Here's a song I wrote a while back, tell me way I can approve Verse 1: I wake up in the morning, feeling like I'm trapped In my own mind, it's like I'm constantly attacked By negative thoughts, they never seem to stop They tell me that I'm worthless, that I'll never be on top Chorus: Depression, it's a heavy weight Dragging me down, can't escape Feels like I'm drowning, can't breathe But I know I gotta fight to be free Verse 2: People say "just think positive", like it's that easy But they don't know the demons inside, they don't see The darkness that surrounds me, suffocating my soul It's like I'm in a black hole, losing all control Chorus: Depression, it's a heavy weight Dragging me down, can't escape Feels like I'm drowning, can't breathe But I know I gotta fight to be free Verse 3: Sometimes I feel like giving up, like there's no point in trying But then I remember the people who love me, who keep me from dying I know I'm not alone, even when it feels that way I gotta keep pushing forward, gotta find a brighter day Chorus: Depression, it's a heavy weight Dragging me down, can't escape Feels like I'm drowning, can't breathe But I know I gotta fight to be free Outro: To all my brothers and sisters struggling with depression I know it's hard, but don't give up, keep pushing You're not alone, there's help out there Together we can overcome, we can show we care.
That song would be like 30 seconds long. Theres barely any beats you could actually rap this over, since most of them are made for 16bar verses. You Verses have 4 bars, wich means your Chorus lyrically starts wayy before the chrous of basically any beat out there. If you rap slower you might be able to stretch it to 8 bars but thats still only halfway Also, you could try to improve your rhyming. Its just ab scheme with usually 2 syllable rhymes
Thank you for the kind words 🙌 I truly appreciate it! The 2nd one is called “Big Bossy” and the 3rd is called “signals” - you can find em on streaming services if you search Dominico Andretti
Nah the fourth one exists but CZcams cut it short… which was an external factor. Our sanity to live is directly correlated with our pursuit of meaningful goals. I would ask yourself the question, “what would be the thing I would do if failure was not an option” and then pursue that goal as if failure is not an option… because if truly pursued, success is inevitable
Aye nigga that 3rd one was hard I need dat 💯
“Signals” by Dominico Andretti and Kaipora 🙌
You're allowed to say that
@@theshinobi3790clearly bro he’s black or else bro wouldn’t said it
@@theshinobi3790 he’s black why else would he say it
@@A.l.o.n.e12_00 Bro changed his profile photo
That 4th one went crazy 🔥🔥🔥
HAHAHAHAHAHA
That was also your mom’s favorite one
@@dominicoandretti469 why you getting defensive bro 😂
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
@@dominicoandretti469 bro knows he fd up
The 4th one was definitly the best one
the fourth one was so fire
my favorite style of rap is the 4th one
Wow this is so original 🥇
4 th :- do not rap 😂
Me who watched it twice to find the 4th one
@@dominicoandretti469bro is rlly pressed
@@dominicoandretti469Nah bro took it to the heart
The forth one 👀
90's raps are the most legendary rap
So many good MCs at that time
See… I personally hateee early rap . All of it.😅
@@Ravenortara imagine having awful taste
@@tss1473ik bro prob loves juice wrld
hip hop styles today are way more diverse and unique but the emcees in the 90’s were more talented at rapping, on average
Bro that 2nd one flow is Damm crazy🔥💀
Appreciate you bro! Song is “Big Bossy” by Dominico Andretti
@@dominicoandretti469 blud thought he was serious☠️
Noo
Bro’s copying Baby Keem 💀
Frrr
First one was the most flowie thing ever
Thank you !!! It’s called “Crazy” by Dominico Andretti
New sub also can you do DddDduDu by blackpink fast rap?
So treu
czcams.com/video/4tamP9hCWh8/video.htmlfeature=shared
@ImaDriveThroughTheBurgerKingthat's not saying much tbh
I know it got copyrighted but What was the 4th one tho?
It’s called “Devoured” it’s on my Spotify
“Devoured” by Dominico Andretti 🙏🏻
how did it get copyrighted if it's his song
@@dominicoandretti469 ^
Trap
Told them wake up! I ain't going down like Cosby
Yooooo!!!!! 🙌
I likes how he showed the 4th style.
Lol it got flagged
@@dominicoandretti469 what was the genre tho
@@dominicoandretti469 why would it get flagged??
