COMPLETED IN DESC - Crowsong storyboarded MAP call
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- Finished MAP project : • Complete Crowsong MAP ...
- Following the loss of Omensky and now also her mother Weepingwind, Crowpaw has lost the 2 cats she felt some comfort and belonging to. Now she has to face her family's cruelty on her own, as well as finding strength in herself to find connection back to Corvidclan.
As she has visited their starclan-shrine, high in the mountains, her pale fur makes her a target for predator animals once more. But yet again she's also saved by the corvids which she and her clan worships and cooperate with. Crowpaw also finds new strength to move forward, taking with her tokens of feathers to always remind herself of her rightful belonging to the clan.
Song :
• Christina Aguilera - L...
Characters (my OC's with lore, redirection to individual pages etc) :
toyhou.se/9127126.corvidclan
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✮ Huge thanks to everyone who joined! We received over 100+ fantastic pieces and voting Is currently in motion!
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!!This project was voted to be hosted as the next patreon discord server event among voting options relating to myself such as OCs or contests as well as general projects not involving my characters!!!
There has been no promotion nor mention of this project outside of patreon (nor is applying possible on patreon itself but only through the discord server as it is meant to be a server event ).
I don’t want it to be a matter of “paying to work for me”; patrons chose this project just like anyone freely chooses to join as a participant.
Once any participant posts their part publicly the application for backups will be available for anyone including outside of patreon/the server. Participants have already been chosene whea - Krátké a kreslené filmy
The two Corvid birds near the end (presumably Omensky and Weepingwind) were such a cool and heartwarming detail. Proof that Crowsong was never completely alone and that her ancestors acknowledged her mistreatment at the paws of her clan and wanted to make things right.
And the feathers were probably theirs too
They are the ones who caused it and damned her to hell. They are not innocent in any of this.
@waynehasmith7924
No, on Omensky’s toyhouse page, it says that if she had known about Crowsong’s mistreatment, she would’ve cursed the entirety of her Clan under StarClan’s will. And Weepingwind wanted to be close to her daughter, but couldn’t in fear of hurting them both, and she was also an outcast along with her daughter for being Crowsong’s mother, so she was also mistreated.
I love details like that! So precise and thoughtful, they add a layer of 'omg why is this so good' to it.
@@wayneshasmith7924 By the time Crowsong was born Omensky was already blind and deaf, so she literally had no idea what was happening. Say what you will about Weepingwind but Omensky was never given a chance to make things right.
It kills me to know she ended up in the Dark Forest after trying so, so hard. Looking at Raveneye's face at the end as he looks at his daughter, it's hard to imagine how he made it into StarClan after all the abuse. I just hope Crowsong can make it out and back to Omensky who loves her, and have the happiness she so dearly deserves but was so cruelly denied in life
In crowsongs world you only go to the dark forest if you think you should, he obviously had no regret so he made it into starclan, same gos for the others, which is also why ashkit is with crowsong in the dark forest, not because he did anything wrong, but because he felt like it was somehow his fault crow killed him, he didn’t know she killed everyone else tho so he thinks it’s something to do with him
@@mistyWC319except Starclan can overturn that, looking at Raveneye’s dad, Crowingheart
@@dragonstouch1042 ah true
@dragonstouch1042 They can but it doesnt mean they always will. CrowingHeart couldnt be there because hes such a horrible person they couldnt accept him
I don't normally cry at movies or animatics, but I think this one really touches the visceral human need to be accepted, the feelings you portrayed of looking to those you've already lost for answers, and actually hearing an answer back, in the form of the crows (Which seem to be coded as the spirits of the fallen clan cats) who fly above her and sit close to her and watch over her, confirming that she is worthy of her place and of protection and love, man, that cuts deep. I broke at the end where after she passes her father(?) who clearly resents her presence, only for the two crows fly down to watch over her, as if Omensky (the one with the scar?) is bringing her newly passed mother to see her.
I agree wholeheartedly. This animatic also adds extra tragedy to her inevitable fall into insanity and villainy. Crowsong tried so damn hard to be good, to play by the unfair rules of her clan to earn her place amongst them. She was loyal, brave, and true to her clan mates even though all they gave her in turn was their apathy and contempt for something she couldn’t help nor control (her white coat and later her visions from Staclan). Even the catalyst for her descent into evil was done with the sole intention to gain a black coat, to finally belong and be loved by her clan. But after years of rejection and cruelty, she was pushed to the point of bloody revenge. Such a tragic character…
POV your me when watching fire on fire
This actually made me sob. Crowsong is such a highly in-depth original character, and I’m all for it. Though she’s a villain, you can definitely feel for her! Her actions may not be the right ones, but her upbringing gives reason for it.
