Uncovering The Criminal Underworld Behind Minecraft
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- čas přidán 2. 08. 2024
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This video covers the basic history of Minecraft and mainly Minecraft's many issues such as its criminal underworld. I cover pay to win servers, Minecraft's EULA changes, the Minecraft marketplace and the deep criminal underworld behind hacking in Minecraft. I also cover the dramas surrounding one of Minecraft's biggest youtubers- Dream
Sorry the video took so long to get here, I learned a lot from making this and am still trying to improve the quality. Next video should be expected by next month.
Please give me feedback as I'm always trying to improve!
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CHAPTERS
0:00 Intro
0:47 Minecraft's Creation
1:35 The downfall of notch
2:06 Microsoft's Acquisition of Minecraft
2:55 The Minecraft Marketplace
7:05 Minecraft Servers
14:50 Minecraft's EULA policy
17:18 Minecraft's Community
22:57 Conclusion
CREDITS
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You can find a full credits report on my website.
docs.google.com/document/d/1_...
Thanks to @VisualVenture for some of the inspiration for this video. - Hry
Erm… what the sigma?
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pin of shame
bro i dont understand creators with less than 50k subs making video essays. Keep up the good work!!!
small youtubers put in more effort than larger ones 💀
@@spritey12 until they eventually get big and drop the ball, most cases not all of them.
If I had a nickel for every time a game about building things with blocks had a criminal underworld, I'd have two nickels. Which isn't a lot, but it's weird that it happened twice.
What's the other thing
As someone who did roblox trading. Roblox traders are vile creatures that will use whatever means to increase their value.
@@TournavisTheBlind oh roblox
@@Tridentofmemeswait I thought it was animal crossing
@@gwenchapman5068 💀
okay what the hell? when i clicked on this video i assumed a youtuber with atleast 100k subs. 1.2k. 1.2k subscribers. keep uploading, you're going to go so far.. i support you all the way 😢
Thanks!
We all thought same tbh
@@bam_marks bro you content is amazing I’m subbing
bro has 1.58K now 😂😂
@@bam_marksdude really nice work here. top notch
This is super high quality, I was surprised to see that you only have 1.21k subs. Great video!
same
Ayo 1.21
this editing is insane
only error i personally saw was at 7:27 where it says unfail advantage
Thanks! I’m still trying to work out the kinks- sharp eye!
@@bam_marksnah bro this video is crazy good. Super high quality. Keep doing this and you'll get so far in no time. Subbed btw
Please give me honest feedback! I'm always trying to improve.
You and I make somewhat similar content so I’ll actually give you some feedback
Firstly the editing is great, on point and slightly too fast in certain points
Secondly the intro could use some more context, the intro sequence is cool but the first few seconds need to get someone’s attention and simply explaining the basic idea of your video isn’t ALWAYS the best idea since you repeat the title and thumbnail, instead tell the viewer a small part of the story and video and then go from the beginning
And lastly, try to be more connected to the viewer, you are a person, act like one rather than a voiceover for a story that you’re telling
Also try to balance your audio and music a little bit better, sometimes you go quiet while the audio doesn’t, the music and voice go quiet, or the music goes too quiet
I’d recommend getting some more unique music, similar music makes a style and tone but sometimes it can get repetitive within your own videos and other videos which just make you look like another character
And lastly id recommend explaining your idea straightforward, I was 3 minutes into your video and you were going nowhere while simply telling me information, tell the viewer the backstory (notch’s story) then give them the main idea and THEN give them the examples and their individual problems
Overall you’ve got the style, the effort and the quality but you need more experience and a balance of pace and tone
I like the video but i feel like you use big words for no reason other than to sound smart
Your music is too loud in your audio balance, it's hard to hear you.
You are very good at this. You have a lot of potential. Your video has the quality and effort and time that most 100k sub or even 1mil sub channels have. You have a big responsibility with stuff like this. You are good at saying not just what needs to be said but also doing it in a unbiased way. You are also good at saying things in a very effective and efficient amount of time and even include information for those who may not know about a topic that much just in case. Good job man. A warning though if you keep doing these types of videos however. Your task in these videos is to present information. Make sure the information is true. It hurts more than it helps to spread misinformation. I believe in you man and wish for you to succeed.
@@andrewwebb917 yeah- I agree it was a bit loud at times.
According to the European law, you need to change the guidelines ONLY AFTER you notified the playerbase. The EULA counts as a guideline and it has been illegally changed (they didn't notify about it directly through email or their game, you don't need your Twitter account to log into the game so it doesn't count)
Love the use of classical music gives it a really timeless feeling
Hello! I heard you wanted some feedback, so here I am.
