This story isnt bad and mostly well done as far as this vid was showing. But i think his parents shoulda done better than hiding the scrolls in their secret makeout cabin hidden on the senju property. And they left it right in a drawer. It should have been hidden in a blood seal so only he could reach it, and his mother should have appeared far sooner than his next to last yr of academy. Having shikas mom as his dads ex teammate was good but her never connecting the dots such as him being uzumaki, or his son when she knew he dated kushina and she was preg and close on the attack, plus her growing up with the 4th on a team and him being identical to him plus whiskers and some kushina mixed in is just horrible. Iruka always gets off too easy everyone thinks him being a bad teacher then suddenly trying his final yr and getting him ramen on occasion is enough. Even in this 1 it was the same he brought the books he denied him in classes, told him everything he was failing at which was everything and he himself caused it as his first teacher to neglect him. Then after he tells him to study he walks away knowing noone is there to help him, heck this like many stories at least forced the village somewat to let naruto b literate, despite everyone sabotaging him. I think minado shoulda sent a clone to get the scrolls they were leaving him and put a special hidden storage seal on newborn naruto let kushina c it and have her appear much sooner, and have her last long enough to teach him to read and begin him on seals starting with the secret storage they snuck on him as a baby hid from others. Besides his mindscape is all over the place in wat ifs sometimes he takes 5 min in mind with 9tail and seconds pass, other times 5 min is him staring into space for 30 min, in another he is in his mind for days/weeks and only a few seconds passed outside. So i think his mom getting more than an hr with him to teach him since noone else does isnt too much to ask or have kushina linger weeks or months b4 it fades as she is sealed inside him and could siphon some chakra from him/kyubi to continue or put a hr limit a day and make her fade til it gathers enough again the next day.
This, the Iruka thing! I hate how in cannon everyone acts like Iruka was in any way a good teacher... legitimately every teacher that Naruto got, except Fukasaku, is just objectively a bad teacher. Iruka killed his thirst for knowledge, got lightly scolded for it, and then bought him junk food, and he's a great guy now? How about THEACHING HIM!? He is supposedly a sensor type, so he just never noticed Naruto having way too much Chakra in his bunshins? Never thought to give him tips? And Ramen!? How about using that same money to buy him some HEALTHY groceries and stop letting go his diet stunt his growth? And then there is Kakashi, who has the gall to claim that he cares for Naruto, where was Kakashi's care when Naruto was thrown out on the streets? Or when he was constantly denied basic goods and services? We see him buy Naruto a fruit basket once... AFTER he got him as his Genin... where was he the previous 12 years? He claims that he would never abandon comrades, but he abandoned Naruto REAL quick... repeatedly. Then there is, IMO, the worst one: Jiraya... sorry excuse for a Godfather and an even worse Sensei. He not only abandoned Naruto at birth, but he also proceeded to never visit him once, never so much as check-in on him... but we all love him cause he's "the funny pervert". Meanwhile when he is supposed to be *training* Naruto, he instead give him barely any instruction and then ignores him to peep. What's worse is when he takes him to go find Tsunade, Jiraya KNOWS the Akatsuki exist, he likely knows around where Itachi is (since Itachi is his spy)... and yet he STILL abandons Naruto alone in a town outside of the village to go chase tail... inside can almost be excused because you're supposed to be safer in the village but OUTSIDE!? No, he is just a neglectful pervert who barely taught Naruto at all... TLDR: Damn near every adult in the Narutoverse is a POS, especially Naruto's teachers.
