooo much sir

  • @whocares3228
    @whocares3228 Před 6 lety +6

    Good video sir pls do this for all of power and conflict thxs

  • @forfob2955
    @forfob2955 Před 5 lety +1

    This was just stressing me cos that answer was better than anything I could ever do and you were destroying her 😭 BUT NOW I SHALL MAKE NON OF HER MISTAKES! (Theoretically)

  • @AF-yc4fx
    @AF-yc4fx Před 6 lety +3

    Helped me pass gcse

  • @marley942
    @marley942 Před rokem

    I don’t know how to include structure :( In my school it’s taught as intro, 3 ping pong compare paragraphs and conclusion. I include a bit but I feel I need more

  • @w.j.3931
    @w.j.3931 Před 6 lety +6

    I am surprised this scored 28 out of 30!

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  Před 6 lety +8

      WJ Kpop feel free to write a better one! I’ll make a video on it.

    • @mafftheholy8370
      @mafftheholy8370 Před 5 lety +6

      @@MrSallesTeachesEnglish dammmmmnnnnnn, Mr Salles ain't takin' your !@£$.

  • @katherinebloomer9254
    @katherinebloomer9254 Před 3 lety +1

    Did this student know you? A little harsh saying 'rubbish' so often! Unnecessary/superfluous. Wasting time and words? Just noticed the age of this video - the quality and style so different now - accessible and encouraging 😊

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  Před 3 lety +3

      I have been a little harsh in my time, and wish I could say it is now a cured habit. Your alternatives are preferable. I'm glad that I am improving though.

    • @katherinebloomer9254
      @katherinebloomer9254 Před 3 lety +1

      I think you have been honed by lockdown and the views /subscriber numbers and pupil comments show you are an inspiring teacher 😊

  • @yonaw740
    @yonaw740 Před 5 lety

    Isn't the introduction supposed to include context??

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  Před 5 lety +2

      Yes, that will work. Context can go anywhere. Your teacher probably tells you to put it in the introduction to make sure that you don't forget to include it in the essay as a whole

    • @yonaw740
      @yonaw740 Před 5 lety

      So why in the case of this student did you say it was unnecessary