YOU HAVE SOME INSANE TALENT COZ YOU CAN'T JUST GET ME GIGGLING, BLUSHING, DYING ON THE FLOOR JUST LIKE THAT! THIS FF IS LITERALLY HANDS DOWN ONE OF THE BEST FFS I HAVE EVER EVER SEEN ❤❤❤
I'VE BEEN KICKING MY LEGS FOR FREAKING 17 MINS......GOSH NO ONE EVER MADE ME BLUSH LIKE THIS❤❤ I LOVED IT AND I HOPE YOU WILL CONTINUE TO MAKE MUCH MORE LIKE THIS ❤
Ahhh I was in class, and like it was super hard to not smile or like laugh or anythign like that. I eventually had to move to the bathroom and like I let it all out.@@Jays_grape_juice
AYYY MAH BIASSSSS OMG... I REALLY NEED TO TELL YOU THIS IM A NEW SUB U MIGHT HAVE SEEN ME IN UR COMMENTS BEFORE AND EVER SINCE I FOUND U ITS BEEN AN ADDICTION YOURE A NEXT LEVEL❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
You know what... I saw this 3 months ago and one month before I wanted to see it again but I couldn't find it I searched through my whole liked videos , playlists etc.... Then today I found this video again and I'm so grateful ❤❤ lysm
WTFFFFF WHY WAS THIS SO GOOD AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Okay im a little late (super late i know heh..) BUT THE FIRST OF ALL...THE ENDING HAS ME DEAD LIKE I KICKED MY FEET AND BLUSHED KNOWING ITLL NEVER HAPPEN BUT OKAY AS LONG AS I AM WITH MY FICTIONAL HEE 😭😭♥️♥️ u are an amazing writer, xx 🤍
Waittt....I have a question. If you take requests my Birthday is on March 29th and like I was wondering if you could do like a steamy Jay ff....If not its no trouble I was just wondering
Me being 18+ enjoying 16+ ff because most of the authors I subscribed started loosing their charm. I hate it I have to unsubscribe all of them and seriously I liked this one. No drama so chill yet intense...
The music cuts off after the 13 min mark due to copy right issues 🥲 screw you CZcams I'm done
Why am I laughing a this comment
NAUR CUZ HEESEUNG ROASTING KENDALL WAS FIRE XDDD
RIGHT
THE WAY I SCREAMED SHOULDN'T BE CONSIDERED NORMAL!?!?!
AJDODMEI UR SO SWEET
OMGGG YESS BROOO U SPOKE FACTS
AH WHEN WE ARE THE WIFE IN THE STORY >>>>> 🤧❤️
DAMN RIGHT
@@Jays_grape_juice YASSS ❤️❤️❤️
THE WAY I SCREAMED WHEN OF 'ONE OF THE GIRLS' STARTED PLAYING ❤😂
THAT SONG GOT ME COPYRIGHT SO U BETTER ENJOY HAAH
YOUR WRITING IS TOP TIER,LIKE IM SMILING LIKE A MANIAC RN🤭
THANK YOU SO MUCH!
I swear I blushed reading the word "wife"and mine and my woman😳😳😳😳😳😳
Godddddd saveeeee meeeeeee
This was FIRE 🔥
YOU ARE GIFTED😂😂
U MADE ME MENTALLY SCREAM MY HEART OUT-
ahaha thank youuu
Did anyone else laugh at the end when it said y/n breathes?😂 ALSO THIS IS A MASTERPIECE!🎉❤
Okay. But Heeseung roasting Kendall🔥🔥🔥✨
Kinda reminded me of myself a bit😅💀
IMAGINE IF HEESUENG SEES THIS 😭😭 😭
Let's Hope he doesn't
@@Jays_grape_juice lets hope that no idol comes across ur acc😭
@@Jays_grape_juiceyes
just me getting uncontrollably delulu after watching this
your ffs are the best gurl literal masterpieces
Girlll thank you SO much you're super nice
STAWP THIS IS LIKE CHATGPT LEVELED FIREEEEE 🔥❤🔥
THERE'S NO FREAKING WAY THAT A HUMAN MADE THIS FF BC IT'S DOWNRIGHT OTHERWORLDLY
STOP UR TOO NICE>< THANK YOU SO MUCH THAT'S A HUGE COMPLEMENT
THIS IS SO FUCKING GOOD.THE WAY I GASPED UNDER MY BREATH AFTER READING THIS!!
STOPPPP UR SO SWEET
Rewatching it after 2 months cuz like, it's legit fire! Keep going! Ur ff's are the best I have ever read!
WE NEED MORE FF LIKE THIS PLEASE 😭😭 IT WAS SO AMAZING
YOU HAVE SOME INSANE TALENT COZ YOU CAN'T JUST GET ME GIGGLING, BLUSHING, DYING ON THE FLOOR JUST LIKE THAT! THIS FF IS LITERALLY HANDS DOWN ONE OF THE BEST FFS I HAVE EVER EVER SEEN ❤❤❤
I NEED TO REMIND MYSLEF IM FASTING!IM FASTING!?!?