@@brownricebro5691 I agree and as I recall of canon jeria is never revealed as his godfather to naruto, heck the bad/evil jeria wat ifs do better for the useless pervert as a reason he simply hates him for his students death. Not whining about I'm busy , got my spy ring to manage yet having noone report about naruto in village when his biggest excuses r he looks just like his father and I am spending all 12 yrs keeping ur parents enemies from learning about u and seeking u out. Well he let the only enemy know about him with this enemy being 1 who cares nothing for who his parents r and just wants kyubi no matter who it is. Then the 3rd let's civilians know his status and first thing they do is demand his death then go out and inform the grieving adults outside this baby holds the demon/is the demon made human and they r allowed the tell anyone not 5/10 yrs older than naruto so any merchant or outsider can learn he carries a demon esp if they know he'll b harmed or taken for it to get rid of him. And honestly the 3rd might b as bad as danzo he manipulates naruto with reg visits, puts thoughts in his head to b shinobi(not that he as jinchuriki has a say) puts it in his head to b hokage, hides everything about his parents, knows he is uzumaki and a container so he has massive reserves yet let's him suffer his teachers neglect, has anbu watching him as the village weapon/ child of 4th/ only uzumaki whose line is able to hold kyubi and must live long enough to breed like his mother at least. Puts sacrificing all he has for the village which hates him in his head, let's the village torture a child so he knows his place is below any in village, tells him they r just confused and ignorant and he has no right to hurt the villagers regardless of wat they put him thru.
@andrewjones4332 to be fair to Hiruzen, I'm pretty sure Danzo is the one who leaked Naruto's Jinchuriki status... buuuut Hiruzen also knew that, and knew of at least a few of Danzo's other betrayals, and did nothing about it...
@@brownricebro5691 the 3rds only option if he revealed to council 1st was to put all who heard to immediate death. But in alot of wat ifs he announces it to the village and tells them naruto uzumaki holds the 9tails and is a hero b4 they mob up and demand he die to finish the demon. His best bet at that point is to reveal wherever he dies the 9 tail will reform in a matter of yrs and only an uzumaki can hold it and reveal last 2 holders were uzumaki. And nothing will stop it next time since it req both a powerful seal master and an uzumaki to contain it. And hurting him does nothing but give the demon inside ways to break out since 9tail feels nothing and pull out a sealing scroll seal wat ever in it have his anbu stab it and ask the idiots if watever they sealed is damaged then bring it out and show no damage then force them to c his prisoner feels nothing like the sealed item in his scroll. And threaten to release kyubi if they wanna hurt it or an innocent child to harm it. Might affect most
Is this gonna be like all the other good Naruto what I’ve said people are just gonna make one episode and not continue or are they gonna make a part two when make a part three and four and so on to continue the story
Yea there are a lot of arts Ninjutsu: the art of using chakra to make phenomenon happen at ones wim Genjutsu: the art of using chakra to manipulate the brain Taijutsu: the art of fists Kenjutsu: the art of the sword Fuenjutsu: the art of sealing These are the main ones used in all to rank a Shinobi, of course there are subtypes but these are the main ones needed to know😊😊😊 Edit: almost forgot areojutsu: the art of using chakra to heal
Okay the story was very good I did like it I like the plot line I like the character development I do wish it was a lot longer you could have done more with some of the characters all in all I was still good still love the plot line I'm still wish it was a lot longer I hope you come back make it too and keep up the good work
This was way to slow for set up. And the fact you never upload a second part really fucks you over. For someone that doesn't upload part 2 of anything you need to look for oneshots or shorter stories. So please stop uploading long ones like this one.
@@johnsullivan9064thank u for posting it. I hate how so many post other peoples stuff and give no cred/heading for others to continue it this 1 is good so far
Orange Spark by LC Namikaze
I hate when people act like Hiuzen was anything but a spineless coward...
Part 2 please
This story isnt bad and mostly well done as far as this vid was showing. But i think his parents shoulda done better than hiding the scrolls in their secret makeout cabin hidden on the senju property. And they left it right in a drawer. It should have been hidden in a blood seal so only he could reach it, and his mother should have appeared far sooner than his next to last yr of academy. Having shikas mom as his dads ex teammate was good but her never connecting the dots such as him being uzumaki, or his son when she knew he dated kushina and she was preg and close on the attack, plus her growing up with the 4th on a team and him being identical to him plus whiskers and some kushina mixed in is just horrible.
