The YouTube Scriptwriter Getting Millions of Views

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  • čas přidán 14. 06. 2024
  • George Blackman is a scriptwriter who has written videos for Mike Shake, Film Booth, Noah Kagan, Ali Abdaal, and Creator Wizard.
    In this video, we talk about:
    1. What Makes For A Strong Hook
    2. Mistakes That Are Killing Your Retention
    3. Understand Your Retention Graphs
    4. Three Tips To Improve Your Scripts
    and so much more...
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    TIME STAMPS -
    00:00 - Intro
    00:22 - What Makes for a Strong Hook?
    04:47 - What Common Mistakes do you see creators make?
    06:09 - What is the first step to a good script?
    07:21 - What are some common retention killers?
    10:24 - How To Identify Strong Payoffs?
    14:11 - How Can We Identify What Our Audience Wants?
    16:21 - How To Understand Retention Graphs
    19:34 - How Can CZcamsrs Think About Scripts Differently?
    22:14 - Should We Use A Teleprompter?
    27:04 - Why Is Storytelling So Important On CZcams?
    29:12 - How To Create Stronger Call To Actions?
    31:40 - Top Three Tips To Improve CZcams Scripts

Komentáře • 42

  • @shawncanderson
    @shawncanderson Před 12 dny +3

    “Be clear not clever.” How clever - and clear!

  • @TijuanaJackson
    @TijuanaJackson Před 8 měsíci +31

    1.1k views!?! That’s it!? Damn. I feel sorry for content creators who missed this one. Great work.

    • @DrKlaytonKosek
      @DrKlaytonKosek Před 5 měsíci +3

      Still thinking this..

    • @JamieWhiffen
      @JamieWhiffen  Před 4 měsíci +2

      The channel is a sleeping giant haha, thanks for nice words Tijuana!

    • @davemoney6713
      @davemoney6713 Před 4 měsíci

      @@JamieWhiffen Great insight. Where can we see examples of some outstanding retention graphs?

  • @ilhamije
    @ilhamije Před 11 dny +2

    Amazing, thank you for this interview. I took so many takeaways. For me, it's hard to write a script for a video, it's even harder without a script.

  • @zetrovv
    @zetrovv Před 2 měsíci +3

    Just watched this video and I gotta say it was super informative, they didn’t repeat the same answers as everyone else.
    I also like the 75/25 method when it comes to scripting and talking points. I like use the script to build the general context and ideal and sometimes just go off on something to elevate it a bit

  • @BesserWerdenX
    @BesserWerdenX Před 6 měsíci +12

    I watched all the interviews with George that I could find and I liked this one the best. Your questions target exactly the points that people want to know and can apply to their own videos. I also liked how you graphically illustrated important aspects. Great video!

    • @lowlowseesee
      @lowlowseesee Před 4 měsíci +1

      i like the one with jay clouse the best but they are all great

    • @JamieWhiffen
      @JamieWhiffen  Před 4 měsíci +1

      Thanks! I spend a lot of time thinking about what exactly beginner's struggle with, happy to hear you found this useful.

  • @project_growth
    @project_growth Před 7 měsíci +5

    George has some wonderful advice here. I was thinking about incorporating "mini hooks" throughout my content but he really explained it well here, including the concept of switching the context and the payoff.
    I also really enjoyed your question Jamie of how you can use scripts/teleprompters without loosing your voice.
    Thank you for taking the time to create this content!

  • @ConceptHut
    @ConceptHut Před 6 dny +1

    How to know what your audience wants: fourms and community spaces where people ask questions.

  • @gloriana7777
    @gloriana7777 Před měsícem +3

    16:23
    My videos are retentionally challenged in all 3 ways, I shall change my ways

  • @yoga_and_ian
    @yoga_and_ian Před 6 měsíci +1

    So useful. Your questions get to the key things I need help with. Thanks.

