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Why Is This Good? episode 131: "Jeffty is Five" by Harlan Ellison
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In this episode, we discuss "Jeffty is Five" by Harlan Ellison. What can we learn from this nostalgic story? How does the ending wrap up the arc of the story? How can we tell which character the story is meant to change? What does it mean to suspend disbelief? How do we write a story about kids that's for adults?
Read the story here: xpressenglish.com/our-stories/jeffty-is-five/
Why Is This Good? is a podcast from the Naples Writers' Workshop in which we read successful stories and ask "Why is this good?"
Through our discussion, we hope to discover useful things to say about how fiction works, the craft of writing, and literary art. We try to find lessons for our own writing by closely examining well-written stories, and we hope to share some of those lessons with our audience.
Why is This Good? is produced in Naples, Florida by the Naples Writers' Workshop.
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Why Is This Good? episode 130: "Barn Burning" by William Faulkner
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Why Is This Good? episode 129: "Separating" by John Updike
zhlédnutí 27Před měsícem
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Why Is This Good? episode 128: "It's Such a Beautiful Day" by Isaac Asimov
zhlédnutí 54Před měsícem
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Why Is This Good? episode 127: "The Frog King" by Garth Greenwell
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Why Is This Good? episode 126: "The Destructors" by Graham Greene
zhlédnutí 47Před 2 měsíci
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Why Is This Good? episode 125: "Button, Button" by Richard Matheson
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Why Is This Good? episode 124: "Civil Peace" by Chinua Achebe
zhlédnutí 26Před 3 měsíci
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Why Is This Good? episode 123: "Woman at Exhibition" by E. Lily Yu
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Why Is This Good? episode 122: "Car Crash While Hitchhiking" by Denis Johnson
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Why Is This Good? episode 121: "When Stars Collide" by Ottessa Moshfegh
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Why Is This Good? episode 120: "The Dead" by James Joyce
zhlédnutí 80Před 5 měsíci
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Why Is This Good? episode 119: "The Bear Came Over the Mountain" by Alice Munro
zhlédnutí 176Před 6 měsíci
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Why Is This Good? episode 118: "The Library of Babel" by Jorge Luis Borges
zhlédnutí 66Před 6 měsíci
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Why Is This Good? episode 117: "Drive My Car" by Haruki Murakami
zhlédnutí 36Před 7 měsíci
If you enjoyed this episode, consider joining our Patreon. Your support helps us keep the show running. Find out more at www.patreon.com/whyisthisgoodpodcast For daily writing tips, industry news, and great short fiction, join our Facebook group at groups/napleswritersworkshop You can also subscribe to our monthly newsletter at www.napleswritersworkshop.com In this episode, we disc...
Why Is This Good? episode 116: "Harrison Bergeron" by Kurt Vonnegut
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Why Is This Good? episode 116: "Harrison Bergeron" by Kurt Vonnegut
Why Is This Good? episode 115: "The Cartographer Wasps and the Anarchist Bees" by E. Lily Yu
zhlédnutí 55Před 8 měsíci
Why Is This Good? episode 115: "The Cartographer Wasps and the Anarchist Bees" by E. Lily Yu
Why Is This Good? episode 114: "The Man Who Lost the Sea" by Theodore Sturgeon
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Why Is This Good? episode 114: "The Man Who Lost the Sea" by Theodore Sturgeon
Why Is This Good? episode 113: "And of Clay Are We Created" by Isabel Allende
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Why Is This Good? episode 113: "And of Clay Are We Created" by Isabel Allende
Why Is This Good? episode 112: "Spring in Fialta" by Vladimir Nabokov
zhlédnutí 227Před 9 měsíci
Why Is This Good? episode 112: "Spring in Fialta" by Vladimir Nabokov
Why Is This Good? episode 111: "The Paper Menagerie" by Ken Liu
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Why Is This Good? episode 111: "The Paper Menagerie" by Ken Liu
Why Is This Good? episode 110: "This Way for the Gas, Ladies and Gentlemen" by Tadeusz Borowski
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Why Is This Good? episode 110: "This Way for the Gas, Ladies and Gentlemen" by Tadeusz Borowski
Why Is This Good? episode 109: "Happy Endings" by Margaret Atwood
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Why Is This Good? episode 109: "Happy Endings" by Margaret Atwood
Why Is This Good? episode 108: "The Cask of Amontillado" by Edgar Allan Poe
zhlédnutí 57Před 11 měsíci
Why Is This Good? episode 108: "The Cask of Amontillado" by Edgar Allan Poe
Why Is This Good? episode 107: "How to Eat Chicken Wings" by Kristen Arnett
zhlédnutí 33Před rokem
Why Is This Good? episode 107: "How to Eat Chicken Wings" by Kristen Arnett
Why Is This Good? episode 106: "The Frog Prince" by Robert Coover
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Why Is This Good? episode 106: "The Frog Prince" by Robert Coover
Why Is This Good? episode 105: "Milkwishes" by Kristen Roupenian
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Why Is This Good? episode 105: "Milkwishes" by Kristen Roupenian
Why Is This Good? episode 104: "Redemption" by John Gardner
zhlédnutí 127Před rokem
Why Is This Good? episode 104: "Redemption" by John Gardner
Why Is This Good? episode 103: "A Temporary Matter" by Jhumpa Lahiri
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Why Is This Good? episode 103: "A Temporary Matter" by Jhumpa Lahiri
Why Is This Good? episode 102: "The Worshipful Society of Glovers" by Mary Robinette Kowal
zhlédnutí 27Před rokem
Why Is This Good? episode 102: "The Worshipful Society of Glovers" by Mary Robinette Kowal