Iruka always gets off too easy everyone thinks him being a bad teacher then suddenly trying his final yr and getting him ramen on occasion is enough. Even in this 1 it was the same he brought the books he denied him in classes, told him everything he was failing at which was everything and he himself caused it as his first teacher to neglect him. Then after he tells him to study he walks away knowing noone is there to help him, heck this like many stories at least forced the village somewat to let naruto b literate, despite everyone sabotaging him. I think minado shoulda sent a clone to get the scrolls they were leaving him and put a special hidden storage seal on newborn naruto let kushina c it and have her appear much sooner, and have her last long enough to teach him to read and begin him on seals starting with the secret storage they snuck on him as a baby hid from others.
Besides his mindscape is all over the place in wat ifs sometimes he takes 5 min in mind with 9tail and seconds pass, other times 5 min is him staring into space for 30 min, in another he is in his mind for days/weeks and only a few seconds passed outside. So i think his mom getting more than an hr with him to teach him since noone else does isnt too much to ask or have kushina linger weeks or months b4 it fades as she is sealed inside him and could siphon some chakra from him/kyubi to continue or put a hr limit a day and make her fade til it gathers enough again the next day.
This, the Iruka thing! I hate how in cannon everyone acts like Iruka was in any way a good teacher... legitimately every teacher that Naruto got, except Fukasaku, is just objectively a bad teacher. Iruka killed his thirst for knowledge, got lightly scolded for it, and then bought him junk food, and he's a great guy now? How about THEACHING HIM!? He is supposedly a sensor type, so he just never noticed Naruto having way too much Chakra in his bunshins? Never thought to give him tips? And Ramen!? How about using that same money to buy him some HEALTHY groceries and stop letting go his diet stunt his growth?
And then there is Kakashi, who has the gall to claim that he cares for Naruto, where was Kakashi's care when Naruto was thrown out on the streets? Or when he was constantly denied basic goods and services? We see him buy Naruto a fruit basket once... AFTER he got him as his Genin... where was he the previous 12 years? He claims that he would never abandon comrades, but he abandoned Naruto REAL quick... repeatedly.
Then there is, IMO, the worst one: Jiraya... sorry excuse for a Godfather and an even worse Sensei. He not only abandoned Naruto at birth, but he also proceeded to never visit him once, never so much as check-in on him... but we all love him cause he's "the funny pervert". Meanwhile when he is supposed to be *training* Naruto, he instead give him barely any instruction and then ignores him to peep. What's worse is when he takes him to go find Tsunade, Jiraya KNOWS the Akatsuki exist, he likely knows around where Itachi is (since Itachi is his spy)... and yet he STILL abandons Naruto alone in a town outside of the village to go chase tail... inside can almost be excused because you're supposed to be safer in the village but OUTSIDE!? No, he is just a neglectful pervert who barely taught Naruto at all...
TLDR: Damn near every adult in the Narutoverse is a POS, especially Naruto's teachers.
@@brownricebro5691 I agree and as I recall of canon jeria is never revealed as his godfather to naruto, heck the bad/evil jeria wat ifs do better for the useless pervert as a reason he simply hates him for his students death. Not whining about I'm busy , got my spy ring to manage yet having noone report about naruto in village when his biggest excuses r he looks just like his father and I am spending all 12 yrs keeping ur parents enemies from learning about u and seeking u out. Well he let the only enemy know about him with this enemy being 1 who cares nothing for who his parents r and just wants kyubi no matter who it is. Then the 3rd let's civilians know his status and first thing they do is demand his death then go out and inform the grieving adults outside this baby holds the demon/is the demon made human and they r allowed the tell anyone not 5/10 yrs older than naruto so any merchant or outsider can learn he carries a demon esp if they know he'll b harmed or taken for it to get rid of him.
And honestly the 3rd might b as bad as danzo he manipulates naruto with reg visits, puts thoughts in his head to b shinobi(not that he as jinchuriki has a say) puts it in his head to b hokage, hides everything about his parents, knows he is uzumaki and a container so he has massive reserves yet let's him suffer his teachers neglect, has anbu watching him as the village weapon/ child of 4th/ only uzumaki whose line is able to hold kyubi and must live long enough to breed like his mother at least. Puts sacrificing all he has for the village which hates him in his head, let's the village torture a child so he knows his place is below any in village, tells him they r just confused and ignorant and he has no right to hurt the villagers regardless of wat they put him thru.
