hello all! I hope this guiding outline and in-depth explanation of how you could structure your essay, and just how to think about it in general, helps!! I know it's a stressful time, but I am sure you have a unique story that will really show the reader who you are, it's just about getting that introspection on paper 😊 Timestamps in description box, and don't forget to check out the "how to write a college essay introduction" video if you need more guidance 💛 - czcams.com/video/2A1HtzJb1dw/video.html
you probably won't see this but you don't even realize how much of a godsend you are by uploading this video because it has helped me tremendously. Before i wrote my essay, I knew my topic but had no clue how to piece it together so it can be pleasing to the admission officer who reads it. But thanks to your guide and this video, my essay turned out so good
I appreciate this so much! This was absolutely my goal with the video - to help students come to the conclusions themselves and figure out what's important to them/what reflects who they are. Really appreciate you watching the video and implementing what you learned in it and sharing that in this comment, it means a lot to me :) Good luck with application season!
girl thank you so much, this is so helpful, i was struggling to think of something to write and I found your video, watched 3 minutes and ideas just came all over me lol 3 minutes of this and now I have a paragraph
Hey! Is this for uchicago? I actually applied a million years ago when they didn't have the optional video profile haha - but I'd just recommend making it fun and being yourself. Do something out of the box (no need for editing or anything at all). Personally, I'd probably do a few clips in different locations (my favorite running spot, at home asking my family to describe me (or even asking teachers lol that would be funny) - just genuine things that will help admissions get to know me. I can certainly make a short video about this and post it within the next few weeks. Good luck!
It's been wonderful acc. Got rejected from every school in US but made it to UofT somehow. In my second year right now. (P.S. chessfitness6894 is my acc but I got logged outta it)@@michealadjei709
When submitting common app essay, which is better just putting texts in the box or submit in google doc? Also, which format I should use when submitting in google doc ?
There is someone who will never EVER leave your side, and His name is Jesus Christ! 2000+ years ago he came to earth and suffered beatings, being abandoned by His closest friends, being betrayed unto death, being spat on, and nailed to a cross. Why did He endure all of this? Well, it doesn't quite make sense until you look at yourself. God has his moral Law, the Ten Commandments, and you and I have broken God's Law. The Ten Commandments require us not to lie, steal, use God's name in vain (blasphemy), commit adultery (Which Jesus says looking at others with lust is the same as adultery), and murdering (which Jesus also says hating someone is the same as being a murderer at heart). These are only a few of the commandments, and breaking just one makes you guilty of breaking them all (James 2:10). so, have you lied before? or stolen? hated someone, looked with lust, or used God's name in vain (ex: saying "oh my ***). If so, God seeing you as a lying, thieving, blaspheming, adulterous murderer at heart. You are guilty before God of eternal death in Hell (the Bible says the wages of sin is death in Romans 6:23). And this should terrify you, for the Bible says in Hell there is weeping and gnashing of teeth, and that it is like a lake of fire that is never quenched. There will be no laughing, no partying, just eternal suffering. But back to Jesus. When He came to earth and suffered and died on that cross, though He never needed to die since He was sinless, He was paying the debt of your sins as well as mine. Then, He rose from the dead, thus conquering death and proving that all who believe on Him will likewise rise from death to life. So, i imploreeee you, homie, put your trust is Jesus Christ TODAY, and God will grant you ever lasting life. The rest of Romans 6:23 says "The wages of sin is death, but the FREE GIFT OF GOD is eternal life in Christ Jesus our Lord." So, trust in the sacrifice of Jesus Christ. Believe on Him and you will be saved.
hello all! I hope this guiding outline and in-depth explanation of how you could structure your essay, and just how to think about it in general, helps!! I know it's a stressful time, but I am sure you have a unique story that will really show the reader who you are, it's just about getting that introspection on paper 😊 Timestamps in description box, and don't forget to check out the "how to write a college essay introduction" video if you need more guidance 💛 - czcams.com/video/2A1HtzJb1dw/video.html
you probably won't see this but you don't even realize how much of a godsend you are by uploading this video because it has helped me tremendously. Before i wrote my essay, I knew my topic but had no clue how to piece it together so it can be pleasing to the admission officer who reads it. But thanks to your guide and this video, my essay turned out so good
I appreciate this so much! This was absolutely my goal with the video - to help students come to the conclusions themselves and figure out what's important to them/what reflects who they are. Really appreciate you watching the video and implementing what you learned in it and sharing that in this comment, it means a lot to me :) Good luck with application season!
girl thank you so much, this is so helpful, i was struggling to think of something to write and I found your video, watched 3 minutes and ideas just came all over me lol 3 minutes of this and now I have a paragraph
You are SO welcome!! That's the goal, good luck with writing :)
where did you get into?
omg ive watched like a million college essay videos and this is the only one thats helped. THANK YOU
Intro - Set scene, choosing moment reflecting larger topic
Context (250)
Pivot to growth (80)
Growth
Conclusion (don’t restate but look to future)
im so happy that i found your channel bc i want to get into uchicago and all your vids are so helpful :)
omg that's awesome!! Good luck with your uchicago application - I'm so glad my videos can help 😁😁
@@TheAlmostAstrophysicist yeah, same with me!thnxs for your videos
Thank you so so so much for this! I'm definitely using this for my essay.