Komentáře

  • @XJiyanxXx
    @XJiyanxXx Před 17 hodinami

    That's an amazing discussion about the short story. I had similar thoughts about the different storylines as channels which switch like in the story itself the babysitter switches the TV channels. And there is so much more about it to analyse. You did a great job, thank you✨

  • @betoariz
    @betoariz Před 13 dny

    I like this book

  • @heathercandels3754
    @heathercandels3754 Před 27 dny

    Like, like, like. Count them. Like.

  • @ziadelgeziry
    @ziadelgeziry Před měsícem

    I have enjoyed this one thoroughly and was glad to find that you haven't given up on this podcast. March on, dear fellows. Your actions do reverberate

  • @angelagilmartin2109
    @angelagilmartin2109 Před měsícem

    Bananafish- SPOILER 😮😅 I’m still going to read it 😂

  • @ritaw9000
    @ritaw9000 Před 2 měsíci

    Look up Diane Schuler

  • @vanbloot495
    @vanbloot495 Před 3 měsíci

    Okay, I didn't like the story the first time I read it cause I felt like it was pointless. Later on I read one of his other shorts called "Barn Burning" and I liked it but I still didn't get it but then the movie called "burning" based on Barn Burning came out and I finally understood that the story was a about a serial killer! But told in a very subtle way. So when it came time to revisit this short story "With the beatles" I was looking for the signs and I think I have a theory. The brother has a sort of traumatic amnesia. I think he abused his sister, and he did it regularly. The boyfriend was supposed to meet the girlfriend on Sunday, but something happened to her the night before, and all the family members rushed her to the hospital. However, the family kept it under wraps and kept this secret within the family. I assume the sister was not allowed to talk about it too. That's why she never spoke about her brother. The sister then lied to the narrator about their scheduled date and the narrator just believed her. Fast forward to later in her life, and she is an adult but realizes that her abuser (her brother) still has not faced justice. Her whole family ignores this issue, leading to her own trauma, and she eventually committed suicide. The brothers supposed "genetic memory loss disorder" was a lie he made up or a lie his parents told him. He would commit these crimes on the sister and most likely block out these memories. This is my theory. Her suicide was not random, and the brothers' Memory loss was not random. I believe Murakami is giving us all the clues to piece the story together, but I think we are so used to believing characters in normal stories. We should be investigators regarding his stories. The only character you should believe is the narrator because he is just as ignorant as we are, but he also, much like us, was not privy to what was happening to his own girlfriend. The narrator looks back to this memory and realises he missed something. He missed something important. Evil is everywhere, and it's not easy to see.

  • @friendlyneighborhoodanarch8736

    Fun fact: anarchist bees are a naturally occurring phenomenon

  • @Henry_Swanson
    @Henry_Swanson Před 4 měsíci

    The child didn't die. That wouldnt be sad enough. He disassociated, all of the language in the text is odd and distant, itself disassociated.

  • @acimand
    @acimand Před 5 měsíci

    The forum Nazi that keeps commenting that some issues should be in other forums is a great repeating joke. Writing a story that utilitizes the format of a reddit post or a CZcams comments section, for example, could adapt a repeating joke as well. But as you said, there's a particularity to forum Nazis that I'm not sure can be easily replicated in other - more common - formats.