First of all, let me come clear and say that this video is really good and you have a lot of potential. Whilst watching the video, I've noticed a few things that I personally would change. I'm a professional video editor and really experienced in cinematography, so see this as constructive criticism and not a personal attack.
Starting at 0:16 I see you use these really cool motion graphics, but you don't really see this ever again in the video except for transitions which is pretty sad.
0:25 SkyDoesMinecraft is introduced and teased a lot, but never talked about in the video
Audio transition at 0:46 is very harsh
0:52 The intro made it feel like you are going with a documentary style. I personally would not use the Impact font for that
1:31 The way the text is structured and shown really reminds me of a standard CZcams video and not of a documentary
2:24 If you are going for a documentary-style I would change the way the titles are structured and appear on screen. This goes for most of the titles in the video
2:58 Random boom sound in the middle of camera movement?
3:02 Personally I would change the way that the red line stops at marketplace once you say marketplace. The general movement and the continuing of the red lines I'd say is good
3:16 That is create mod, a Java Edition mod. Not a Bedrock addon
3:39 The developer image is very dark and hard to see, especially on mobile. You might love retention here
3:47 XBox and PlayStation logos are very dark and do not fit the background color
3:49 You are overusing this distortion effect
4:07 After you are going more to the price, it's really hard for the eyes to look at as there's such a large empty space next to it. Rather make the image larger and a little less to the left
4:29 The movement of the image stops before the clip stops
5:07 So much whitespace at the right side of the screen
5:11 Camera angle is confusing for the viewer
5:32 Camera angle is confusing for the viewer
6:31 Angle of questionmark is confusing for the viewer
6:41 Icon is incredibly blurry
6:50 Camera angle of shown text is confusing
7:25 Typos:
Hack clients = Hacked clients
Unfail Advantage = Unfair Advantage
7:53 Red effect is very linear
8:50 *Check your sources!* The player is not called Anni Cenpi but Anna Senpai
8:56 Camera angle is weird
9:38 Lightning ends before clip end
9:47 I would also mention that after MIRAI was published, people used to it DDOS CloudFlare, the PlayStation Network and more, so the viewer knows that this is more than just a simple DDOS program.
10:55 and Java applications
10:58 No, they are not .exe files. Minecraft runs without a sandbox, so the moment the Java program has been loaded, they can just steal all your data. The way you say that .exe files can have exploits, suggests that .jar files are *never* exploits, which is incorrect and can lead to more people getting hacked
11:12 Weird camera angle
11:35 Angle of exclamation mark is confusing for the viewer
12:01 Image is (again) very dark and you may lose retention from mobile viewers
12:09 I would make the red line hit a dot about Pay2Win servers when you say the words "Pay2Win servers"
13:31 Distortion effect is blocking the view/making it confusing
14:43 Angle of question mark is confusing
15:41 😭the questionmarkkkkkkkkk
16:05 You are in a very, very dangerous legal part here. I would but this into a part at the end with "My own opinion". The video feels like you are trying to state facts, not give out your meaning. In this context you might get some legal problems here. Probably not, I don't think Mojang would do anything but be careful :)
16:12 You can see the end of the image at the top left corner
16:52 The camera angle is very confusing
17:27 The jump cut looks like you are switching the mountain
20:28 Yes the contact was very weird and questionable, it was not explicit
22:54 "Hate" disappears for just a very short amount of time, which is confusing
22:58 😭
23:23 You are going back to this web of things, though you rarely used it in the video
23:36 The subscribe button and other video show up very late. Most people will have already clicked off the video and not even have a chance to see your other video
General stuff I would change
- All replay shots (angles, movement speed, contents)
- Don't use the Impact font if you're going for a documentary style video
- Structure the titles differently if you're going for a documentary style video
- Check your sources!
- When going through multiple images (mostly the ones where it's from top to bottom), reduce motion blur or let them stay on screen longer, it's really hard to read
Don't see this as an attack, but rather as feedback. I really enjoyed the video and I think you have lots of potential. Most of the things I said were for if you want to super-perfect your video. Otherwise I'd say 8/10! Good job.
DAMN, an essay! I’m going to be reading this later! Thanks for the feedback! 🙂
@@bam_marks No problem!
