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This is a good story

I hope this is AI narration.... if it's a human it's pitiful.....meh... Good story ruined..

Agro squirrel is the goat because he narrates with his own voice .

It is evident that this text was written by an AI. The repetitive use of the same words and the inconsistent timeline are clear indicators. For instance, it initially states that there are no cities, only to later mention the existence of cities. Additionally, the narrative suggests that it takes years to build a single ship, yet an entire fleet is constructed within weeks. All of this occurs within a single person's lifetime, with no mention of civilian oversight in a predominantly military-controlled scenario. The text also demonstrates a lack of understanding of human nature and the fundamental infrastructure required to create something from nothing. There are numerous other issues, but these points highlight the primary flaws. As a writer I find this insulting.

It's decent at first, but get pretty repetitive. All three acts are the same thing said three times. Even when Vaugh gives a speech, it's the same speech, and the narrator ends the sentence describing the same image of him in the same way. Cool idea, but needs varied storytelling. ...and maybe a human narrator instead of AI.

I like this one. Also, I also wonder what galactic civilization we “Iraq” for the sake of “peace”. And oil. But also “peace”.

Now that we realize we have strategic military galactic strength We become expansionists again, here we come. Who are the next "native Indians"?

Someone really Ought to Pay Attention. The idiot Loop's make this impossible to listen to...... thumbs down block.

why is this a repeat for an hour?

This was a good story

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Hideously awful Robot voiced crap!

i hate when they repeat a whole phase

I had to stop. Why is everything narrated in present tense? Is the author a highschool kid? Try past tense sometime

They decided to fortify the camp? Why didn't they just leave in the rescue ship? They git rescued twice? LOL!

Humans humaning and not being space orks ? Russia being the place of 1st contact and not America... yeap its worth a listen just for the fresh perspective on spacefiction

just great - crappy AI & a stuttering reading. very poorly edited/done

Completely redundant. The beginning was repeated three times over 30 minutes and this continued in other portions of this story.

wtf is this

The UN being effective.. FTL and aliens talking with our issues is more believable. Diverty as an inherit good.. sigh. Gave up