1.) A visual aid would be very beneficial due to the amount of information given, so it may be confusing to understand without representation. 2.) Although its a rough draft, the switching around between people is distracting from the information given. For the final I would recommend string the clips together better. 3.) When it switches over to Conner, its a weird angle and it is a bit quite. Also the hand gestures are distracting. Overall you have a very good understanding of the material, you just need to do a few things to spice it up.
-I think that you should include more enthusiasm in your voice in the introduction. This will make your video more interesting and less like a lecture. You could also include some music in the background. -It was slightly hard to follow along with your video due to a lack of visual aids. Include some pictures to better explain your topic. - The switch to Connor at the end is kind of abrupt and awkward. Include smoother transitions so that it will not be distracting. I like the amount of info you guys included - it is a lot :)
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This was more of a biography.. Thank you.
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Didn't really explain anything about positivism.
Thank you! Very helpful!
1.) A visual aid would be very beneficial due to the amount of information given, so it may be confusing to understand without representation. 2.) Although its a rough draft, the switching around between people is distracting from the information given. For the final I would recommend string the clips together better. 3.) When it switches over to Conner, its a weird angle and it is a bit quite. Also the hand gestures are distracting. Overall you have a very good understanding of the material, you just need to do a few things to spice it up.
-I think that you should include more enthusiasm in your voice in the introduction. This will make your video more interesting and less like a lecture. You could also include some music in the background. -It was slightly hard to follow along with your video due to a lack of visual aids. Include some pictures to better explain your topic. - The switch to Connor at the end is kind of abrupt and awkward. Include smoother transitions so that it will not be distracting. I like the amount of info you guys included - it is a lot :)