What's wrong with the impact font lmao? And why do you hate that non-straight question mark so much? LOL
And quite a few of the "mistakes" you pointed out could be countered with: it's just a stylistic choice. Your criticisms about it are still valid tho
I thought this was made by a huge commentary youtuber or something at first great video bro
This is honestly pretty high quality dude! Keep it up
wow i was actually amazed by this video as its similar to the stuff I make, keep it up 🔥
official chicken minecraft
Same 😂
how the heck do you have that many subs and one video
C H I C K E N
@@ineophobe I have a video with 1.4m views
But maybe chicken 🍗 bots or he’s famous for commenting on videos.
15:26 Incredible, it changed my life ngl...
Woah. Such high production quality, you’re gonna be big someday, good luck!
This is by far the best video I've seen about this topic. Keep up the good work
Amazing video this very well edited and the style is amazing you'll be big one day just keep it up!
The editing is insanely good! it makes you very much stand out! :D i wish you the best luck with future of your content!
Editing looks amazing, im shocked your channel is as small as it is
Probably one of the best short-form documentaries I've seen for a CZcams channel of this size, nicely done! Unfortunately in some parts of your video it was difficult to hear your voice over the soundtrack. I'm not gonna pretend like i have anything else to add since others have already phrased these ideas quite well.
Just landed on this channel. Love the editing style! Congrats on hitting the algorithm! 🔥
Dude your editing is absolutely amazing! I wish I could edit like you😅
Amazing video. It will blow up. Keep up the amazing work man!
The quality of this video is worth far more than 1.2k subs. When i went to sub i expected to see like 50k at the very least. But 1.2k? Thats insane. I hope you get the subs you deserve.
Woah, im impressed ur so underrated im happy to be part of the community since i subscribed, but the editing is wow continue it!
Holy moly this is top tier. Earned a sub. Keep editing at this quality, with consistency and Itll get you far
great video! well researched and super concise. keep up the good work!
Im honestly surprised that you only have 1.39k subs with this editing quality. Keep it up! ❤
1.55k*
Bro the editing is crazy good keep it up
This is such a high quality and really edited video! You should have more subscribers 👍
I think that by the end of this week, the video will be really popular and you'll blow up!
I thought this video probably had around 500k views until I saw another comment pointing out your sub count.
Hope you get big soon!
Nice bro your now on 10k views and 1500 subs 6k more since I saw and 300 more subs keep it up
Wow, when I saw this video and it’s quality I thought you’d have like at least 500k subs but you don’t. You are very underrated!
highest quality video i’ve seen in a while. you deserve tons more recognition
Thanks
U are highly underatted . This video has everythingDecent editing Nice clips everything keep it up 😊
This is an AMAZING video and only 400 views this needs more popularity
What the.. subs the views , I think you won the power ball! Then again, it’s a very wonderful video! Well deserved well-deserved.
thought it was a naughty symbol at the beginning when it zoomed out lol.. awesome video, thought you had like 1 mil subscribers cuz this quality is insane
High quality video, but I’m a little sad you didn’t talk at all about the crazy doxxing and ddossing going on in the pot pvp community back in 2012-2016
You deserve these views absolutely love this video! Also on what are you editing?
Adobe premiere pro and after effects
This video seems like it would be made from someone with many subs, great job!
Thanks!
The editing is really, and I mean really good, keep up the hard work and you actually really deserve 1 Million or nore subscribers.
bro bro bro the editing wth thats soooo goood
Wow great job! I’m glad I get to be an early sub for you, looking forward to seeing your YT career go far
ur skills are actully so good in video editing, u should have more then just 1k followers
I am now your biggest fan keep it up brother
I'm surprised you didn't mention how shoddy that astrophysicist was, but this was an awesome video!
great video! just wanted to point out that the music and the voiceover are different volume which makes it hard to find the best setting to watch
what i mean: go to 17:15, it's just the right volume and it's how the majority of the video sounds like, but just ten seconds later (17:25) it's really loud and i had to turn down my volume because of it. other than that, i have no complains. your video is really well made and i can just tell that you spent a lot of time making it! keep it up!
Yeah, the audio is a little messed up at times. I’m working on fixing that.
amazing, the video kept me entertained for whole 20 minutes
Crazy good video man
Keep it up my guy c:
This videos great c:
Damn I didn't think minecraft would have mafia any way the video is soo smooth you're so good you deserve to go big
Really nice video!
how do you only have 1.3k subs wtf, you're gonna be big one day
Love the vid id just turn the music down a little so we can hear you. The mic sounds great tho. Editing reminds me of Vince Vantage
I agree- music was too loud at times.