Made out to believe she was worthless, she decided to take matters into her own paws. I’m beyond excited to see everybody’s art put together with your gorgeous character!!
Her actions were the right ones. Star clan told her to kill them even torture her through nightmares about it, her clan and parents all abuse and abandon her. What other options did she have whrn even the tge heavens told her to kill.
@@wayneshasmith7924 I wouldn’t imply killing as “the right actions” as murder just isn’t the answer. This /is/ a original character and I’d prefer not to argue over it! The paragraph I wrote was a positive one and how I admire the character and feel for her! I’d rather not discuss the topic any further. :)
@@Volt_- oh im not argueing. Im just woundering what other option should she take when the lore from the toy house clearly state that thwy told her to kill. What else could she have done
@@wayneshasmith7924 That’s Fine, I know you don’t want to argue. :) I can come off as passive-aggressive sometimes so I just wanted to get it out there that I wasn’t here to argue ^^.
And hmm, it’s a very hard topic because it’s not my character and we don’t know the full parts of the story. But the Darkforest told her to do these things, she could’ve defied them I guess? It’s really hard to know. Haha.
@@Volt_- not the dark forest Star clan
I find it so interesting that the Corvids continuously saved her and wanted her to stay in the clan despite what Crowsong would eventually do that same Clan especially when it’s implied they know about it.
I might be misinterpreting this, but part 14 looks like Crowsong is being surrounded by corvids with white patches, and it’s probably in a dream. Considering the fact that we know Crowsong has extremely, strong kind of prophetic nightmares, the fact that she’s dreaming of something nice, is interesting. It’s also kind of sad that Crowsong is dreaming of corvids that look a bit like her, a whole bunch of them surrounding her, and then she probably woke up after and remembered that that sort of thing could only happen in a dream. And that’s just sad.
Or, since we know CorvidClans ancestors take the form of actual corvids, it could be the spirits of off color kits of days past, white kits like her, all trying to comfort her. But that’s actually sadder.
Seeing how much pain Crowpaw went through as an app makes me really sad that she ended up in the dark forest rather than in StarClan with Omensky and Weepingwind
I love this entire concept, but can I just say the detail at the start where the owl makes a move at her is a great detail? I might be looking too much into it, but I feel like that's nodding to the fact Crowsong is an albino, which means she'd stick out a whole lot to predators.
This is such a gorgeous animatic! Your MAPs never cease to impress, so I'm really looking forward to this one
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@@BugsyBugYT I actually did notice that after my comment, how funny XD
SO EXCITED TO SEE ANOTHER MAP CALL OF CROWY BUT NOW WE GET TO KNOW MORE ABOUT THE PAST INSTEAD OF STORIES TOLD BETWEEN ASHKIT AND HER! I'M SO IMPRESSED HOW THE STORYBOARD DOESN'T EVEN LOOK LIKE A STORYBOARD, ITS AMAZING! WEEPINGWIND AND CROWPAW'S RELATIONSHIP WAS ALWAYS SOMETHING I WAS REALLY CURIOUS ABOUT.
Edit: My Caps lock was seriously broke ಠ◡ಠ
Edit 2: OMG is that 100 likes i see 👀
This may be me reaching but are the two crows at the end omensky and weepingwinds spirits? I could be wrong, but I got those vibes! Also this is utterly gorgeous!!
WAIT THEY DIED 😭
@@magesticwanderer9754 yeah! Weeping winds body is the one we see at the “will I be weak, if you’re not with me?” Part! Then the first crow has Omensky’s scar, seeing as she died a while before weepingwind!
@@Someonelovedasinner 😢 not weeping
@@magesticwanderer9754the whole clan is dead… :,,,)
The fact you can make envoirments so pretty just in a storyboard is amazing!!
Lo creates such animation magic that I can't stop crying every time she does something related to Crowsong.
This story touches me so much, the atmosphere, the movements, even the static shots, everything is so alive and beautiful.
Don't stop creating, don't stop drawing, I love you very much and am inspired by your work. I love watching you grow and mature and create something beautiful.
Thank you, that really warms my heart to hear!
THIS SO BEAUTIFUL
OH MY GOOOOD! LOUIXIE THIS IS BEAUTIFUL! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE IT!
