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Maa-chanvn
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Registrace 10. 05. 2018
Translating vns around.
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Albatross Log #57 - The next day
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Sakuya meets Rui after last night's events.
Albatross Log #56 - A night patrol 2/2
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Sakuya during a night patrol, part 2 of 2
Albatross Log #55 - A night patrol 1/2
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Sakuya during a night patrol, part 1 of 2
Albatross Log #52 - Twins route end 1/2
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Twins' ending. Bad end & good end part 1
Albatross Log #49 - Icy Norths 2/2
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Sakuya and Kisara at the icy norths, part 2
Albatross Log #46 - A hidden reef
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A hidden reef on the way to the icy norths.
Albatross Log #45 - A shaman's hut 2/2
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Sakuya and the twins visit a shaman's hut, part 2
Albatross Log #44 - A shaman's hut 1/2
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Albatross Log #44 - A shaman's hut 1/2
Albatross Log #43 - A wrecked ship 2/2
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Albatross Log #43 - A wrecked ship 2/2
Albatross Log #42 - A wrecked ship 1/2
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Albatross Log #42 - A wrecked ship 1/2
Albatross Log #41 - Drinking with the twins
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Albatross Log #41 - Drinking with the twins
Albatross Log #37 - Twins route start
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Albatross Log #37 - Twins route start
Albatross Log #35 - The sea serpent 3/3
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Albatross Log #35 - The sea serpent 3/3
Albatross Log #34 - The sea serpent 2/3
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Albatross Log #34 - The sea serpent 2/3
Albatross Log #33 - The sea serpent 1/3
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Albatross Log #33 - The sea serpent 1/3
Albatross Log #32 - Searching the island 2/2
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Albatross Log #32 - Searching the island 2/2
Albatross Log #31 - Searching the island 1/2
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Albatross Log #31 - Searching the island 1/2
Albatross Log #30 - Sakuya and Kuro, 3/3
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Albatross Log #30 - Sakuya and Kuro, 3/3
You're a legend.
When you posting your vids, I am getting happy:)
Please could you upload Oretachi ni Tsubasa wa Nai - Under the Innocent Sky
Sorry, I'm still working on Albatross.
@@Maa-chan-hg3zi much appreciation my but i Hope you translate it if you have Time in the future Btw which one is a better vn in terms of story quality characters writing and dialogues Albatross or Asairo ?
That's like comparing apples and oranges. Both are good in their own ways. Asairo is an emotional story very Japanese-y. Albatross has dense prose about these sailors and their antics.
What is the reading of 邑 in 「俺が生まれた邑に」おおざと or むら?
Probably むら since おおざと refers to the 阝 radical. But jp dictionary also mentions ゆう, so I'm not sure. www.weblio.jp/content/邑
@@Maa-chan-hg3zi I've been also wondering what that particle 「かせ」at the first 5 minutes is. Besides all the alternative spellings and ateji, I think coming across dialectical forms is the most challenging thing about reading any VN, as I have no idea how to parse them. You a real one for even trying to translate one of Mareni's works, ong.
Thanks for the words. If you mean たなびかせ, it's the causative of たなびく verb.
Its about time! Thanks for the upload.. ❤
wow you're back
Thanks for your uploads after 4 months, big W
thanks!
sanks
Hmmm.. still waiting for the next part..
I'm working on it. Still going to take a while. And the strike hasn't gone away.
the highest of kino
也源太と右京の問答を景明はどんな気持ちで聞いていたのかと思うと、涙を禁じ得ない
Btw, I got a strike on part 18 of Albatross. Posted about it on twitter. twitter.com/maachanvn
Btw, I got a strike on part 18 of Albatross. Posted about it on twitter. twitter.com/maachanvn
is there any way you can upload it somewhere?
When the strike expires, it should become available again.
@@Maa-chan-hg3zi hello, do you plan on making patch out of that translation?
@fwarinben7418 yes, but there's still a lot left to translate.
@@Maa-chan-hg3zi Did you approximately estimate how much you translated/how much left(in%)?
Thank you very much! Could you tell, do you use machine translation hooked up with OCR? If so, could you please share this software with us?
I translate it manually, on Aegisub itself.