  • @lowlowseesee
    @lowlowseesee Před 4 měsíci

    great interview and great graphics man. had to sub! thank you so much

  • @bobninda
    @bobninda Před měsícem

    So much value here!! Thank you. 🙏🏾

  • @GrindMind98
    @GrindMind98 Před 4 měsíci +6

    00:13 🎣 A strong CZcams video hook requires clarity, avoiding jargon, and prioritizing clarity over cleverness.
    01:52 🎭 For entertainment videos: characters, concept, and stakes are crucial. For educational videos: viewer, concept, and stakes take precedence.
    03:30 🎁 The best scripts create building blocks towards the ultimate payoff, saving the big reveal for later, but offering smaller payoffs along the way.
    05:23 📝 Common script mistake: lack of clarity in defining the big question or payoff, leading to unfocused and potentially rambling content.
    06:44 🎨 When scripting, start with a free-flowing brainstorm, take breaks, then structure the script, tighten it up, and finally focus on retention by ordering sentences effectively.
    08:50 🛑 Common retention killer: providing the payoff before establishing context, leading viewers to skip ahead and potentially lose interest.
    10:52 🚀 Aha moments in scripts are crucial; highlighting them visually helps identify the pacing and engagement levels, ensuring a well-balanced video.
    13:54 👥 Understanding your audience involves reviewing community sections, asking for feedback, and, like Jason Farmer, systematically analyzing comments to identify audience desires.
    16:27 📉 Common retention graph pitfalls include giving away the ultimate payoff too early or spending too much time dissecting a point after revealing it. Context-dependent, but patterns can be observed.
    16:41 📉 Swapping payoff and context timing is crucial; avoid early payoff followed by context to prevent viewer disengagement.
    17:10 🕒 Long intros can lead to a drop in viewer interest; get into the main content quickly to maintain engagement.
    18:19 📉 A gradual, consistent decline in the video may indicate a lack of focus or payoff; ensure clarity on the video's topic.
    19:40 📜 CZcamsrs should prioritize scripting, as it enhances intentionality, structure, and overall video quality.
    22:12 🗣 Reading the script aloud helps CZcamsrs capture their authentic tone and adjust the script for natural delivery.
    24:41 🎙 Balancing teleprompter use and spontaneous moments creates authenticity and engages viewers effectively.
    29:22 📈 A strong call to action is vital; avoid signaling the end of the video, use links, create curiosity gaps, and make promises to encourage viewers to watch more content.
    31:58 🔄 Focus on key elements for script improvement: clarify the ultimate payoff in the hook, highlight mini payoffs, and use a compelling call to action.

  • @heroandvillainstyle
    @heroandvillainstyle Před 5 měsíci

    So much value here Jamie - thanks!

  • @atomic_stories
    @atomic_stories Před 7 měsíci

    total nugget goldmine. Keep it up, Jamie and George!

  • @kylaallen822
    @kylaallen822 Před 4 měsíci

    Just what I need as I begin stepping into the CZcams world. Great interview!

  • @FinanceBread-Jun
    @FinanceBread-Jun Před měsícem

    So helpful, great interview!!

  • @adambytes888
    @adambytes888 Před 4 měsíci

    Great content. Lots of nuggets in here. I learnt a lot.
    Thank You!

  • @jointhefoodclan
    @jointhefoodclan Před 3 měsíci

    This video should be watched over and over again. Perfectly thought questions and awesome tips. Great work overall!

    • @skryptly
      @skryptly Před 3 měsíci

      There's also a tool launching that's basically an AI scriptwriting helper that trains on existing youtube channels of your choice, so you can try out different cadences, tones of voice, etc. Search for Skryptly, hope that helps!

  • @RacetasClub
    @RacetasClub Před 5 měsíci

    Don't know why this doesn't have that many views, great content glad I found this out!

  • @JamieWhiffen
    @JamieWhiffen  Před 10 měsíci +2

    Why You Can't Stop Watching: How CZcamsrs Hold Your Interest - czcams.com/video/7utnr7eoCBs/video.html

  • @MustafaSheikh
    @MustafaSheikh Před 6 měsíci

    Such pracitcal advice :) I was taking notes to implement this on my next videos:)

  • @IbrahimKotaesh
    @IbrahimKotaesh Před 10 měsíci

    Very good video, many thanks 🙏

  • @appleinformationtwo9689

    Amazing bro it really help

  • @delicioussidequest
    @delicioussidequest Před 29 dny

    This is crazy helpful

  • @dranipani
    @dranipani Před 6 měsíci

    Thanks for sharing it.

  • @vukpjescic
    @vukpjescic Před 8 měsíci

    Great video!:)

  • @jubbalubby
    @jubbalubby Před 4 měsíci

    Digital gold, thank you for the vid!

  • @LukasDeem
    @LukasDeem Před 2 měsíci

    Great content 🎉

  • @TwoChaptersAheadShorts
    @TwoChaptersAheadShorts Před 7 měsíci +1

    Did video is way too underrated!! 🤯🔥

  • @azenftw
    @azenftw Před 5 měsíci

    i thought this had like 500k views but this video was well made! well done!

  • @jaspermcfly2765
    @jaspermcfly2765 Před 7 měsíci +1

    Thanks!

  • @user-fl6sf9nw1d
    @user-fl6sf9nw1d Před 6 měsíci +2

    Trying to find someone that understands this and also a content creator. Anyone who want to connect?

  • @adambytes888
    @adambytes888 Před 4 měsíci +1

    Remember everyone: be clear, not clever!