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It's not a plus for me :) but at least people who find this channel can rely on the information unlike the other big ones run by people who were never examiners. Hahaha

@IELTSBandUp you know, if we follow a million subscribers' channels then we get repeated formats and ideas, but we find you haha

@@milanthapa1519 thank you

As you probably know, there are four sections and if you don't write an overview, then you can only get a band 5 for task achievement.

Same with me

Thank you for your comment. Fistt, your spelling and word formation look like a band 5, so here is what your idease should look like :) There is contention about whether advanced technology, such as AI, will cause disruptions in the job market or provide an abundance of opportunities. I agree with the latter viewpoint because technology still requires human involvement to operate, and high-tech also assists people in working online. Now as far as you style - you should not give your reasons in your introduction, save that for your body paragraphs. AND I believe it looks better to save your opinion for the conclusion. Remember, this is a discussion essay, not an opinion essay. You can put your opinion in the introduction, but it looks a little better in the conclusion. I have explained why in more detail in the video. And sorry to say, but the reason you are confused is probably because you have watched some other 'so called' ielts experts and their advice is often rubbish. I make literally no money off this channel. I started it because of all the terrible advice out there. I will have more videos posted soon.

Thank you for such a thoughtful comment. 💜

Thanks

You're welcome 🤗

I wish CZcams agreed with you :)

It's just a suggestion. And it's a good suggestion, because writing fewer than 250 words on a task 2 essay would not be a good idea. I just find it annoying that there are so many website and CZcamsrdae.uga.edu/iep/handouts/Video-5-IELTS-Task-2-rubric2.pdfs still stating that you lose a point for Task Achievement when that hasn't been the case for ages.

@@IELTSBandUp I really appreciate your recommendations. Thank you so much for sharing your knowledge and experience 😊

Thanks so much 🙏

Great

I am the CZcamsr who is happy to read your comment.

Lots of practice. I hope my new video helps and here is my new speaking book on Amazon www.amazon.com/dp/B0CK6YSS41/ref=sr_1_1?crid=Y6E7W0DF8V2J&keywords=ielts+speaking+success&qid=1696191109&sprefix=ielts+speaking+success%2Caps%2C243&sr=8-1

Yes

If you go to the main page, you will see a list of videos. 😊

After the introduction 😊

Thanks

👍 thanks

You are very welcome

Glad to hear it 🙂

6.5 :)

Before

👋 hello

Thank you for taking the time to comment. I'm glad you liked it.

You are very welcome

Greetings to you!

I'm not sure what you mean

Thank you very much for leaving a comment.

Thanks for commenting

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@@IELTSBandUp thanks

5.5

Looks great

Can you give some bands for this ,,?

@@eddieabbas2146 no it's much too short to give a score, sorry. Plus, it's just a template and usually these are what people use for a band 6 score. And also examiner's know that people memorize introductions so they don't really count for much of your score. It's the body paragraphs and how well you develop your arguments.

In your opinion is it good to start an introduction.

It's your ability to group stages if t here are a lot and your ability to explain each stage if there are only a few. I really need to make more videos, but I've just been busy.

Very good!

@@IELTSBandUp Thanks I Made It Up Myself. Will Be Taking Exams Next Saturday (15 April)

​@@utaibakram252oh, congratulations, what the results