We see a bit more of their culture, the shrine in the mountains! Beautiful landscapes are a thing for me!! And we get the moment of Crowpaw getting her feathers from her corvid protectors from the owl! CorvidClan are fools for practically hurting her like this, over some very outdated ideas too!
The scenery is gorgeous! 1:01 of her communicating with the corvids, her visions and ooof you really gotta hurt my heart! 😭 1:18 Weepingwind's death! 1:26 Seeing Raveneye showing emotion other that stocism once again hurts even more when he looks at Crowpaw with anger, as if he is thinking "You don't deserve to mourn her!" He would truly rather blame her than think about how it was his actions that broke his beloved Weepingwind's heart. And seeing her go to sleep in Omensky's nest, aww ❤ The one true safe place for her. I did wonder if the elders shared a den with Omensky at some point but moved due to other reasons or because they didn't want to interact with Crowsong, felt disgusted that she would dare touch Omensky's nest or maybe dens work differently here.
1:57 Sealed the deal for me once again! Grandma Omensky and Mama Weepingwind coming to check on Crowpaw through corvids!
😢 Can't help but wonder if Omensky was heavily disappointed in her daughter for not doing anything to protect Crowpaw or if she instead set aside her disappointment just to check on Crowpaw with Weepingwind.
I'm curious to know how, if they had lived to see her, Velvetquince, Silkshade and Flintwhisker would feel about Crowsong.
😭😭 I also feel tearjerker (TVTropes for sad moments) feelings cause Shadowfern and Weepingwind would've been cousins since Velvetquince and Silkshade were sisters and Omensky was with Velvetquince!!
Beautiful as ever Louixie! ❤
1:02 Crowpaw and the Magpie’s my heart 😭❤️
I have so much empathy for Crowsong. This made me cry because you can see in her eyes that she is trying so hard! She wasn't accepted by her clan and she still isn't. This a animation was so powerful for me because it made me look at the world differently. Some people cannot fit in and they are trying so hard. This is one of my favorite animations now. Louixie, your maps are so well done and so detailed even with the little things. I look up to you so much because of the way you do and see things on this channel. Thank you for reading this. ❤
This little animation is so touching that I cry every time I watch it. 😭💙💙
THE WEEPINGWIND & OMENSKY BIRDS AT THE END...... LOOK HOW HARD I CAN CRY
THIS IS INCREDIBLE!! the plot is so heartbreaking, but so well written!! every detail even in the map call is so on point!! so excited for this to come out!!
oh! i just got it now but Crowsong holds two feathers because that's what omesky (and most likely the clan as whole) did to honor their passed loved ones!
I know this is a storyboard for a MAP but this looks so pretty as a standalone product too!! It'll probably look 10x better on the final product!!
Her story is incredibly sad.
But Crowpaw's interaction with magpies looks very cute, besides, her nest looks very cozy.
As for the end, it's Omensky and Velvetquince, right?
The tragedy is all the more poignant by the fact she never really founds her place in the clan. She would have been happier to run away from her abusive clan and find a life away from all this.
The two crows in the end watching crowpaw...I think that these two are Weepingwind and Omensky, thats so sad and cute at the same time! ❤ awesome storyboard, louixie!
Can i just say- for a storyboard? This is still beautiful. It’s so detailed when it really doesn’t need to be and I love it.
This artstyle is lovely :3
I'm French, but I really like your work, thank you very much for sharing your art with us :D
IM SORRY- Did you just put a ridiculous amount of effort in backgrounds, lighting, character, composition and visual angles…IN A STORYBOARD????
Like I really don’t see any other artist in the platform that does this absolutely gorgeous and stunning talent or visually pleasing characters and original story or oc’s, and especially one that’s so involved within a small community. Words cannot describe how much of an inspiration louixie is to soo many others and me
Something that i noticed a while back that really makes me think is about the fact that CrowSong might have gotten her name from her grandfather
Idk if that's actually the case, but it would make sense for her father to do/suggest something like that
WHAT A BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL BOARD!!!!! I send this project the best of my wishes and wish for it to be successful :)
Its so sad seeing how her History goes. She was actually just a normal apprentice. Have her fears and passions, wnd everyone just hate her... For nothing actually.
OMG! I'm so excited for this!
The last shot with Omensky staring at the screen...MMMM CHEFKISS!!
Even the storyboard is beautiful oh my goodness!
A clan of corvids blessed with the moon itself as their flesh but too prideful and cruel to see. Man this OC's backstory hurts my soul but I love this character so much ahh
I applied for a backup!! this MAP looks absolutely gorgeous and I’m so excited to see the finished thing!