@@antoinegibson412 copyright
And now I love this guy💜
u own a new subscriber
🙏🏻
I love that you like BTS, I just subbed to you
The 3rd was such a vibe ngl
That song is called “signals” with Kaipora
@@dominicoandretti469 ah ty!
Agreed
rightt
The 4th one:where r u guys?
You think so?
3rd goes hard and the 2nd too. 🔥 good stuff Dominico!
Fourth one is fire 🔥🔥🔥
Ik Right
Yes it is
He skip coz he can’t 😅
The 4th one was my favourite.
😂
🤣🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂mine too
I actually went back to check if i missed it. You got me bro =))))
@@iamraiz haha
aye that was fire, can i get the 3rd song name?
“Signals” By Dominico Andretti and Kaipora
damn,4th one's str8 fire!!! on G
I’m glad you like it! Come back anytime a
WE GETTIN BACK TO HOOD WITH THIS ONE 🔥🔥🔥
Omggg the 4th one was amazinggggg!
Yep, that one’s gonna win a Grammy
That Sidney Crosby bar went crazzzzy🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️❌❌❌❌🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️
Ayeee! Thank you ! 🙏 song is called “big bossy” by Dominico Andretti
The first one was amazing. Can you make a full music video using melodic house
Was bouta clown you but that 3rd one smacked fr
😂 bro anything is fair game in the CZcams comment section! That ones called “Signals” by Kaiproa and Dominico Andretti on streaming
the last one is fire 🔥
Signals by Dominico Andretti and kaipora 🙏🏻
@@dominicoandretti469 can i know the name of second ones namr
This is fire, keeping moving forward 🔥🔥🔥👍🏾
Yo i appreciate that ✌️
@@dominicoandretti469 , ofc np :)
Nah the 4th was lit 🔥 🔥 might need to make a music video 🎉
You just got yourself a new subscriber
bro changed his personality w each one
bro went wild on the 2nd one... lol
3 the 3, styles of rap traps da best
The trap style is kind of lit tho 🔥🔥🔥
#3 is fire
Ayyee thank you!
That song is called “Signals - Dominico Andretti X Kaipora”
4th one was so good it wasn’t there 💀
Wow 💥❤️
no lyrics, no beat, just straight ass 🔥🔥🔥
So you like it? Or you don’t ?
he means it’s straight ass fire but he put the emoji
@@dominicoandretti469Your music is ass my guy😂
I like the ✨trap✨
👇🏾
Easily the best
Yooo 🙏 appreciate the you
Hey the 4 one was so good it made me fall off my chair
The 4th was so good I cant remember hearing it
Damn you are a real lyricist in hip Hop rap music
Thanks for the love 🥂
Has no flow tho
Here's a song I wrote a while back, tell me way I can approve
Verse 1:
I wake up in the morning, feeling like I'm trapped
In my own mind, it's like I'm constantly attacked
By negative thoughts, they never seem to stop
They tell me that I'm worthless, that I'll never be on top
Chorus:
Depression, it's a heavy weight
Dragging me down, can't escape
Feels like I'm drowning, can't breathe
But I know I gotta fight to be free
Verse 2:
People say "just think positive", like it's that easy
But they don't know the demons inside, they don't see
The darkness that surrounds me, suffocating my soul
It's like I'm in a black hole, losing all control
Chorus:
Depression, it's a heavy weight
Dragging me down, can't escape
Feels like I'm drowning, can't breathe
But I know I gotta fight to be free
Verse 3:
Sometimes I feel like giving up, like there's no point in trying
But then I remember the people who love me, who keep me from dying
I know I'm not alone, even when it feels that way
I gotta keep pushing forward, gotta find a brighter day
Chorus:
Depression, it's a heavy weight
Dragging me down, can't escape
Feels like I'm drowning, can't breathe
But I know I gotta fight to be free
Outro:
To all my brothers and sisters struggling with depression
I know it's hard, but don't give up, keep pushing
You're not alone, there's help out there
Together we can overcome, we can show we care.
That shit was cringe as fuck
It’s AI
@@munendrapalsingh7964 no its not, i wrote this back in 2019 as beginners project
@@VenomIsBack87 I’m sorry but ai also shows this song when someone asks it to write a song on depression
That song would be like 30 seconds long. Theres barely any beats you could actually rap this over, since most of them are made for 16bar verses. You Verses have 4 bars, wich means your Chorus lyrically starts wayy before the chrous of basically any beat out there. If you rap slower you might be able to stretch it to 8 bars but thats still only halfway
Also, you could try to improve your rhyming. Its just ab scheme with usually 2 syllable rhymes
2nd one sounded goofy at first but then it slapped 🔥😮💨
I love it when you showed us the fourth one
Every one seems to love that part
I think you ment 3 styles of rap in 50 seconds
Nah, I meant 4… but the 4th got flagged for copyright so I just cut it lol
Oh lol
Man said 4 but did 3
Last one got bumped for copyright even though I own the beat ? Lol
The 4th one was like Dats a (w)rap of this video
Man the fourth number one reminds me of Eminem, it was so fast my brain couldn't comprehend.