Same-
Ahhhh its so hard to fast sometimes.
@@Yayaya2006 trust me
No I know its hard.@@gulalaykhan
We must stay focused brothers we must stay focused
GIGGLING, SCREAMING, TOE CURLING, SHEET GRIPPING FANFIC
I LOVE U FRFR ONG
The way you describe things is so interesting I love your writing it reminds me of good Wattpad books keep it up author nim 😅
Thank you so much!!!!
OMG THIS WAS SUPER AMAZING LIKE WHAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!
THANK UUU
No need, just appreciating your amazing work@@Jays_grape_juice
@@Yayaya2006 soooo sweet of you!!!
YESS THIS IS THE SHIT I WAS WAITING FOR🎀
YAYYY
@@Jays_grape_juice no way u replied to my comment omg i love your insta works and also yt works
ANNA IS LITERALLY THE BEST AUTHOR EVER!!! LIKEEE THE SONG CHOICES OMG YOU DEF HAVE THE BEST TASTE AND THE WRITING ITSELF IS SO GOOD !!!!
GIRL I CAN'T. UR SO NICE LIKE ILYSM
OMGGGGG😭♥️I NEED PART TWO, EVEN IF I KNOW IT'S ONE SHOT. LOVE THISSSSSS SAUR MUCHHHH MORE OF THIS PLEASE 😌
HOLY MACARONI I WAS ABOUT TO FREAKING SCREAM!!!!! YOU NEED AN OSCAR AUTHOR FOR MAKING THIS..
STOP ILY THANK U SM
@@Jays_grape_juice NP AUTHOR!!! ALSO CAN YOU MAKE A ANOTHER HEESEUNG AND JUNGWONIE FF LIKE 18 OR 17+ PLEASEU AUTHOR.. LYSMM
I'VE BEEN KICKING MY LEGS FOR FREAKING 17 MINS......GOSH NO ONE EVER MADE ME BLUSH LIKE THIS❤❤
I LOVED IT AND I HOPE YOU WILL CONTINUE TO MAKE MUCH MORE LIKE THIS ❤
THANK YOU SM!!
I literally cant wait for this.
you made it tho!!
Ahhh I was in class, and like it was super hard to not smile or like laugh or anythign like that. I eventually had to move to the bathroom and like I let it all out.@@Jays_grape_juice
@@Yayaya2006 pleaseee I'm WHEEZING you are ADORABLE
*Blushing* Awww stawppp pshhhh@@Jays_grape_juice
OOF- I READ THIS AND LITERALLY I CAN'T STOP THINKING ABT IT LIKE AHHHHHH LEE HEESEUNG ( btw this is fire i love this ff)
WHEN I SEEN MY NAME I FREAKED OUT!!! ALSO THIS IS AMAZING!!! ♥
I LOVE THE ENDING😭😭🤚🏻🤚🏻
Author-nim.....
Can i screaming???
ARRRRGGGHHHHHH!!! 😭😭😭
this is sooooo good, thanks and love yaa❤
THANK U!!! AND OFC AHAH LOVE U TOO
AYYY MAH BIASSSSS OMG... I REALLY NEED TO TELL YOU THIS IM A NEW SUB U MIGHT HAVE SEEN ME IN UR COMMENTS BEFORE AND EVER SINCE I FOUND U ITS BEEN AN ADDICTION YOURE A NEXT LEVEL❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
YOU ARE ACTUALLY AN ANGEL DON'T LIEEE
@@Jays_grape_juice THANK YOUUUUU LOATS OF LOVE FROM MEHH❤️💋💋💋
@@hareemsajid2886 YOU'RE WELCOME LOTS OF LOVE TO U TOOO
AGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH- THIS IS SO DAMN GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!
AAAAAA THANK YOUUU
This was amazing!!! I just noticed your pfp changed its nice!!!
Aww thank you so much for noticing!!
You know what... I saw this 3 months ago and one month before I wanted to see it again but I couldn't find it I searched through my whole liked videos , playlists etc.... Then today I found this video again and I'm so grateful ❤❤ lysm
THIS WAS SAUR GOOD LIKE OMG HELP-😭✋🏻 IK I ALWAYS SAY THIS BUT....THIS FF?!! OMG SAUR GOOD ILYSM AUTHORRR✨✨
THANK YOU SO MUCH LOVE ILYSMT
@@Jays_grape_juice YOU'RE SO NICEE😭😭😭 ILYSMMM
@@nabiiez RIGHT BACK AT YOU!! ILYSMTT!!!
Ahhhhhh I'm dululu again ❤
Love thisssss😭
I'M GLAD AHAH
BRO DAMN THIS FF IS REALLY TH EBEST ONES I HAVE READ I KEPT BITING MY HAND WHILE READING THIS!!!!
