how to write the best personal statement intro (Cambridge University + Gates Cambridge Finalist) ✍

I really want to help everyone who is figuring out where to start with their personal statements through this video. Here, I will share a sentence by sentence, step-by-step guide with ideas as I read my intro for my essay. I hope this helps you especially if you are going through this process right now.
Worksheet Link:
www.canva.com/design/DAFSObnI...
Yours truly,
littleoldvi
where do I go to school? harvard university!
what do I use to film? iPhone 13
who is my favorite cat? tomato!

[@iyfcircle]

Hi dear Vi. This video is beyond amazing for me. Thank you so much for sharing such brilliance.

[@PhillipMoon]

so insightful, thank you so much

[@daveinvest1914]

Smiles... aside the amazing information, you are a wonderful person, keep it up.

[@PokeBrick]

so insightful, thank you so much! looking forward to more videos 🦥

[@littleoldvi]

Thank you Austin!!

[@Anisha_suman]

When my time comes, I will definitely start applying everywhere. I don’t know where but I will so I put this video in my watch later so then in the future I will look at your videos any time I need to they are so helpful❤😢 Just then, I watched your video and you gave a wonderful brief information

[@littleoldvi]

Thank you so much for your sweet comment. This truly made my day and I am so happy you found this helpful. When you start applying, please don't hesitate to ask me any questions! 💌

[@eithartariq627]

please do a second part 😍😍

[@MiaaSaal]

I would love to here more tips and the next body paragraphs! Also you’re gorgeous

[@hanxfifi]

The intro was amazing! 💕 This will be helpful if I ever decide to pursue a masters one day!

[@littleoldvi]

Thank you so much, HanxFifi!! This makes me so happy and I really hope it could be helpful if you do pursue a masters in the future!

[@umuhozajanviere9475]

why did you choose Cambridge over Harvard

[@PokeBrick]

man I need to start applying everywhere 😭

[@littleoldvi]

You got it 🫡 🥇

[@hollobettyjoy]

I'm pursuing a PhD at Cambridge as well and applying for the Gates funding. Did you have an interview with them for the funding? Could you share your interview experience? :)

[@michaelkevintv7609]

Thank you so much. I'm applying to Cambridge. Let's connect please

[@user-il2du8jh7n]

Hii mam , im going to apply cambridge university , can you plz help to write nice cv.

[@user-sl7ql7yb6z]

Hello mam