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Hey, I'm the first and only comment. Not the right way to go if you want people to watch and listen. It's a good story. The presentation is off setting

Not a good story. Looks like a rng ai one

A.I. stands for Artifical Idiot.

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I can't believe I made it halfway through before I turned this off.

Good story thanks.

Captain and crew committed suicide twice?? AI garbage.

Generic boring repeat

Poor and Lazy writing

This one is a mess!!! AI crap.

Very poorly written

As I have told other HFY Writers... FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, TELL US THE GIRLS AGE. TELL US HOW OLD SHE IS! Whenever it's a boy, the first thing you do is say something like '8 Year old Boy' BUT when it's a girl, you NEVER mention her age. Is this girl a child, an adult? a Teenager?!?!? PLEASE!! MENTION HOW OLD THE GIRL IS IN THIS STORIES!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Didn't Xorax and his ship disappear into the swirling vortex with the Valor? When did they return and how?

nothing like precision and skill, more AI crap

It's fantasy, nothing real here. Any aliens available for humans to talk to or fight against would simply be the evil spirits of the giants of old, whose fathers are fallen Angels. Try looking for a reason for hundreds of feet to sediment rock all over the world. Most scholars attempt to cover up the facts about the history of our world because they don't want to be accountable for anything. If there is a creator, then you would be accountable to him, and so-called scholars believe they are above reproach, and NO ONE is allowed to correct them. What a pity!!

A woman captain and warrior......(HEAVY SARCASTIC TONE)REALLY?

Ai stories are getting boring

Terrible writing the same words, phrases and clichés repeated, over and over and over again. No chance of making any personal connections with the protagonists, as the only protagonist is characterless. Little more than a cipher, a mouthpiece for for tediously repeated words and phrases. There's no sense of urgency or peril as the nature of threats and misunderstandings is never explained and we never meet those involved. The story was little more than a string of empty platitudes, repeated ad nauseum.

So this is the plot of Babylon 5. Got it.

keep it up you got this

This is some 4th grader's book report replete with numerous mispronunciations & Misspellings

Ai writen bs

0:01 this dolt forgot about ostriches, emus, ducks 🦆, chickens 🐓 kangaroos 🦘 and jesus lizards 😬 How do you manage to look stupid with your opening statement? Did you have to practice to achieve this astonishing feat? How did you imagine T-Rex 🦖 got around? 🧐 When you watched “Match of the Penguins “ what did you think “march” was referring to?

Sounded like a Marriage between Star Trek, Star Wars, & Battlestar Gallactica!

This story is like eating Taco Bell. It goes in badly, and comes out much worse.

Wow. This is bad. Really bad. Lacking basic logic, hyper optimistic and plain ignorant. AI at its ridiculous worst

Why do all these AI stories kiss human butt? Why is there never honesty about the shortcomings of humans? Why is there never a stronger, smarter or well armed alien race that beats us? Weird.

Out the true virgin mother creator and divine spark light fire purified Holy Spirit in eye of fire out the true virgin sun became the father in a dying sun and five stand as one M1911 Michael my God given name and five stand as one . Out womb and in man born again in life without tasting death known to the true virgin mother creator before he was born known proclaimed three times over before he was born choosen before he was born Spirit found the body walked the old Path cause and effect given amnesty from law married the father known to the true virgin mother creator cause and effect given amnesty from law married the father out womb and in man born again in life without tasting death born again in Christ 18.1.24 judgement multiply once see perfect harmony in balance with all in life in-laws above and below given amnesty from law and God's given name and understanding see is I am the hope for the man of understanding who.the hell.said test none debate arrogant jackasses pathological liars pretending to understand False prophets if keep it up debate educated guessers unknown ass test none deaf when pretend to hear blind pretend to see unknown pretend to be known age over arrogant masters in deceiving even self believe your own lies unknown to self divided refuse to return to one unknown swine

They immediately make enemies of humans. And did they not think humans wanted to terraform their planet to live better??

I really hate how the AI writers use filler words. I use kobold ai lite and suspect that this content creator is doing the same. Every story is so contrite full of common phrases like determination and bravery, Alex opens the jar of pickles his allies cheered him on with unity and spirit, and later on they chose to combine their strengths to defeat to pickle god and stood triumphant in the annals of history ready to face whatever lies ahead. They stood hand in hand ready to take on new challenges that lay ahead. You have to include "do not insert filler phrases: [insert phrases here separate by commas]" Otherwise you have this garbage over and over.

humans would never divulge that info at the start

Sorry but the storyline went from a losing battle to utopian Paradise?... It's just not believable

They call us in fact the painers, because we are so weak for pain.

An Alien fleet with just one hyperdrive and humans unravelled their technology from a distress signal? Are things that desperate creatively that we have to endure this drivel?

Holy! THis is good! Good job

Word salad at it's best Doctor Lyra warrior scientist.

This isnt good enough to be complete crap .

This is not a story. It is a summary...

She was terrified of sleep and then understood it was not a weakness? Surr buddy.

Ai narration took me out.

But earth dont have a second moon and the second object in sky was a asteroid caught by the earth gravity many many many years ago

First 6minutes are litteraly mind numbingly bad. “Dawson’s Christian” but bad

How can a ship with a sole survivor have a crew? Another bad story. Guys, please have somebody read your stories before posting crap.

You should just do what Resident alien does. Give the aliens a descriptive easy to remember name like Blue, Grey or Avian, These strange names are annoying. Also less narration and more dialogue and character arcs.

The only thing that would spice this story up. Would be if a galactic level threat presented itself, and it required the use of the solar system destroying weapon. The cherry on top would be the human's refusal to use it or share plans on it. Meanwhile whole star systems of the galactic council's member worlds.

It is just loop

the way the story sounds so repetitive, it looks like it is made in AI Dungeon.

Another peace and unity story trying to be inspirational. I visibly cringed while trying to listen to this. This isn't just garbage, it's hot garbage. It's the shit they feed hogs on feed lots, microplastics and all. Channel owner should delete this. I'm just about ready to block this channel if the content doesn't improve.

"The empress unleashed an energy blast (Um, How and what kind?) "It threatened the supercarrier." (Duh) "The human deflected the blast back and killed the Empress" (WHAT!?! HOW?) Appearently this was written by an AI with the skills of a 4th grader. There's 3 minutes and twenty-five seconds I'll never get back

This isn't a story - it's an overly fluffy and long-winded pitch for a story that sounds too generic to be interesting. It's about as appetizing as an unflavored gelatin - no substance and a waste of time. I normally like this channel, but this was just terrible - sorry.