Out of all the ocs I’ve seen, yours is definitely the most interesting and has the most depth. Heck, I thought your ocs were canon characters at first! That’s how much character you give your ocs. I can’t wait to see you make your own movie 👍
This looks AMAZING!! I can't wait for the MAP to be finished. Crowsong is such an interesting character you would think she is from the books with all the lore and story she has. I know this map will be amazing once it's finished.
It was wonderful! I can't wait for a full-fledged MAP to be released:3
As always, Crowsong is gorgeous, and tears welled up in my eyes again when I saw how Raveneye looked at her. Her eyes are full of despair when she saw her dead mother... The way you convey emotions really makes me feel the emotions of Crowsong. Her story is a very unique sight in my life... Honestly, I'm going to cry right now because of this video.. 🥺
Well, Louixie, your style, animation, etc. are beautiful. You're very talented. Keep up the good work
OMG, LOU THIS IS INCREDIBLE!!!! EVEN THE STORYBOARD IS PERFECT!!!! YOUR ART STYLE IS GORGEOUS!!!
SO GORGEOUS OH MY GOOOD WOW THIS IS SO GORGEOUS THE CINEMATICS AND EVERY SHOT IS SO UNIQUR AND GORGEOUS AND EXPRESSIVE AND WELL FRAMED AND COMPOSITED OH MY LORD
Gosh this storyboard is phenomenal louixie!! I can't wait to see this done!! 💞💞
THIS WAS AMAZING! I also loved the two crows at the end, looks like Weepingwind and Omensky are watching her
This is beautiful! I can tell this will be amazing when it gets finished. The storyboard is so detailedled too, great work.
THATS AMAZING LOU? I’m so excited for the MAP to be complete!
ABSOLUTELY STUNNING!❤️ it’s gonna turn out so great!
what a cool new storyboard i haven't been watching endlessly for weeks and breathing in every detail!
This map call is beautiful! The boards are gorgeous, and I love the imagery of both parents as corvids at the end!! Applied!!
Applied for a backup!
I'm absolutely astonished by the amount of detail and beauty put into this storyboard! Amazing work
Gosh this is so stunning...
I'm so looking forward to seeing this complete. Crowsong's story is one so beautifully fleshed out and all the projects others and you have done surrounding her are filled with so much love and passion. I can't help but feel for this poor baby...
Oh wow this storyboard is amazing! I absolutely love how the emotions are being conveyed, very very well done!
I loved this storyboard alone! You always manage to hit right in the feels
Applied!
MASTERPIECE ❤
I'm finally first! 🥹
The amount of work you put in this animatic, it's so beautiful already! I can't imagine what it'll be like when it's finished
Omg I'm so excited for this MAP, I love your art and characters so much
I've been watching your videos for so long and let me tell you now, im overwhelmed with how jaw dropping your art is. Im sitting here staring like a freak, mouth agape, and gasping at each scene!!
this is amazing. This is gorgeous. I can’t wait for the full map!!
DEFINITELY APPLIED FOR BACKUP, YOOOO I LOVE CROWSONG MAPS AND THE STORYBOARD, EMOTIONS IN IT AND MUSIC ARE PERFECT AND SO BEAUTIFUL
This will be an amazing MAP, and as soon as I saw it, I immediately jumped here, applied as a helper!
Applied! This is an absolutely beautiful storyboard, I am so very excited to see it finished!!
almost forgot to comment but applied for backup!
This storyboard is stunning, I seriously adore your work so much!! :D
OMG OMG! Such a beautiful storyboard!! I'm excited for another crowsong map!!1! And even more anxious to see everyone's part, I'm sure this map will turn out magnificent!
THIS IS BEAUTIFULLY DONE I CANT WAIT! THIS MAP IS GONNA BE AMAZING AND WERE LEARNING MORE ABOUT ARE GIRL CROWSONG!!
AAAA I can'tttt
It's still so so well done and beautiful ❤️ I can't wait to see when this is done!!!
All the details and work you have put in this art ahhh ❤️❤️
APPLIED such a emotional storyboard already, the finished project will be stunning.
Oh, Crowsong's story is so deep and impactful! I love the way everything develops. It looks so good!! I'm excited for this :33.
Applied, this looks so amazing. I’d be honored to be a backup
Can't wait to see it finished! I absolotly love her story and I'm SO exiteted to lern more about her through animation!
I can’t wait to see what these beautiful animators have in store for us!! I’m so excited to see the completed map! Truly a masterpiece ^^
This is beautiful! I especially love the scene with the two crows at the end and the scene of her smiling in the grove of magpies!