The second beat named?
“Big Bossy - Dominico Andretti”
U only did 3.....
Haha the last one got flagged for copyright issues even though I own the beat?! Thanks for listening anyway!
@@dominicoandretti469 lol yw
Aye mah Nigga 2nd one sound like you from one of us light skin niggaz I love dat so much no homo
I know a compliment when I see one! Lol thank you
The 4th one is just fireeeeeeeeee🙈✨
Trap is my favorite style of rap
Rumours have it that to this day I'm still waiting for the 4th style
Lol It’s in my other video of this clip
I love the part when he showed the 4th one, the forth one was THE BEST!
The 4th one was dope🔥🔥🔥
Didn’t know the 1st one was even Rap lol
I remember getting my first mic for Xmas to
Best Christmas present ever! Am I right?
Wooo you rocked it man 🔥
The 4th 1.💯
The 3rd one is your voice..... 😮 I can't believe 😮
My boy went full baby keem with that 2nd one
Do you like baby keem too?
The fourth one would've got him put on a blacklist
bro the 3rd one pads sidechain and bass plugin was sick man, give me house production tutorial brother
Honestly I don't like any of the styles you've chosen here, but I can't deny you are talented
Aye 4th one went hard
4 be like
am i a joke to you
2nd one is what every rapper is doing
Like who?
Cool⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️
Ayyeee appreciate you man!
Amazing asFff all of them are banging! Love you music bro!🤩
Yooo! I appreciate that! I go by “Dominico Andretti” on Spotify and streaming services 🙌
he sounds like Lil YUachty in the 1st and 3rd rap styles
Liked it
I loved the 4th one
He is soo finee ❤
2 and 3 are my fav…you are awesome ❤
Thank you for the kind words 🙌 I truly appreciate it! The 2nd one is called “Big Bossy” and the 3rd is called “signals” - you can find em on streaming services if you search Dominico Andretti
Ngl you should try making pop I think you would also be good at it
Thank you! You should check out “come through” by Kaipora and me, + “signals” by Kaiproa and me (Dominico Andretti) and lmk what you think
my favorite style was the 4th one hahahaha
That 4th hitted hard
Lol 😂 thanks for listening
2 sounded like baby keem ngl
the fourth one was the best one and he did it on purpose to make us comment about it because it was so good
Thank you for your support. Yes that 4th song is one of my top streaming songs. Do you think I should do another track like that?
I like " Yung Lean "
Love from Thailand 🇹🇭
#1 lil mosey
#2 drake
#3 idk who
is no one gonna talk about how he didn't even blink once through the whole video
You have to watch very closely to find the blink
#3 was dope
Trap was just drunk Kendrick.
lol does Kendrick even drink?
I like the 4th one its fire
Well you are a fire lover
@@dominicoandretti469 LOL never thought of that😸
The 4th one hit different
Just like your daddy
You mean 3 one where is 4th 😂
Seeeshhh♥️
🙏 🙌
2nd one 🔥
That first one was fire 🔥
🙌 “Crazy” by Dominico Andretti
Thank you
Damn the 4th one is like my sanity to live
Non-existent
Nah the fourth one exists but CZcams cut it short… which was an external factor. Our sanity to live is directly correlated with our pursuit of meaningful goals. I would ask yourself the question, “what would be the thing I would do if failure was not an option” and then pursue that goal as if failure is not an option… because if truly pursued, success is inevitable
I loved the 2nd one❤
4th one ☝🏾
The fourth one is drill
😎
Guys! The forth one is Eminen
That's why he didn't do it
Aye mf I see you tryna show off that lyrical intelligence on the low💯😭😂
AYY THAT FIRST ONE HARD ASF
Thank you!!! That one is called “Crazy” by Dominico Andretti … it was my first song to hip 1 million plays on Spotify 🙏
My favorite part was when he showed the 4rth
My fAvoRiTe PaRT was when people left 700 of the same comment
house rap is literally just house