  • @yahyaj4845
    @yahyaj4845 Před 6 měsíci

    He really can paint a scene so well, loved this story.

  • @sarahgleason8996
    @sarahgleason8996 Před 7 měsíci

    I love this story! It’s one of King’s best. A nugget of great short fiction.

  • @LorentJalabert
    @LorentJalabert Před 8 měsíci

    most talented living american story teller / writer

  • @robertsantana3261
    @robertsantana3261 Před 8 měsíci

    U guys rock. Why wasn’t Symour kissing that girl on the leg on the beach brought up.

  • @vicjames3256
    @vicjames3256 Před 11 měsíci

    11:21 - yes exactly. It is one of my favorite lines in fiction, cause the setup for it is so perfect, and it' just a gut-punch of a line, as a paragraph all by itself, and as soon as you read it your heart sinks, and now you know it's only downhill from here. It's both hilarious and tragic.

  • @rampantmutt9119
    @rampantmutt9119 Před rokem

    I wish I had empathy.

  • @dominicgodfrey8015
    @dominicgodfrey8015 Před rokem

    The Thunderstorm is coming

  • @readreadofficial
    @readreadofficial Před rokem

    Loving your content, would really enjoy hearing your thoughts on a Borges story!

  • @readreadofficial
    @readreadofficial Před rokem

    Awesome podcast, making my way through Barthelme's 'Sixty Stories' now.

  • @PhatLvis
    @PhatLvis Před rokem

    English was the first language he learned, via home tutors, concurrently with Russian.

  • @walkerpercy8702
    @walkerpercy8702 Před rokem

    Its an interesting story because the guy actually isn't tuned into her feelings at all the whole time, essentially treating her like an object. And when they're in his bed he's making these stupid porn movie remarks. And then finally at the end the truth comes out. - a guy

  • @travis6992
    @travis6992 Před rokem

    Not that it overcomes my gratitude for you exposing great stories, but YOU GOT TO READ THE WHOLE STORY. Especially here, and with an another like Barthelme. ITS ALREADY SHORT. Whew. Sorry for the shouts. Cheers mates. Carry on.

  • @user-gu4ut6jf6h
    @user-gu4ut6jf6h Před rokem

    Hi, I'm a big fan of your podcast. You should do an episode of "Cruising Paradise" of Sam Shepard. It's a great short story. Greetings from Mexico.

  • @Trynottoblink
    @Trynottoblink Před rokem

    Love these, keep them coming. Thanks

  • @martynasbieliakas367

    Recently I started reading short stories and stumbled upon this one. It seem very different from what I usually read. Now I kinda feel that I miss out on really good stuff by only choosing to read books of a certain genre. Thanks for the great discussion - it answered a lot of questions!

  • @Angelique_Marie
    @Angelique_Marie Před rokem

    Im listening to this cause I was scared of reading it due to a trigger warning from my teacher. I have an exam about it in like 3 hours and you guys are saving my ass! ty, this was so good to listen to!

  • @icytheicedragon8251

    WOW WHAT A GOOD STORYYY🤩

  • @sethmarlee3303
    @sethmarlee3303 Před rokem

    Good stuff!!! #1 YT views provider -> Promo`SM.

  • @shiangjeoushyu8586
    @shiangjeoushyu8586 Před rokem

    Great discussions that push me to read that story again from a new starting point.

  • @bpisoni4123
    @bpisoni4123 Před rokem

    This essay is not about Tiffany. If people disagree with his depiction of her, that is beside the point. This is an essay about his appreciation and gratitude for the family he actually had relationships with over the years. David makes it clear that he never understood her, nor did he care to. Tiffany did not care for the family the way he did and that's the point. It's a beautiful piece of writing and I think anyone who has had a sibling that they couldn't relate to or understand would empathize with the premise of the essay.

  • @samcopeland3155
    @samcopeland3155 Před rokem

    I enjoyed the conversation but I think you completely misinterpreted the story. It isn’t saying “there’s a problem with white men, etc etc” - if anything it’s a critique of those cliched, abstract ways of thinking about human interaction.

  • @Edible_Kittens
    @Edible_Kittens Před rokem

    Like you both, I was struggling to find any solution or way it could have been prevented. But I was at a loss. It’s very interesting that you posit that the protagonist is inherently broken, as if he doesn’t know how to be human. I never thought about it like that before, how he’s unable to channel empathy and has no personality outside of serving others or what he can do for others. He did register as off but nothing wrong on a technical level, but he really is sort of this shell of a human being. Very interesting discussion, exactly the kind of thing I was craving when I finished the story and it lingered on my mind for days.

