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Thanks for this wonderful sci-fi Story!!! I enjoyed the strory.

Yeah it's a nice piece of revenge. But these so called Soran conquerors that are so goddamned smart should have seen right through a derelict "human made" battleship completely armed to the teeth with a vengeful AI to boot; all in order to grace the halls of their museum and avenge dead humans....

So this story literally demotes the human military leader from Vice Admiral at he beginning of the story to commander at the end. It sure would be nice if you actually reviewed your own stories before posting them on CZcams. AI stories are so boring and literally not imaginative

Haven't met our Resident & Kumala yet I guess.😂

As usual piss poor Ai and the volume went away about 2/3 of the way through the story

Story is repetitious and feels incomplete. So the aliens won. What happened next. I presume the aliens having what they wanted and the humans having lost had an armistice. Something along the lines of what happened in the korean war. Maybe not a fractious as that situation is. But I doubt humans forgave the aliens or had much tolerance for them afterwards. There would be an established border with mines drones and more warships esp on the human side .The aliens probably had a lot of warships on their side at first as the armistice dragged on and there was no sign of any violation on the human side they withdrew most of theirs while the humans built bases and built more warships much more sophisticated ones based on the reverse engineered tech from the aliens. It has been 30 years and probably the humans have caught up to the aliens by now in numbers and tech and could probably invade and beat them but choose not to. More than likely the humans have expanded their territory in another direction away from these aliens. Remember the human fleet was destroyed. It seems Bailey surrendered at the end as she survived and that is laudable. Things would have been much worse if she and her troops had all been killed. Humanity would not have forgiven that. But I doubt the humans would have been as forgiving as the story author said regardless. The humans likely have expanded their empire in other directions. Humans do not like to lose and I would not have the optimism the story author has. If I had written this story the humans would have had a tense border with the Draconids and likely be ahead militarily and technologically at this point. I would not have had them attack the Draconids. I would have had a common threat appear and the humans would have to decide if they could put their past resentment of the Draconids aside and help them or let them be eaten up by this threat and then taken it on by themselves.. That would have made for a much more compelling story imo.

The stories are becoming repetitive and weak plot lines. This story was just bad

The same things being said over and over

Story told twice? Why?

"Peace cannot be kept by force; it can only be achieved by understanding." - Albert Einstein. 3000 quatloo's the humans cannot be contained!

nothing like the title

Magastructure!!!! Magastructure!!!

Be honest buddy, with that opening? This story was written by chatgpt not you.

That face that the narrator cannot pronounce megastructure is disgraceful.

Wait... a MAGA structure. Did someone freeze Trump? Or is it a clone like the boys from Brazil?

3 mins in and it makes no sense.

The AI needs to learn how to read.

So the AI got told to fill 22 min or so and did so by repeating blocks of the story eh? Cute.

edit err

Carter should have mentioned the new weapon during the debrief, instead of bringing it up as an afterthought later. Dummy!

There’s no sound

ChatGPT written and AI/TTS narrated. If you are going to use tts, please please choose a voice that pronounces words correctly. There are SOOOO many that was misproniunced! Bomb-bers! WTF!!

As the aliens landed one walked out and seen a Dove fly by...it yelled....ACK ACK ACK and pulled out a laser gun and incinerated the Dove....lol

Do the principals of HFY Story really believe that Earth would call a newly developed colony "New TERROR"? Are the people (AI BOTS) so inane that they expect that readers would accept this insult? You talk about "ponds" of the Council. Did you really mean "Pawns", or is this another insult? Good story, ruined by the printed words shown.

Dump the bot and read it yourself. I have listened to enough bastardized English !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Really you need to get a new captioning system

You keep saying races, but I think you mean species.

I have played this game 3 times

It's tagged Reddit but has no link to the story, probably stolen.

Starting to notice a pattern with these short stories...massive battle, loss, star killer. Pretty much the same process for a dozen stories.

E.E."Doc" Smith's Sunbeam

What voice model is being used?

This Video is not completely in Focus!!!

"indomitable spirit" is in every one of your stories. Are you some kind of press corp for humans? And your AI needs to go back to school. Geeze people dont you listen to these before you publish?