Thanks for the video, hope u can finish this translation of this beautiful VN, again thanks for the hard work..
love watching your translation vids, keep going
この戦闘、技量自体は一ヶ尾 瑞陽の方が上ってのが面白いんよなぁ
Thank you for doing these still! I look forward to binging this soon. Just thought I'd throw this out there. Been interested in this series forever but know it will never officially get a release.
What program do you use to edit these videos? I'm considering trying my hand at translating like this as well.
I use avidemux for editing. Don't know if it's the best for this.
@@Maa-chan-hg3zi Thank you.
ei cara, como anda o processo de tradução? espero poder jogar o jogo em breve \o/
この神曲よ!!ほんま好きこのシーン
Hi sorry if I sound entitled but I'm curious if you're also interested in doing Cross+Channel? It's a crime to humanity it isnt translated properly.... Good luck to all your projects 👌
Nah, it already has 3 different translations.
@@Maa-chan-hg3zi what about Sakura no Uta - do you know if anybody is translating that one? Really hope to read it one day.
I think no one is translating that. You can check vndb to see if there's a translation.
@@Maa-chan-hg3zi do you know why? It seems like a very popular visual novel that many people enjoyed, so I am surprised that nobody has wanted to translate it.
Maybe because it's a long vn. Sorry for the late reply.
How did you get it translate
I translated it myself but only the trial.
獅子吼やたら煽ってるけどサシで雷町に勝てる自信あるんか…?
16:35かわいい
Hello Maaachan, my name is Roma and I saw in your YT comments that you were working on an english patch of Asairo and you had finished the proofreading and were going to add things back in the game. I was curious if I could get an update on how that was going, Thank You :) and also, as a side note, is there any easier way to get in contact with you, maybe like discord? let me know, once again, Thank You :)
Putting the text back will still take some time. And I sent you a dm on twitter about discord.
Everything okay with you ? No updates lately.....
I'm fine, thanks for asking. Still working on the remaining parts.
@@Maa-chan-hg3zi Glad you're alive On that note : how big script of Albatross actually is ? Vndb says : VN is about 60 hours long. Quite behemoth for such a writing especially
I'm not sure about how many hours, but jpdb says it has ~300000 words.
@@Maa-chan-hg3zi Hm, big. Understandable Btw, how is progress (editing/proofreading/Qc) on Asairo going ? You found people who can help you to put everything in game /help with technical aspects ?
Asairo is being worked on. Still going to take a while.
Keep it up please! Appreciated Muramasa and I appreciated this.
MODEROIDで三世勢州千子右衛門尉村正がプラモ化するらしく楽しみすぎる 電磁抜刀姿勢させたい
Since you're putting this on CZcams instead of making a patch, I do have a question. What happens to adult scenes? Do you just cut them out? Also, why CZcams
I'm skipping the H scenes. If I leave them, I might get a strike from yt. And on yt, it's easier to show the overall progress IMO.
Nice 'translation' that mixes past tense and present tense in the very first scene ("there once was a ship...this ship continues its voyage). Mareni is crying tears of blood. "They are dark wings, achieved by layers of a dark green, deep, and almost transparent" -- what exactly is being 'achieved' here? The darkness or the winginess of the wings? "A port city at the time it starts bustling, like the sea corals spreading their tentacles and welcoming the evening." -- You know, in English sentences actually have to connect to one another. You can't just hang random descriptions that are unconnected to one another and expect it to read naturally although such prose may work in Japanese. "Drawing close to clients at street corners, prostitutes with experienced body movements" -- the syntactical flip here is so awkward. Why topicalize the action in front of the agents of the action? And you're describing prostitutes cavorting around sensually with clients yet the language you use is so unsensual. "It is a mundane port city's activity lacking in novelty, but the twilight is granting the tone of a magic lantern's picture." -- in Japanese this is such a beautiful description but you render it in a way that is the epitome of mundane. And "granting the tone" is such an awkward construction (also with a verb like 'granting' you have to specify the receiver of whatever is being granted: "granting IT the tone...") . Consider the following alternatives: bestow, immerse, convey etc... -- all work better than 'granting'. "And she is a mysterious figure from behind, further heterogeneous and isolated inside all this." -- what does this even mean? How can a person be 'heterogeneous'? Is that like being a heterosexual? Are you saying she has a split personality, that she has many heterogeneous personalities inside her? Jesus Christ. "There are people and more people crossing paths and almost touching the tops of their shoulders." -- Firstly, what sort of grammatical construction is "people and more people". I've heard of "more and more people" but not "people and more people" -- such an awkward way to render 人と人. Secondly, the syntax of this sentence makes it seem like something else is "touching the tops of their shoulders" rather than each other's shoulders. You could have just used the common expression: "rubbing shoulders" to solve all problems here. "A clatter a bit too crammed" -- do you mean "clutter" and "cramped"? Though these aren't particularly good word choices either. "This figure, this figure from behind, as if choosing beforehand the moment, aah, she turns over." -- you are not skilled enough pull off Free Indirect speech. This does not sound like natural English at all. Not gonna crit the rest because there are too many English travesties to deal with. I suggest you get way better at English before attempting any sort of translation. Especially a translation of Mareni. Or Shuumon Yuu for that matter, but too late for that I guess. And if I see anyone whining at me for hurting this poor widdle Fan TLer's feelings with harsh critique or telling me stupid shit like "then why don't you go TL this VN for free huh?!", only thing I have to say is: Jesus Christ people, have some god damn standards.