@andrewjones4332 to be fair to Hiruzen, I'm pretty sure Danzo is the one who leaked Naruto's Jinchuriki status... buuuut Hiruzen also knew that, and knew of at least a few of Danzo's other betrayals, and did nothing about it...
@@brownricebro5691 the 3rds only option if he revealed to council 1st was to put all who heard to immediate death. But in alot of wat ifs he announces it to the village and tells them naruto uzumaki holds the 9tails and is a hero b4 they mob up and demand he die to finish the demon. His best bet at that point is to reveal wherever he dies the 9 tail will reform in a matter of yrs and only an uzumaki can hold it and reveal last 2 holders were uzumaki. And nothing will stop it next time since it req both a powerful seal master and an uzumaki to contain it. And hurting him does nothing but give the demon inside ways to break out since 9tail feels nothing and pull out a sealing scroll seal wat ever in it have his anbu stab it and ask the idiots if watever they sealed is damaged then bring it out and show no damage then force them to c his prisoner feels nothing like the sealed item in his scroll. And threaten to release kyubi if they wanna hurt it or an innocent child to harm it. Might affect most
What i do like about this story is it address the fact that they forgot or purposely left out about the uzumaki clan.
Definitely need part 2
Love the story need part two please💚💚💚
Part 2
More parts please
Part2 please 🙏 thank
Part 2 please ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Next part please
Domt do like this ppz upload part 2
Next part asap please
Part 2,3 and 4 please! 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉❤❤❤❤❤❤😢😢😢😢😢😢
More parts, please 🙏
Part 2 please!
Part 2 Please
Part 2 please!!!!!!!!!!
pls pls make part 2 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please don’t end this story right here Just This once please please do a part 2
Is this gonna be like all the other good Naruto what I’ve said people are just gonna make one episode and not continue or are they gonna make a part two when make a part three and four and so on to continue the story
Awesome love it next part please ❤❤❤
Will there be a part 2? Plz make a part 2
Please link the story i mean come on dude
Orange Spark by LC Namikaze
Part two?
Please can we have a part two?
Ok, fuinjutsu is the art of sealing, not kinjutsu. Kinjutsu is the art of the sword.
Yea there are a lot of arts
Ninjutsu: the art of using chakra to make phenomenon happen at ones wim
Genjutsu: the art of using chakra to manipulate the brain
Taijutsu: the art of fists
Kenjutsu: the art of the sword
Fuenjutsu: the art of sealing
These are the main ones used in all to rank a Shinobi, of course there are subtypes but these are the main ones needed to know😊😊😊
Edit: almost forgot areojutsu: the art of using chakra to heal
when is part 2 coming out
Okay the story was very good I did like it I like the plot line I like the character development I do wish it was a lot longer you could have done more with some of the characters all in all I was still good still love the plot line I'm still wish it was a lot longer I hope you come back make it too and keep up the good work
story is slow moving as by the end of this vid Naruto is still in the academy
I barely comment on ANY CZcams video, but we NEED a part two for this
Did he always say green and sexy?
Occasionally he says it during an intro.
Sexy. Green beast of konoha followed by thumbs up and smile. mostly in the manga
Occasionally he says it during an intro.
Sexy. Green beast of konoha followed by thumbs up and smile. mostly in the manga
This was way to slow for set up. And the fact you never upload a second part really fucks you over. For someone that doesn't upload part 2 of anything you need to look for oneshots or shorter stories. So please stop uploading long ones like this one.
What is the name of this story please?
Orange Spark by LC Namikaze
@@johnsullivan9064thank u for posting it. I hate how so many post other peoples stuff and give no cred/heading for others to continue it this 1 is good so far
Orange spark by lc namikaze
Why do you never link fanfics or credit the authors? And why do you never comtinue a story?
Part 2 please
Part two
Part 2 please