GOT ME SMILING AND BLUSHING LIKE AN IDIOT FR, ONE OF MY FAV FF'S NOW‼️(the way i was jumping while reading this😇)
STOP THE MUSIC CHOICE IS MAKING IT BETTER OMFG😞
I CANNOT BREATHE WITHOUT U HERE RIGHT BY MY SIDE!I'LL DIE!By the way I luv the friends except kendall
THE SONG FITS SO GOOD🙏🤭😍
I'm glad you think so!!
Aahhhh *my inner child is screaming* one of the best ffs!!!😭😭😭
NO CUZ THIS SHIT IS SO FUCKING GOOD WTFF jahdjshssh
Screw my assignments this is too good to ignore!😳
UHM HELLOOOOOO? HOW IS THIS SOOO GOOD?
AAAAA THANK UU
NAHHHH I NEEDDDDDD A PART 2 CUZ HUHHHH? OMG THIS WAS SO GOOD
NAWWW YOUVE GOT ME GIGGLING AND SHIIII
AS I SHOULD ~
"Y/n breathes." Stawp🤚 this so beautiful.
The way i was gonna scream right now is concerning. I have completely lost my innocence.😂
OMG A FF WITH CHASE ATLANTIC SONGS 🔛🔝
SUPER MEGA UNDERRATED CUZ OMG THIS GOT ME LIKE DKJEJDNWKDSO
UR SO SWEET AAAK THANKS
Not me acting most of this out in my room while reading it *most of it*
WTFFFFF WHY WAS THIS SO GOOD AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
SO CUTE!!!
okay but why is everyone talking in capital letters? btw love ur ffs>>>>>
OMG I LOVE IT!!!💖💖💖
I'm glad~~
OH MY GAWD YOU EARNED A SUBSCRIBER 🤍
OMG THANK U
EXACTLY LITERALLY PERFECT 😍 (when you mentioned esophagus i laughed gurl are u filo? LOLLLL)
Aaahhh no I'm not haha
@@Jays_grape_juice OHMYYYY I'VE BEEN WANTING YOU TO REPLY!! I'M A FAN
Okay im a little late (super late i know heh..) BUT THE FIRST OF ALL...THE ENDING HAS ME DEAD LIKE I KICKED MY FEET AND BLUSHED KNOWING ITLL NEVER HAPPEN BUT OKAY AS LONG AS I AM WITH MY FICTIONAL HEE 😭😭♥️♥️ u are an amazing writer, xx 🤍
12:32 AAAAHH
Oh my God 😮 I love this ❤ how to you make this you super l am your new subscriber 😊
Thank you so much !! And welcome to the crib pookie~~
Sorry l made a mistake it was how do you make this
AHHHH SAUR CUTEE
Wow I am surprised
Why did you only use instrumental in meddle about?? I was waiting for the lyrics bro 😭
Im late watching this BUT LIKE MISS ISNT IT ILLEGAL FOR U TO POST FFS LIKR THIS I FOLLOE U ON INSTA ALSO AND IM ALMOST GRIPPING MY WALLS😭😭
JUST WAIT I WILL COME AFTER DINNER!!!!!
EAT WELL!!
@@Jays_grape_juice Thanks❤❤❤
I need anti-delulu pills…
THAT IS SOO GOOD !! can i maybe do a request?
if yes then could you please do if heeseung cant stop hiccuping all day please it woild be soo cute..?
IN ANNA WE TRUST, IN ANNA WE BELIEVE
STOP SO CUTE ILYSM
@@Jays_grape_juice i can die in peace now
Waittt....I have a question. If you take requests my Birthday is on March 29th and like I was wondering if you could do like a steamy Jay ff....If not its no trouble I was just wondering
Oh my!! Happy early birthday!! And I'll try my best to make a Jay ff but I can't promise anything T-T i will try!!!
Aww okay thanks. Glad your at least tryna put an effort into making one. If you cant no sweat^^@@Jays_grape_juice
More like this please
I'll try!!
YOU SHLD START A WATTPAD ACC
WOAHHHHHH 🔥🤌🏻
16:10 I already know something spicy is gonna happen
nvm
Ayo 📸 😃
Part 2 ??
That was soooo short. I was yk expecting a little more of what happened in the bathroom 😏. I am disappointed 🙄
That was 17 mins of straight horniness...stay mad pookie but I don't write smut 😘
Me being 18+ enjoying 16+ ff because most of the authors I subscribed started loosing their charm. I hate it I have to unsubscribe all of them and seriously I liked this one. No drama so chill yet intense...
Awe I'm glad you like it!!
we dont breathe from our esophagus... 1:48
isnt the esophagus for food... and the breathing pipe for breathing..
@@Jays_grape_juice
@@Jays_grape_juice girl im right we breath from the trachea and eat from the esophagus 😭😭😭😭😭😭 search it up
@@-Anushreee- Nah what my bad pookie 😔🎀 😩
@@Jays_grape_juice lmfao 😍
Do you have a boyfriend me yes is he in a country yes he's from another nation what nation? Me imagination😭🥲
im not 16+... who cares!
I CARE!! SHUU
Babe how old r youuu than😭🤚🏻🤚🏻
@@KimShili 13 💀