  • @52baldingindianjanitor72

    Great discussion on this piece, I find it kind of hilarious how a lot of other online reviews of this dismiss the story as 'incel fantasy', almost in a bizarre meta way proving the point of the protagonist.

  • @jasons5166
    @jasons5166 Před rokem

    english was one of his first languages

  • @colombiacrack88
    @colombiacrack88 Před rokem

    Wouldn’t it be direct address?

  • @colombiacrack88
    @colombiacrack88 Před rokem

    Wish you read the whole thing. This was the first barthelme story I read in an anthology and I felt my head burst open. Pure joy for me

  • @colombiacrack88
    @colombiacrack88 Před rokem

    I’m obsessed with barthelme. He set me free. I think he rejected the label or post modernist if I’m not mistaken.

  • @BOWS3R
    @BOWS3R Před rokem

    The story is from a collection titled “Unspeakable Practices, Unnatural Acts” and was published in 1968, not 1981. I enjoyed the discussion.

  • @Jake-D-Solyst
    @Jake-D-Solyst Před rokem

    Thanks for this!

  • @patiencewilkinson234

    ❗ ᵖʳᵒᵐᵒˢᵐ

  • @rickartdefoix1298
    @rickartdefoix1298 Před 2 lety

    Thom Jones is an underrated writer for whom my praise goes beyond words. His three books have an amazingly wide range of different Short Stories. Several of them count among the best I've ever read. He can be very moving, as in his beautiful Cold Snap or the hawaian love story in Sonny Liston was a Friend of Mine. Or develop a great sense of humour, a dark kind of sense of humour that will make you burst in laughter. Still he is always interesting and his plots are clever ones, with plenty of action. He deals with love, friendship, violence, drugs and sex, mainly. He was fond of Shopenhahuer and mentions him, here and there. Sometimes he uses American slang in his writings and dialogues. It isn't easy sometimes to differentiate between the stories he basically imagines, and the ones he has lived and so he is mainly remembering. He can be very funny, and in other cases also very touching, depending what's his aim each time. I consider him a great reading and he quickly became one of my favourite authors. He died too soon, pity. Because he had everything needed to have become one of the major artists the States ever gave us. 💎❤️👍🤗

  • @emilynorris7625
    @emilynorris7625 Před 2 lety

    𝕡𝐫o𝕄o𝔰𝓶

  • @Robert1546_Sea
    @Robert1546_Sea Před 2 lety

    So underrated. Has so much natural talent. His stories are so thoughtful and thought provoking.

  • @bmaei5
    @bmaei5 Před 2 lety

    Just finished skinship by yoon Choi and loved the book and this short story. In this short story the class and educational differences of the husband and wife and the racial differences with the son-in-law, Sanjay, were smaller but important details.

  • @bmaei5
    @bmaei5 Před 2 lety

    I love this short story. Remember Gordon lish eliminated all the extraneous material from carvers’s short stories. And no you do not need to lead the reader anywhere. The reader can interpret the story as she sees fit.

  • @philipfisher3263
    @philipfisher3263 Před 2 lety

    David Sedaris is an excellent writer. I recall reading the bit you read, putting it down, and saying “wow”.

  • @walkerpercy8702
    @walkerpercy8702 Před 2 lety

    I like your show but... this one is actually not good unless you like a complaining young adult voice.

  • @eddiereedbigband1
    @eddiereedbigband1 Před 2 lety

    I liked your effort to discuss your lack of attention span. I was also impressed by how honest your were about hating not being able to watch a preview of it before reading this celebrated short story. I'm willing to bet The White Heron visits your thoughts far more than the films and cable serials whose previews convince you they were worth your time. Your commentary was quite proud, insightful and ambivalent. You must have been forced to read To Kill A Mockingbird and still resent how much you loved it. You have a keen insightful mind and a fine conversational turn of phrase. I trust you are spending most of your time writing your own prose rather than critiquing the published work of others. Those who can do, those who cannot criticize. CHEERS !

  • @edwardwho5158
    @edwardwho5158 Před 2 lety

    underrated channel

  • @esraakhattab8188
    @esraakhattab8188 Před 2 lety

    Is that told from a first person narrator or third ? I cannot understand that