My First Phonk Song--------Advise would be much appreciated!!!

Any help to make better music would help a lot thatnks!

[@lautarom4543]

crazy brooooooooooooooooooooo

[@Erwin-rk1ph]

Very Nice!

[@cxbra2323]

thx man

[@losvy]

pretty good

[@cxbra2323]

Thank you bro🙏

[@kostiapro8848]

Cool phonk

[@cxbra2323]

yo thx man!

[@manuelscifo4002]

omg is very good phonk bro

[@cxbra2323]

Thank you man much appreciated 👍🏼

[@Toros1622]

I think thats pretty good for a first phonk music, but if were give some advice:
1. It may be longer
2. the rhythm is very repetitive, there must be places to slow down and rise again
3. I think you can find a melody that is better pumping than this one and repeats at least twice as long.
In this way, you can become a very good phonk song maker if you want, your potential is high.
Good luck😊

[@cxbra2323]

@@Toros1622 hey man thank you for giving me some advice! I really appreciate you man 🔥🔥🔥

[@Fpeofn]

Nice

[@cxbra2323]

Thx man

[@Zursenn]

how do you do that?