I'm impressed with how good quality this video is despite the views, CZcams definitely recommends fire 🔥🔥🔥
Here before you go viral! This is definitely multi-million sub creator worthy!
cool video keep it up:)
This video is gonna blow up!
This editing is crazy for so few views and subs. Incredible. My only feedback would be trying a more unique font than impact.
Good vid man, this kind of content is what I think will propel you to gain a bigger audience. Good luck on your journey bro!
I don’t wanna influence your content but this type of Minecraft video is rare and doesn’t have many high quality videos
UNDERATED, NEW SUB BRO. I THOUGHT YOURE A BIG CREATOR
i liked the vid a lot. i disagree on some minor things u mentioned due to (i assume) different ideological lines, but any technical feedback I could give you’d probably sort out yourself in the next few uploads. insane quality keep it up!
amazing video
this is just great editing! you deserve more subs!
Thanks!
Bro I will watch every video of yours until you will become 1M 😅😅
Damn. This video is awesome so far, editing awesome, dabing awesome, voice awesome, keep up the good stuff. ❤
amazing editing
Very Good Edited and Good Script, i thaugt the channel must have over 100k Great Job
Bro You're gonna be huge
great video man, jus curious what editing software do you use?
Adobe premiere and adobe after effects.
You could do similar edits on many other software like devinci resolve (which is free)
Cool editing and good video ngl. I like the reporting style and I admire that its without a lot of personal opinion and lets me form my own thoughts on the topics.
If you keep this up I will keep coming back.
Very well put together video, I learned some new things about a game I’m very passionate about so thanks!
Hey bro. Just to start off, great video. It was very high quality and you are very underrated. But I have one question. What software do you use?
Adobe premiere and adobe after effects
15:59 they can’t really even ban the ips fully, that’s client sided and can be bypassed by client mods like No Prying Eyes (basically No Chat Reports if it was super buff)
No Prying Eyes can also bypass player bans, whereas No Chat Reports still lets you get banned if a server *requires* message signing
19:23 I don’t like when people refer to cheats as simply “mods”, there’s a difference between something like sodium and then legit cheating
I tried to simplify the video as much as possible- I even put the words “extremely simplified” when I was talking about dedoose protection.
It’s really just a script writing issue for me. Glad you noticed that- sorry if I used some incorrect terminology.
@@bam_marks yeah that’s fair
I like what your cooking up my dude you earned a sub
the fact this vid is so good and you only have 1.33K
Amazing video! You are super underrated. One thing that could improve is the loudness of your voice, sometimes the music overtakes your voice which is bad when you are trying to educate.
Yeah- I’ll pay more attention to the audio next time
nice editing
If you were a carpenter and this video was a house, you have perfectly hit each nail on the head.
Congratulations man. I'm glad the changing of the thumbnail worked out for you. 50K views is no joke, that's a big feat, if you ever need anything else just let me know.
12:14 I love the addition of the song, I couldn’t help but think about LEMMiNO
That video was heavily inspired by lemmino- the track was used in the DB cooper video. It’s called “hard heart” from epidemic sound
cool vid. Keep it up💯💯
Hey, another Docutuber who credits his sources. Keep going.
the video’s quality compared to the subscribers is insane to me
*WHAT.*
Edit: bros out here doing god work on 5 dollar budget
i read your sub count as 1.6 mil and wasnt surprised then realised it was in thousands
underrated fr
I love the video so far, but I think I found a typo at 7:27. It says "Unfail Advantage" while you were saying "Unfair Advantage"
😂 I’m a little special at times
Great vid
Imagine bro threatening you and you are just a kid without knowing shit and bro threatens you to leak your pics
Like bro, most kids wouldn't pay since they won't know shit, so I don't get it
Nice video
I think the video was very well written with one exception as far as the Dream situation goes. I think personally you should mention the dream response in more than a passing glance here or there, possibly showing small clips of the videos in your sources as well. Other than that, I think you did a great job!
OmG the editing dudu 🔥
HERE BEFORE THIS BANGER BLOWS UP. GREAT VIDEO MADE LIKE A PROFESSIONAL.
I used to be in the community, There is some scary shit that goes down there.
I was at an auction for a mojang employee account, It went for over 90,000 dollars…
Damn
I just realized that I used to watch your content when I was trying to install the horion client 😂 what a coincidence.
great video 👍
Amazing Video!
HOLYYY THIS IS A REALLY WELL MADE VIDEO WHATT???!!?
KEEP IT UP MAN!!
criminally underrated channel