Of course, I'm so glad I can help!! 😁
Great effort in teaching the necessary writing skills . Thank you so much! I need help with my essay.
I love your channel thank you for making college applications easier for the rest of us. Thank you!
this was super helpful! and i'm also writing about astrophysics (:
this was really insightful, thank you so much!!
Great info Priya !!
Thank you as always!!!
Thanks a lot for this video.Really helpfull
Of course, so glad it was helpful!! 😁😁
very helpful, thank you!
Thank you so much!
great video!
I agree, truly a superb video
It's really tiring getting a complete essay you know
so my essay does not have to be about my major?
Thank you
great vid
thank you Priya, I want to be astrophysics too one day and you help a lot
Of course, glad to be a part of your journey!! 😊
How do I write a good transition/pivot?
can you please share the essay crafted on this outline?
Thanks a lot 🙏
❤❤❤
Ur a beast ty
Can you pleaseeeee tell me if you submitted an optional video portfolio?
If yes, could you make a video on that as well?
Hey! Is this for uchicago? I actually applied a million years ago when they didn't have the optional video profile haha - but I'd just recommend making it fun and being yourself. Do something out of the box (no need for editing or anything at all). Personally, I'd probably do a few clips in different locations (my favorite running spot, at home asking my family to describe me (or even asking teachers lol that would be funny) - just genuine things that will help admissions get to know me. I can certainly make a short video about this and post it within the next few weeks. Good luck!
@@TheAlmostAstrophysicistyou have no idea how useful this is, thankyouuuu!!
I am applying to uchicago ed, I so want to get in😭🥺
It's been 2 years. How did it go?
It's been wonderful acc. Got rejected from every school in US but made it to UofT somehow. In my second year right now. (P.S. chessfitness6894 is my acc but I got logged outta it)@@michealadjei709
hey, I was wondering if you could edit and give some feedback for my common app essay?
When submitting common app essay, which is better just putting texts in the box or submit in google doc? Also, which format I should use when submitting in google doc ?
Also, is it okay if the words end up only 470 words? Should I write more?
The essay you write should be in the box if you’re using common app.
Hi, would you be able to help me edit my college essays?
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Hi the vidio was very help full.
Can you help me through my essay edition process please. If you have just 15 minutes per week😔😔😔 .
Hey what about the university needs only 250 words
There is someone who will never EVER leave your side, and His name is Jesus Christ! 2000+ years ago he came to earth and suffered beatings, being abandoned by His closest friends, being betrayed unto death, being spat on, and nailed to a cross. Why did He endure all of this? Well, it doesn't quite make sense until you look at yourself. God has his moral Law, the Ten Commandments, and you and I have broken God's Law. The Ten Commandments require us not to lie, steal, use God's name in vain (blasphemy), commit adultery (Which Jesus says looking at others with lust is the same as adultery), and murdering (which Jesus also says hating someone is the same as being a murderer at heart). These are only a few of the commandments, and breaking just one makes you guilty of breaking them all (James 2:10). so, have you lied before? or stolen? hated someone, looked with lust, or used God's name in vain (ex: saying "oh my ***). If so, God seeing you as a lying, thieving, blaspheming, adulterous murderer at heart. You are guilty before God of eternal death in Hell (the Bible says the wages of sin is death in Romans 6:23). And this should terrify you, for the Bible says in Hell there is weeping and gnashing of teeth, and that it is like a lake of fire that is never quenched. There will be no laughing, no partying, just eternal suffering. But back to Jesus. When He came to earth and suffered and died on that cross, though He never needed to die since He was sinless, He was paying the debt of your sins as well as mine. Then, He rose from the dead, thus conquering death and proving that all who believe on Him will likewise rise from death to life.
So, i imploreeee you, homie, put your trust is Jesus Christ TODAY, and God will grant you ever lasting life. The rest of Romans 6:23 says "The wages of sin is death, but the FREE GIFT OF GOD is eternal life in Christ Jesus our Lord." So, trust in the sacrifice of Jesus Christ. Believe on Him and you will be saved.