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SamuWriter
Registrace 13. 07. 2023
This is my little corner where I share short stories I write. Hope you like it :)
Rings of power feels like a first draft
A short rant on the writing in Rings of Power #ringsofpower
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Human Gods ⚔️ Fantasy Short Story ⚔️ Prologue
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Human Gods ⚔️ Fantasy Short Story ⚔️ Prologue
Picnic on the Milky Way🛸Sci-Fi Short Story🛸
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Picnic on the Milky Way🛸Sci-Fi Short Story🛸
They're ruining beloved franchises on purpose. $1B budget should be producing shows like Sopranos, Ray Donovan, or Preacher. But behind the scenes, Bezos likely wanted in on the big push in Hollywood to morph the masses this generation(as they do every other). But it's easier to just believe these "elite" writers are just inept, woke, or stupid. When they're actually malcontents, and there is malice in place of misperceived ineptitude. They're making it bad on purpose, unilaterally. You want an illustration of that look at Jim Henson's "The Dark Crystal" and pay attention to what the Skeksis did to the Podlings.
Someone asked me why I didn't like RoP, expecting to trap me in some politically charged argument. My answer was simple "really bad writing". They couldn't argue...
It does feel like that. My only experience as a writer is as a DM, but I really think I put more effort and thought into it than the writers of the show. For example, I'm currently writing a story set in a cloak and dagger, musketeer style universe. I wanted to set it in Venice during the Carnival and I took inspiration from the play The Impostures of Scapin by Molière, so I decided to make it a kidnapping story. From there several scenes came into my mind, I chose those which I liked the most, and then I went to link them into a coherent little story. Now I have to "fill the gaps". By that I mean that I must make sure characters motivations, actions and words all make sense within the story. "Can they do that? Would they do that?" This kind of stuff. I personally think this is very basic, but RoP writers don't seem to even do that.
@@Angrenost02 exactly, i have no idea how that happens in such an expensive production
Yeah the show sucks they never cared, funny thing is everything is already written for them and they still failed
NO WAY!
Who wants to live forever? I was deaf from gunfire at 20, at 30 my thyroid quit, at 40 my pancreas went on strike. At 50 my eye couldn't focus to read. At 60 my knees wore out. At 80... Even I don't know why I'm sitting here in the dark , alone in pain, staring at my loaded Glock. I love life. Mine was a wonderful adventure. I don't want to live forever... Broken, no not like this. BANG!
@@WoHuLo very poetic, but i hope its just poetry
@@SamuraiWriterIt's prose. You inspired it. So I wrote it for you. If you actually thought that I might do it then the writing did exactly what I wanted it to do. It is my gift to you.
Oh Christian stuff I shall leave
@@VictoriousVic525 what do you mean christian stuff?
@@SamuraiWriter I’m not Christian and that’s a bible story so I don’t care cause I really don’t like religion so
@@VictoriousVic525 its not a bible story, its a short sci fi story
hate this narrator
If you are on a planet and seeking to send out a signal for rescue from someone on another planet, you would not require higher ground as we need to when sending FM or AM radio signals as the signal would be sent out straight up into and through the atmosphere and into space. It would not need to clear hills or mountains or other obstacles.
That is a good point, thank you
Um 😶 is anyone else seeing what I see in the background it’s kinda obvious
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I love the concept, nicely done
full story: czcams.com/video/sRaUIUMk_HM/video.html
Gods can die too, Look up the battle of the Titans Greek mythology or Ragnarok
Note to self: When taking the first FTL drive ship out for it's first test flight, DO NOT jump 3,000 light years away. Save that for day 2.
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