Thanks for the comment. I will work to improve the translation.
You need to have some fucking self-awareness. You are, objectively, being needlessly antagonistic and cruel to someone blatantly not presenting their project as definitive- it’s literally just a step for accessibility. You aren’t Terence Fletcher, you’re a nobody projecting personal and linguistic insecurities brought out by a low-budget eroge. To own being the “acrid enlightened critic” in this context, with your credentials (nonexistent) is hilarious and sad
As i said, you did a fantastic job translating Shumon writing into English. Would love if one day you picked up itsusora ♥️
Is there a place where I can find this fansub version?
Well, not yet. I'm still translating it.
Im gonna watch this when i eat dinner tonight, i have no idea what this is but it looks unique
Think you could ever try translating Kajiri Kamui Kagura? There’s alot of undone vns made by Masada
Nah, it's too long and uses archaic Japanese.
@@Maa-chan-hg3zi understandable, figured to at least try and ask SOMEONE to anyways!
Thanks So how difficult are you finding this tl wise? Like other than the purple prose what else do you think is difficult to tl?
Hard asf. Sentences are too long and confusing.
So how difficult was this to tl overall? Like how I heard a lot of meanings would be lost in an tl
Outside the wordplay, nothing very difficult *overall*. There's lots of slice of life, dialogue, etc. Now, about the wordplay, well, I did the best I could. 😅
@@Maa-chan-hg3zi you did a fantastic job. Ty. You even helped me associate certain kanjis to its meaning
You are doing god's work
Surely you don't like easy tasks. :> But though it's fuckin' crazy , luck to you in working on this one :3
I wish you success.
Wow!
hi you asked me on reddit to see if i could help you with adding the translation your currently working on back into the game wanted to let you know i sent you an email about it
oh you helped Maa-chan?
Amazing work on this translation! Btw have you read Dies irae by chance? It's a chuuni work that's similar to Muramasa, you might like it
Man I love Dies irae, truly one of the most chuuni things ever
Is this not a chuunige? I thought thats all propeller made
AFAIK, Shumon Yuu's works aren't chuuni (I might be wrong. I haven't read them all). There aren't superpower battles in Asairo. It's a nakige/utsuge.
@@Maa-chan-hg3zi I think only Itsusora of all his works is the chuunige with crazy battles and so on
You ever thinking about translating another visual novel? Your on asairo and muramasa were great
Your work on*
Maybe, but I'm still proofreading Asairo's translation.
@@Maa-chan-hg3zi okay, nice to see you’re still going😊
リズベルかわいい
Did I missed or you didn't play Muramasa and Kanae route?
I translated only Ichijou's route.
@@Maa-chan-hg3zi ah okay 👍
Did you ever think about turning this into a translation patch? I think you would find many more thankful readers
Yes I did, but there's the H scenes left to translate. Still working on those.
@@Maa-chan-hg3zi Nice. Can't wait to read it
@@Maa-chan-hg3zi How it is going, if I may ask ?
Still working on it. Proofreading is taking more time than I thought lol.
@@Maa-chan-hg3zi Good to hear. Yeah. And inserting text in game sure is headache in itself (that's always takes a long time in other translation projects ), I assume Nevertheless, the most important is that all text is translated, so....good luck!