I feel that it will be a very cool map! I already liked the storyboard of this map! I am already very much waiting for the map to be ready
This looks so good! keep up the quality work
THIS IS SO COOL!!!! I wish I had time to join, I can already tell the final map will turn out stunning omg.
I applied! Gosh I love how detailed the storyboards are, you must’ve spent so much time on them. The backgrounds are absokutely gorgeous and the way you draw eyes- aaaaaAA
Ohmygawsh it's so beautiful...
Time to rewatch this a million times!!
ARGHH THIS IS SOO GUUD! I APPLIED! I CANT WAIT TO SEE THE OUTCOMING! THIS MAY BE ONE MY FAVOURITE MAPS EVER!! IT GIVES ME SUCH GOOSEBUMPS!!❤❤
This already looks so cinematic and captivating I can't wait for the finished project!!❤
I absolutely love this song. I always love Louixie’s song choices in MAPS. Can’t wait for this one to be done! ❤❤❤❤
Awesome! I love all your work!
There's no limit for admiration😊❤❤
THIS IS STUNNING! I CANT WAIT FOR THE FINISHED PRODUCT!!!! Good luck to all participants!!!
i was so confused when i read 'wait its full ALLREADY?'
makes sense xD
storyobards super pretty
This is absoloutely stunning. I can't believe your work- it's stunning every single time. I wish I could participate! Good luck, and I'm excited to see the final product!
Oh wow! This MAP is just fantastic! ❤ The storyboard here is done SO WELL! I can't wait to see the whole MAP finished ^^
Also I love the story, it's touching and it matches with the song beautifully
Applied!
Oh my God.... These emotions ..... Eyes ..... This is a masterpiece and so beautiful!! Louixie, you are my favorite animator I have ever seen!!!^^
As usual, absolutely amazing damn art. I'm so impressed whenever I see one of your drawings it honestly makes me want to get back into art. Someday I think we all wish to achieve the level of skill that you have ❤
Good luck to participants, can't wait for the complete map because Crowsong is pretty much my favourite warriors oc I've seen, her story and design are awesome :D
OH. MY. GOSH. A BEAUTIFUL CROWSONG MAP IN PROGRESS???? OF COURSE I APPLIED FOR BACKUP!! Lou this looks absolutely stunning!!! 😭💗
WAAAHHHHH I just love Crowsongs story!! ;A;
I'd love to see this map finsihed sm!
OMG! This looks sooo beautifull! You spent a lot of time doing this! Thank you for your work
Holy! This is just beautiful! It made me cry I am like, so surpised! This just a masterpiece!! I love this sm I can rewatch this as much as I can and still couldn't be tired of this! And the two crows at the end, I'm thinking its Omensky and Weepingwind, just made me cry.
OMG!!!!! This song fits Crowsong PERFECTLY!!!!! It reflects her character & stories so well!!!! AMAZING ANIMATIC & LOVE CROWSONG!!!! She deserves love ❤️ ❤❤❤❤❤ Can’t wait for this MAP to be completed!!!! It’ll be an AMAZING MAP for Crowsong!!!!
Dude.. you are so talented!! The expressions and general look of the characters are so cool looking! I especially love Jackdaw's design, very beautiful. ❤
Another awesome work from an awesome artist!
This animatic is beautiful enough I can’t wait to see the finished map!!!!
I hope to one day join one of your projects! This one will be beautiful just like the others🦅🫶
I had no other choice but to apply! I love this storyboard so much man
This is so awesome!!!!!!
Holy crap Louixie! This is freaking amazing! I want to reach through the screen and hug her! And how she gets her two feathers - GOOSEBUMPS! I can’t wait to see this finished. ❤❤❤❤❤
Even the sketch looks so good❤❤❤
You are so talented,.
You are one of my insperations🤩🤩
AAAA THIS IS SO AMAZING!
wow! this is so beautiful and this is so amazing, and you never fail to amaze me (or most people is seems) your a really talented artist and you have such an amazing gift for making sad backstories that make people cry (as the people in the comments have already said), and I have applied!
i couldn't apply when this patreon map was open, but i just love this map's concept overall, crowsong's such an indepth and complex character, i love her sm and these storyboards are simply BEAUTIFUL
I applied! This storyboard is just gorgeous, it shows the atmosphere so well!
I REMEMBER SEEING THIS ON YOUR PATREON THE STORYBOARD IS TRULY BEAUTIFUL, I APPLIED